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ArHi FF #11: Desert Heat *Ch 24 Pg 1* (Next thread link pg 1) (Page 7)

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Posted: 06 January 2014 at 7:47pm | IP Logged
so Arnav finally understands what Khushi has been going through

crap Shyam killed Rebel, I could just bash his stupid face in

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Posted: 06 January 2014 at 7:57pm | IP Logged
Sad but very well penned down- 

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Posted: 06 January 2014 at 8:04pm | IP Logged

Feeling sad that Rebel has died...what's going to happen now?...brilliantly written...thanks for the PM

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Posted: 06 January 2014 at 8:24pm | IP Logged
TINA,
What can I say??
Just absolutely loved it and it was a fabulously written. 
Arnav saying Khushi as his wife and making her acceptance among the Rajputs easier and acceptable, Khushi's trauma at seeing a child marriage when she herself was a victim of the unwanted bondage, Arnav's realization of the true state of her heart, Shyam's burning anger seeking revenge to avenge his shameful defeat in the hands of the dark prince, Rebel giving its life to protect Khushi ( Rebel had always reminded me of Chetak, Rana Pratap Singh's stallion and it stood true to form ) and now they are in the desert left without anything and struggling for survival! A realistic portrayal of the times and life in the Thar. In fact I had been expecting the Royal soldiers to be tracking and following them all the time something along the lines of Louis La'mour novels!Wink Still it was a lovely and much awaited update.


And you get
                                  



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Posted: 06 January 2014 at 8:35pm | IP Logged
NICE UPDATE...PLEASE CONTINUE SOON

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Posted: 06 January 2014 at 8:37pm | IP Logged
Thanks for the PM

Sad about Rebel Confused

Precap says redcoats - who are they ?

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Posted: 06 January 2014 at 8:50pm | IP Logged
so much emotion in one damn update, i was bawling my eyes out when rebel died because he was more than just a horse, he was a companion and a friend. i was overjoyed when khushi and arnav finally got back to normal. i was enraged when i read shyam's name and i was truly devastated when rebel was shot. i was on the edge of my bed waiting for arnav and khushi to remain together and i was in pain when i thought of khushi's childhood marriage. i was on a ride for this chapter and you just hurdled every damn emotion in my way. please make this better. after all, there's always a rainbow after a storm. 

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Posted: 06 January 2014 at 9:01pm | IP Logged
oh so sad
poor rebel
thankx 4 pm

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