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ArHi FF #11: Desert Heat *Ch 24 Pg 1* (Next thread link pg 1) (Page 9)

xyzsm Senior Member

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Posts: 548

Posted: 06 January 2014 at 10:09pm | IP Logged
I can't believe rebel is dead...Cry...they tortured him...Cry
it was very emotional update...feeling so down...Cry

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dhanyac IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 January 2014 at 10:12pm | IP Logged
congrats 4 d new thread...
awesome update...
arshi together...
rebel is dead...
hate shyam...
thanx 4 d pm...

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jojo21 Senior Member

Joined: 09 December 2012
Posts: 372

Posted: 06 January 2014 at 10:14pm | IP Logged
Oh that was heart breaking! It was lovely that Arnav acknowledged Khushi's plight; after seeing her reaction to the children who were about to get married.  And Rebel...such a piece of this story a supporting character in this story that will definitely be missed. 

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Joarshi Goldie

Joined: 09 February 2013
Posts: 1212

Posted: 06 January 2014 at 10:14pm | IP Logged
awsome prt...happy tat they patchedup...
but feeling sad that rebel died...
waiting for nxt prt...
thks for the pm dr...

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A_BA IF-Rockerz

Joined: 06 January 2013
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Posted: 06 January 2014 at 10:15pm | IP Logged
That was the saddest update, but if completely understand your reasoning for it, no matter how sadCry
RIP rebel...he was truly a great companion for Arnav' and Khushi. 

The heat and passion between them is just too strong, but I'm glad they are both at a good place now. Can't wait for them to get to the north reaches but how they will get there will be interesting...looking forward to how they pass this journey without rebel. 

ShyamAngry It scares me that he's still kind of close to them most likely. 

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Rasgulla_sp IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 06 January 2014 at 10:16pm | IP Logged


You know what I liked the best about this chapter? Both understood the other without requiring words. Arnav understood Khushi's love for him over his distrust wrt the ring (he may disagree to her line of thinking like me is another thing) and she understood his lover for her over her distrust wrt Lavanya.

Also, I believe this one must be the only chapter in which they were over Rebel as two jovial friends without feeling each other sexually.

But their joviality was short-lived. We were with Rebel since the start of the story and.. Cry Par ussne Khushi se dosti aur Arnav se loyalty ka haq adaa kiya. He brought himself in the line of fire, literally Clap

Shyam cant handle the eternal scar Arnav has marred his face with. So, he decided to give Arnav an eternal scar too but one which would mar his very existence. Thank you Rebel. Thank you Heart

Child marriage, even when supposed to culminate only in adulthood, is wrong at so many levels. For Khushi, it snatched from her the right to choose her spouse, to be rightfully called Arnav's wife, to rightfully call him her husband, to truly have him write their names together with mehendi on her hand... Yeh din bhi aayega. I am hopeful. You dont write tragedies.

Though I will accept that I had expected more opposition to the anti-child marriage campaign  than what was shown.

ArHi are without food,  clothing, shelter and a ride. But they are together and I wish them all the luck.

Pls try and give at least 2 updates in a month. Plsss

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 07 January 2014 at 12:01am

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samarablog Senior Member

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Posted: 06 January 2014 at 10:26pm | IP Logged
aww...rebel is no more..
its sad..
the chapter was going so well, with them packing up and all..

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sumana561 Senior Member

Joined: 01 June 2012
Posts: 392

Posted: 06 January 2014 at 10:32pm | IP Logged
Nice update...the way arnav supported khushi against child marriage &explained her that he trusts her was awesome..happy that arshi united&arnav respects her decision..
Plz make arnav kill that snake fast...I hate him Angry
The ending was so sad..Rebel died..I still can't accept it.. Cry Cry
Arshi again have to go through tough time..

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