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ArHi FF - The Last Espoir ~Chapter 4 A & B~ Pg 43 - 26|04|14 (Page 25)

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Posted: 19 February 2014 at 6:33am | IP Logged
Oh.. Well glad to know that you are okau now! :D The update was fanstatic! Tc. <3

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Posted: 19 February 2014 at 6:35am | IP Logged

Awesome:-)

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Posted: 19 February 2014 at 6:55am | IP Logged
I just caught up with all three chapters of this wonderfully intriguing FF!
I love the way you have introduced your characters here, Khushi is obviously a lovable character here with no mysterious past or complexities. Arnav on the other hand is obviously going through something, his drinking pretty much outlines that and the prelude whereby he is trying to actually get rid of a memory that is bugging him. However, he ends up hurting an innocent soul that is Khushi by forcing himself on her and stealing her first kiss. I must admit I can never get enough of a remorseful ASR, so I can't wait to see how he will apologize for this catastrophic mistake of his or better yet how will he be able to explain himself to both Khushi and his very likable cousin "NK". How will this relationship evolve in time? And will he be able to make things better by giving her another kiss, the kind of kiss that she should have had as her first kiss! LOLEmbarrassed

Looking forward to the next chapter already, yeah! :-)

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Posted: 19 February 2014 at 7:23am | IP Logged
Arnav seem very depressed character, obvio have some past for sure,

and now I am curious how you will convert Khushi's fear and loathing into love

waiting for that 

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Posted: 19 February 2014 at 8:22am | IP Logged
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Plz Continue soonStar

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Posted: 19 February 2014 at 9:03am | IP Logged
Its good that Arnav is trying to apologize and I am sure he will do it soon in style. But what had happened to him Why he is shutting himself?

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Posted: 19 February 2014 at 9:15am | IP Logged
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Why does Arnav drink soo much ?? Shocked

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Posted: 19 February 2014 at 9:19am | IP Logged
Arnav doesn't come out from home in these past months?
what happened to him?
hope NK sort out the fear of khushi..

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