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~love never fails~ A SanDhir OS (Page 2)

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Posted: 06 January 2014 at 11:20pm | IP Logged
dis story made me emotionalCry...luvd Randhir's chrctr in it...u'hv done a fab job Thumbs Up

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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 12:39am | IP Logged
Im crying as im writing this post...this ws just...i cnt describe in words wht i felt while i ws reading it...it felt like someone close to my heart ws going thru this...it seemed so real...n d last line, where he promises dat shes d only girl who has ever touched his heart n is d only only one ever who would hav done dat...n dat he will see her again...my heart skipped a beat...just amazing!! U shud write more u noe...no matter wht, u hav a great talent...dnt let it go to waste...there r so many who will appreciate ur work...me being one of them...just continue writin, hon!! Its liberating!!Smile

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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 12:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by smileroy

dude u really. Don't knw d difference between a crap and a masterpiece...really..kitta Sai story ta..plzzz don't stop to write..i just loved it..at one Te j really cried..
babes i do know...im used to callin my work crap!! LOL awee thankyou for the beautiful comment i am glad it made u cry!Embarrassed my job is done!!Wink
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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 12:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aney.

dis story made me emotionalCry...luvd Randhir's chrctr in it...u'hv done a fab job Thumbs Up
I am glad u did..kinda wanted it to be shown completely from his point of view so only showed what he tot and was going through!! 

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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 12:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by soumeesg

Im crying as im writing this post...this ws just...i cnt describe in words wht i felt while i ws reading it...it felt like someone close to my heart ws going thru this...it seemed so real...n d last line, where he promises dat shes d only girl who has ever touched his heart n is d only only one ever who would hav done dat...n dat he will see her again...my heart skipped a beat...just amazing!! U shud write more u noe...no matter wht, u hav a great talent...dnt let it go to waste...there r so many who will appreciate ur work...me being one of them...just continue writin, hon!! Its liberating!!Smile
Awiee ur comment just made my day..!! i am glad this OS made u cry and it served it purpose...!! 
well i kinda am obssessed with sad stories that make u cry which always inspire me to write something crappy and senti which usually makes oders cry at times..!!!
i am happy to see that u will always support my stories...dats honestly damn sweet..!! 
the reason i quit writing is my lack of skill and ability to think... i donno somehw my writing inspiration is lost in the blue LOL 
i mite continue my writing when i finally get something to write about..!! :)

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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 2:19am | IP Logged
Oh girl you really made me cry Cry
It was really awesome..!

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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 3:52am | IP Logged
hey safruuHug
its awesome dear and im not getting any words right nowEmbarrassedBig smile
im crying while reading thisCry
pls do write more like this dearSmile

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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 11:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by supriya.ipkknd

Cry
Kyun kiya tune mere saath esa! Mere ache khaase mood ko barbaad kar daala! you blody sadist!
Cry

I love Walk to rememberCry

Fir bhi kyun kiya tune mere saath esa Cry

*regains composure*

Okay now.. back to ur story.. 
U call this crap? Sleepy Seriously? Either ur being too modest or ur really very stupid Sleepy Maaru teko?
Starting me.. I was like.. Not bad. But when the story progressed ... OMG.. I was close to tears re. 
The way you described the guy's feelings when he was proposing the girl... It was beautiful SaffuEmbarrassedCry
Ye--> "
She looked straight into my eyes, grabbing a huge chunk of my hair, pulling my face toward hers. Our lips met, it fit perfect together. There was so much love and emotion, this is the best kiss. I somehow  knew that it was going to be our last."

And my tears are just about to drop. CryCryCry I hate you. 
Here lies Sanyukta Randhir Shekhawat. A beloved daughter, a wife and a best friend. 
May you forever rest in peace."

'Sanyukta Randhir Shekhawat.. Amidst all the agony, this made me blushEmbarrassed

And his last lines...
"I'm sorry I haven't been back since your funeral. I just couldn't handle it then. I still don't think I can, but I needed to be near you. I'm really trying to move on. But you keep flooding my mind. I can't even look at another girl without thinking about you. And all the couples around me are a constant reminder of what we could have had. We should have been.
"I loved you so much and you just left me like it was nothing. I wanted a life with you. I know we were young but it would have worked...but life had it own things...!!
I would always Remember you...i will only love my sanyukta..noone else..I promise you that one day i will see you.!!" I shouted with tears running down for the millionth time that day.. 
__________

And I swear .. the tears are rolling. My mom thinks I have had a heart break and is enquiring if I have a boyfriend. 
Saffu.. U call this shit? ... Joota khayegi ya chappal. It was beautiful. 
The only thing is I couldn't imagine Randhir and Sanyukta in the story coz obviously.. Its very hard to imagine these egoistic creatures like this.. madly in love.. 
I just visualised it between me and Param... 
Saffu...Meko cold ho gaya roke.. I really hate you. 


Bas next time Tense aur typoes dekhle ek baar. Proof read to kiya kar aalsi! Ur lazier than meLOL

Bola tha nah kamini i am a sadist and if i hv written properly u should be ready with a box of tissues not my fault i warned u..!! i am so not stupid i am never satisfied with my work...!!! 
i am glad i liked it yaar... i finally converted for u only nah..!! who else...!! 
babes i am damn lazy i jzz changed the names a bit of the vocab and got bored and tot lemme jzz post it..!!! and wad part of me sayin it my 1st and last OS dint u get? ROFL
bt i am so happy with the effect it had on u... honest i guess i am the only one who didnt cry readin my own OS!!
bt i simply love OS with a bit sadness in it.. as i believe no story is complete without its share of unhappiness...!!!
and simply one of the best comments i hv received on this converted OS u made my day so thankyou!!
and finally I LOVE YOU too babes ROFL


Edited by forevermine - 07 January 2014 at 11:39am

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