Hey,
Your FF was recommended to me by Kalayani, Kals82. I just caught up on the last two chapters and it was really entertaining. I get a lot is going on or rather was going on along with Anu's birthday π.
Yes you do have a way to play around and bring out the comic element in a dialogue.
Loved the Nakli Bachhe bit.
Just wanted to drop by and say you are such a good writer, and this is from only last two chapters.
I do plan on catching up on the rest and talk to you then.
Best of luck.π