ArHi FF - The Last Espoir ~Chapter 4 A & B~ Pg 43 - 26|04|14 - Page 23

Poor arnav:-( thank god ratna with arnav in every situation a akash also with him.

Simply Amazing

Awww
Poor Arnav. I really like his family except for his chacha. Thank god for small mercies.
Hope he gets another chance to say sorry to Khushi

poor Arnav
he has to bear a lot in his childhood

bookmarking this one...
loved the beginning...

poor boy... must be hurt so much...

Nice update
it must be painful to lose your parents in such a small age feeling bad for Arnav

Beautifully written.. Very nice concept..

really nice😊

okay just completed reading the chappy n the scrap...
very intelligent writing i must say...
so arnav here is one despondent guy... lost all hope, the most successful n yet a failure at times...
n khushi a ray of sunshine... i thought she will be going to whisk away all the darkness n hopelessness from his life but their 1st meet... Oooh la la... what has he done... poor girl... he scared her out of her wits... hope his process of making amends speed up a bit...
n loved NK's character here... especially the mooh-bola bhai one.  hope nk scold him a good deal after knowing what he did to his sister. 

n yeah where is her jiji??? married or what???

n one more thing... im in love with this banner...
waiting for next part...