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Originally posted by: metoyou

Mein yahan hoon! Hola Green! What's up? I see another update. BTW, I PM-ed you first and then I saw that there is another part. Okay chalo, let start.



Part 29
"Hello? Mrs Khan? Ji - I thought I'd better inform you (Good move Prasad) 👍🏼

his own forehead creased with tension as he made up the story on the spot (And we all know how much he hates to lie)

"KYA?!" Dilshaad screamed into Prasad's ear (Hahahaha! Poor Prasad...) 

"Um, that was my uh, sister...? I promised to get her the new iPhone, so that's why she's so... happy (LOL...the staff of this office, I tell you!) 😆

Or was it sarcasm he had failed to catch again...? (Hemant...you need some workshops about sense of humor/sarcasm)

Dilshaad walked in determinedly (Aha, ammi to the rescue!)

to my house tomorrow evening for my son's nikaah with Zoya Farooqui (WHAT?!) 😲

"So is the party still on...?" Mrs RK asked tentatively (RK mom is right...uss bechari cake ka kya ghalati hain) 😛😊😆

What had he just done?! (Don't think about it and just do it)




Green! My dear! Come on yaar, please do not feel guilty! I was never mad at you in the first place, so stop with the guilt feeling 🤗You have some very nice readers since they did not attack me with PM's saying to stay away from Asad and Zoya, hahaha! Matlab, its all good :)
I have to say that this office has the most weirdest, craziest and random staff ever! All of them are so unique in their own way, some good, some bad and some even hilarious. 
Lets take for example Prasad; quite a smart move to inform Dilshaad. Little did he know she would barged in to the office like that and announce their nikaah! Oh boy! This is just too much for Mr. Khan to handle. We all know Zoya would not have a problem with it, well even if she has I bet she won't let it show or make it obvious but he... 
I am sure even at their nikaah something funny. unusual will happen for sure. Nothing can go right when it comes to AsYa 😛 
One more thing: RK mom and I love to eat cake so yes, she was damn right to cut the cake! 


Lets hit it to the next part! 



Ahh so sorry! Keep forgetting to reply to this comment. Glad to know all is good despite my goof up haha. Yeah, AsYa have to have ridiculous things happening around them, or what's the point :p Glad you liked it Narges (:
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

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Well since you are going to be busy for a while and not update i think its the perfect opportunity to unres before you update next and my reses keep on piling😆😆😆BTW i am down with cold and still unresing see I love my green how very much😳😳😳

First of all many many congratulation Green on winning those awards🥳very well deserved awards and I am very very happy for you🤗🤗
As I have already told you I think "Through The Monsoon" is your best work and my personal favorite and it feels very good to see it get so much love😳😳😳
And about the "Witty Author" well you are the undisputed queen here my hahaha green😆😆😆

Chalo enough of my bakwaas now let us talk about the update shall we?😳😳

"Hello? Mrs Khan? Ji, main Prasad bol raha hoon. There's an issue at the office actually, I thought I'd better inform you... Woh immigration officer phir se aagaya hai yahan, aur woh..." Prasad began to whisper into his phone urgently, when he caught Mr Bhatawdekar staring at him curiously
Ah smart move Prasad...If there is anyone who can help asad and zoya in this situation its Dilshad...She has always been their saviour and I expect it will be the same this time too.

Mr.Khan is quick...Good excuse for not wearing the rings😆😆😆

"KYA?!" Dilshaad screamed into Prasad's ear, as she caught the sound of her own son's voice declaring his engagement with... Zoya?
Haha poor Prasad and his poor eardrums😆😆I expect Dilshad to squeal like a child on hearing such news..reminded me of time when zoya nd asad retunred from airport and Dilshad was squealing with joy about the news of their engagement😆😆

"Um, that was my uh, sister...? I promised to get her the new iPhone, so that's why she's so... happy. I'm sorry for interrupting, go ahead and do... whatever it is that you're doing," Prasad answered uncertainly as he disconnected the call
OMG this had me in splits🤣🤣One of the funniest excuse in the story so far...
i laughed out so loud that my brother started staring lol😆😆

"And according to my calculations and your research, it's been only a week since Zoya joined the office, the very day of your first visit. Iska matlab hai... Zoya still has another two legal days in this country. Isliye, I would like to invite everyone here... except for maybe those two men who've obviously gotten into some trouble, to my house tomorrow evening for my son's nikaah with Zoya Farooqui," Dilshaad invited happily, leaving out Vijay and Vinod who were scowling openly.
Dilshad to the rescue again as i expected...Dilshad is a smart woman and a calm one too.She knows how to act in a high pressure situation.I see where Mr.Khan gets this trait.
Kya baat hai kal shaadi announce kar di dilshu momma ne...She is the ultimate cupid😳😳

Asad watched Zoya smile and walk forward, and he stared blankly at her back, trying to make sense of what had just happened. But he really couldn't. What had he just done?!
This is exactly what I am thinking...Asad miyan bure phase ab kya hoga 😆😆😆

Amazing update Green it was super funny and for me Prasad was the highligh for this update😆😆😆

P.S.-I am actually feeling better after reading the update again while commenting😳😳I told you na you and your updates make me feel good😳😳

Love you loads Green❤️❤️




As i said humara dil se dil ka connection hai..I know what you think and how you think😆😆
And man i know you very well you are sucker for happy endings and so I know it is going to be happy ending.Also I know you insist on happy ending in your stories coz its the perfect escape from harsh realities😳😳

Hehe your loyal readers will kill me if I start writing your stories😆😆😆Waise bhi I suck at creative writing and well no can match up to you see...so i would rather remain alive and continue being one of your loyal readers...
A heart to heart at the end of the story is kind of your MO...the one near Asad's SUV in 'Mangalpur Madness' and the one on bench in 'Through the Monsoon' have been one of my favorite updates in your story so i do expect a heart to heart 😳😳As i said I know you well😳😳



Finally got down to replying this! So sorry for the delay Anu. I'm really happy TTM won too, a lot more thought definitely went into it than MM haha. I've still yet to reach a heart to heart stage in this story! Looks like I've made Asad extra stubborn this time hahaha. Let's see where their heart to heart happens this time... or if it happens at all :p Love you!
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Hi !😃

Udapte soon please 😉
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First of all what's up with the paper stuff...
And yipeee we got an update
Loved it
Plzzz nikaah karwa do na
Plzzz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
UNRES on page 50 for part 30
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Originally posted by: metoyou

Hola Green! Remember me? I do remember you. But I did not remember that I had a res which I had to unres. Bad reader I am, I tell you! You updated and mujhe yaad aaya ki, damn it...I still have to unres! So here...finally, after a dew decades. 



Part 30
I guess it'll be a nakli... nikaah (Nakli...my foot!)

Then after having a nakli nikaah, we can have a nakli suhaag raat, and a nakli honeymoon, and yes, nakli kids! (LOL...explain please how this one is possible...LOL) 😆t

"Don't what the hell me you big jerk! (The girl's audacity) 

"Ammi woh actually..." (His signature line)



I had to re-read this part to fresh up my mind. How could I forget that they are this stage: the nakli nikaah. Who are you joking with, Mr Khan? You know, Zoya knows and we all know that there is no such thing as a nakli nikaah, so listen to your heart, confess your feelings and make her your dulhan 😊😳 Actually, to be very honest, I am more interested in their nakli SR 😛 Just imagine ...
No but seriously, I really wonder what kind of ajeeb aur khareeb situations will occur with this whole nakli thing and all. Mom and I are also invited, how sweet of Dilshaad. They love to see me heartbroken nah 😭

Up to the next part. No, some things have not changed: I still unres after ages and I still dont read the next update. 



Haha better late than never!! Asad is adamant to maintain the nikaah as a nakli one for now, so let's see :p See you at the next update soon then!! (: Glad you liked it (:
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updateee...!
pleeeaaasseee...!
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Hello! Welcome to the nakli nikaah of Asad and Zoya (:

Yes Boss: Part 32

"Mr Khan, bohut bohut mubarak ho aapko. Sorry for arriving a little late, I hope I haven't missed the ceremony," Mr Bhatawdekar greeted Asad as he shook his hand firmly. Dolly offered her congratulations and shook his hand as well, as Asad kept an unsure smile plastered on his face. He found himself adjusting the collar of the forest green sherwani that his mother had bought for this occasion, unable to quit his nervous habit.

"Oh don't worry, you're just on time, Qazi Saheb didn't arrive too long ago either. My sister has just gone to escort Miss Fa... um, Zoya from her room. They should be here soon..." Asad clarified, trailing off as a hush spread across the guest, everyone's attention at the room door that had just opened. After a short pause, Zoya walked out of the room, with Najma and Anu on either side of her, and Monica, Narges and RK following close behind her.

Asad swallowed slowly as he took in the breath-taking sight of Zoya in a beautiful green sharara, matching his clothes, with her dupatta covering her face slightly from the top, her quivering lower lip visible below it. He watched Dilshaad walk up to them and run her hand lovingly over Zoya's face, before taking her arm from Najma and leading her to the platform put up in the centre of the living room for the nikaah.

"Bhaijaan, umr bhar dekhte rehna Mona darling... I mean bhabhi ko, but for now, at least take your seat for the nikaah first," Ayaan commented from behind him playfully, earning laughter from whoever was within earshot. Asad quickly tore his eyes away from Zoya and stared at the ground, biting his lower lip a little as he tried to stop himself from smiling. Ayaan grabbed his arm and led him towards the platform, as the rest of the men, including Prasad, Hemant and Mr Bhatawdekar followed suit behind them. Dolly walked over to the other side where the rest of the women were, as the crowd naturally began segregating gender-wise.

Zoya climbed carefully onto the platform, staring intently at the mehndi on her hands once she was seated. She had just put it on in the morning, in a small function with only Dilshaad, Najma and a few other people that Dilshaad had invited, like Anu, Monica, Narges and RK. They'd all chosen to stay the whole day thereafter and help with the rest of the preparations for the evening.

She stared at the skin between her index finger and thumb, where the mehndiwali had very artistically hidden Asad's name, written in Urdu. The girls had giggled uncontrollably at that point, laughing about how Asad would be unable to find his name and he'd have to give Zoya whatever she wants. Najma had gone to find Asad after that, to come and look for his name, but he wasn't in his room. When Najma called him up, he had told her that he'd gone to do some urgent work, making Dilshaad really mad. Zoya ignored the prickling that began at her eyes when Najma conveyed the news to everyone. She was sure his urgent work had something to do with that Mr Tripathi and those wretched papers.

Zoya sighed softly and clenched her palms into tiny fists before resting them in her lap, trying to shake those thoughts out of her head. She continued staring at her lap, refusing to look up. She hadn't seen him since last night, after their encounter. He didn't come the whole day, no matter how many times Dilshaad called him to yell at him. At one point of time in the day, she was sure he'd run away somewhere to hide from the police and avoid the nikaah. She was wrong though, because apparently he came home an hour before this, and stayed in his room till the guests arrived. She hadn't seen him because she was in her own room, getting ready, and she was just getting all the updates from Najma.

Once the crowd had settled down, the Qazi Saheb began some prayers. Zoya found herself drawing small circles on her thigh as she contemplating whether or not to look up. She could see Asad's knees, since he was sitting across her, but that was all. Suddenly, she saw Asad's hand rest on his knee tentatively, before his index finger lifted a little, pointing upwards. Oh, so he knew exactly where she was looking, and where he'd prefer for her to look. Zoya huffed slightly before turning her head away completely, choosing to stare at the cushion on her side instead.

"Kya aapko yeh nikaah qubool hai?" the Qazi Saheb asked Asad, after confirming the sum for Mehr. Asad stared intently through the translucent gold curtain separating him and Zoya, willing Zoya to look up at him. He could hear the Qazi Saheb repeat the question, but Asad remained mum, and murmurs began to start around the room.

"Bhaijaan, kya hua?" Ayaan hissed into his ear from the side, but Asad remained stoic, staring at the curtain continuously. The Qazi Saheb asked the question for the third time, a little more insistent this time, when Zoya finally looked up, worry evident on her face.

"Qubool hai," Asad finally announced confidently, when Zoya's eyes finished tracing its way to his face, their eyes meeting through the glittery curtain. Zoya blinked away the tears of relief that flooded her eyes as soon as the sound of his husky acceptance entered her ears. She wasn't even sure why his rejection worried her so much... didn't she want to end the charade herself last night?

"Kya aapko yeh nikaah qubool hai?" the Qazi Saheb asked Zoya in turn, snapping Zoya out of her thoughts. She looked at the Qazi Saheb dazedly for a moment, before turning back to Asad. He nodded at her ever so slightly as soon as she made eye contact with him, and her lips naturally parted at that time, poised to answer.

"Qubool hai," Zoya whispered, as she openly drowned in his intense gaze. The guests erupted into a buzz of excitement as congratulatory greetings filled the air, while Asad and Zoya continued staring at each other through the curtain with bated breath, as the gravity of what had just transpired began to sink into them.

XXX

I know it's a short update... but I just wanted to end it there haha, seemed right (:
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I know i am like super late but you know my reasons but the first thing that I am doing after being finally done with my paper is unresing so that my wonderful Green can read my comment and can smile while doing so coz i definitely am smiling while typing this😳😳😳

Well since I have already made you wait so much I am not gonaa keep you waiting for any longer...let's talk about the update now😳😳

He found himself adjusting the collar of the forest green sherwani that his mother had bought for this occasion, unable to quit his nervous habit.
You know what I love about your writing so much is that you keep your characters true to the characters in QH..I love how you bring in their little habits and traits so that the readers can better connect and imagine that character and hats off to you for that...I can imagine Asad wearing a green sherwani and adjusting his collar so clearly as if he is standing right in front of me😳😳

Asad swallowed slowly as he took in the breath-taking sight of Zoya in a beautiful green sharara, matching his clothes, with her dupatta covering her face slightly from the top, her quivering lower lip visible below it.
HAHA my Green and her obsession with Green never fails to make me smile 😳
Poor Asad must be hard holding his breath while watching his musibeet dressed like fairy😳😳Green takes me back to Mangalpur days when Zoya waers the Green Sharara and Asad kept staring at her during the "Aa gale lag ja" song...Ah the memories😳😳

"Bhaijaan, umr bhar dekhte rehna Mona darling... I mean bhabhi ko, but for now, at least take your seat for the nikaah first," Ayaan commented from behind him playfully, earning laughter from whoever was within earshot.
Can i just hug you for this🤗🤗I am so glad that you didn't forget to mention Ayaan in the wedding coz there is no way I can imagine Asad getting married if Ayaan isn't there...I love you for not forgeting the important stuff man😳😳

Zoya climbed carefully onto the platform, staring intently at the mehndi on her hands once she was seated. 
I just loved the whole part where you described Zoya' feelings and showed how nervously she kept staring at her mehndi...It was so beautiful😳😳😳And the way she kept staring at her lap and refused to look up was so real and i felt that it was the most natural way to react in that situation.

Zoya found herself drawing small circles on her thigh as she contemplating whether or not to look up. She could see Asad's knees, since he was sitting across her, but that was all. Suddenly, she saw Asad's hand rest on his knee tentatively, before his index finger lifted a little, pointing upwards. Oh, so he knew exactly where she was looking, and where he'd prefer for her to look. Zoya huffed slightly before turning her head away completely, choosing to stare at the cushion on her side instead.
These lines are one of the most beautiful lines in the story so far.These lines are subtle and yet so powerful😳😳And the whole idea of zoya not looking up but figuring out what asad wants just by looking at his fingers is very very beautiful,different and new.When I read these lines for the first time I was surprised how someone can think so something so subtle and portray it so beautifully...
I know you pretty well but still you manage to surprise me everytime Green and with just small little things and i love how your stories aren't about grand gestures but subtle ones and how you manage to make little things look so grand and sweet and make us go aww every single time...
You are just fantastic Green the best and I never smile so much as I do while reading your stories..they make me feel good,alive,happy😳😳😳and for that I would like to give you a big round of applause👏..

Zoya blinked away the tears of relief that flooded her eyes as soon as the sound of his husky acceptance entered her ears. She wasn't even sure why his rejection worried her so much... didn't she want to end the charade herself last night?
He nodded at her ever so slightly as soon as she made eye contact with him, and her lips naturally parted at that time, poised to answer.
 while Asad and Zoya continued staring at each other through the curtain with bated breath, as the gravity of what had just transpired began to sink into them.
As I said above you make little things look so grand and portray even the smallest of gestures and feelings so beautifully😳😳
Zoya blinking away her tears of relief to Asad assuring her with his slightest of nods to them just staring at each other trying to understand the gravity of the situation was just so beautifully written😳😳😳

Green I don't have enough words to describe how beautiful and touching this update was I will just say i was smiling through when i read it and while typing my comment...
Thanku for making my time so beautiful with this lovely update

Love you loads Green❤️❤️



Edited by anushreemishra - 10 years ago
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AsYa marriage...
itni jaldi...😉
lets celebrate...
yawn...yawn...🥳
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