Posted: 07 January 2014 at 11:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by supriya.ipkknd
Kyun kiya tune mere saath esa! Mere ache khaase mood ko barbaad kar daala! you blody sadist!
I love Walk to remember
Fir bhi kyun kiya tune mere saath esa
Okay now.. back to ur story..
U call this crap?
Seriously? Either ur being too modest or ur really very stupid
Starting me.. I was like.. Not bad. But when the story progressed ... OMG.. I was close to tears re.
The way you described the guy's feelings when he was proposing the girl... It was beautiful Saffu
She looked straight into my eyes, grabbing a huge chunk of my hair, pulling my face toward hers. Our lips met, it fit perfect together. There was so much love and emotion, this is the best kiss. I somehow knew that it was going to be our last."
And my tears are just about to drop. I hate you. Here lies Sanyukta Randhir Shekhawat. A beloved daughter, a wife and a best friend.
May you forever rest in peace."
'Sanyukta Randhir Shekhawat.. Amidst all the agony, this made me blush
And his last lines...
"I'm sorry I haven't been back since your funeral. I just couldn't handle it then. I still don't think I can, but I needed to be near you. I'm really trying to move on. But you keep flooding my mind. I can't even look at another girl without thinking about you. And all the couples around me are a constant reminder of what we could have had. We should have been.
"I loved you so much and you just left me like it was nothing. I wanted a life with you. I know we were young but it would have worked...but life had it own things...!!
I would always Remember you...i will only love my sanyukta..noone else..I promise you that one day i will see you.!!" I shouted with tears running down for the millionth time that day..
And I swear .. the tears are rolling. My mom thinks I have had a heart break and is enquiring if I have a boyfriend.
Saffu.. U call this shit? ... Joota khayegi ya chappal. It was beautiful.
The only thing is I couldn't imagine Randhir and Sanyukta in the story coz obviously.. Its very hard to imagine these egoistic creatures like this.. madly in love..
I just visualised it between me and Param...
Saffu...Meko cold ho gaya roke.. I really hate you.
Bas next time Tense aur typoes dekhle ek baar. Proof read to kiya kar aalsi! Ur lazier than me
Bola tha nah kamini i am a sadist and if i hv written properly u should be ready with a box of tissues not my fault i warned u..!! i am so not stupid i am never satisfied with my work...!!!
i am glad i liked it yaar... i finally converted for u only nah..!! who else...!!
babes i am damn lazy i jzz changed the names a bit of the vocab and got bored and tot lemme jzz post it..!!! and wad part of me sayin it my 1st and last OS dint u get?
bt i am so happy with the effect it had on u... honest i guess i am the only one who didnt cry readin my own OS!!
bt i simply love OS with a bit sadness in it.. as i believe no story is complete without its share of unhappiness...!!!
and simply one of the best comments i hv received on this converted OS u made my day so thankyou!!
and finally I LOVE YOU too babes
Edited by forevermine - 07 January 2014 at 11:39am