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ArHi FF #11: Desert Heat *Ch 24 Pg 1* (Next thread link pg 1) (Page 35)

Rattyswami Senior Member

Joined: 30 June 2013
Posts: 453

Posted: 03 February 2014 at 2:49pm | IP Logged
Waah waahClapwhat a fab update...

Rebel's murder and then Arnav's breakdown infront of Khushi was very well penned down.
The bond between Arshi felt like some sort of tangible entity..their every emotion just seems to leap out of the page...and for that the credit goes to you, TinaClap so congrats

Arnav's possessiveness and his insecurities about loosing his Khushi were so clear...
When Khushi remembered her fiance's name, she burst Arnav's little bubble of security...
After that point all of Arnav's actions betray his innermost FEAR...Loosing Khushi...

Arnav is already quite vulnerable right now as he thinks that he failed to protect Rebel and then Khushi gets hurt...
ASR can't help but feel helpless and unworthy of an Angel like her...
The fiance's name one again fuels ASR's insecurity...which he tries to overcome by getting physically intimate with his beloved...but Khushi's vow to sort things out before taking the next step, ruin his plan...
I think ASR just wanted to reassure himself that Khushi is still only his, no one else has any caim on her...

But later I think his silence can be attributed to his mind working up all different possibilities that could occur...Arnav never thought he would loose Rebel like this, but he did...he was caught of guard and even his best efforts couldn't prevent the inevitable from happening...then Arnav probably started thinking that what if something goes wrong and his Khushi is taken away from his? By her fance, Shyam, Aakash or any other unforseen enemy...the list is endlessShocked 

He probably spent all his time figuring out ways to stake his claim on Khushi before anybody else gets any such ideas in their headWink It could be a coincidence too, but I think that Arnav selecting a bridal lehenga for Khushi is a clear indication of his intentLOL
 I just love this sneaky ArnavWink He knew the significance of filling Khushi's maang with his blood very he purposefully marked her as his for life...

Thanks to all those blood angreez finally Arnav got the opportunity and excuse to claim Khushi as Mrs. ASRWink Challo woh Angreez kisi ke toh kaam aayeROFL

Now no ring or childhood promise can take his Khushi away from himDancing

Edited by Rattyswami - 03 February 2014 at 2:54pm

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l.savitree IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 03 February 2014 at 2:50pm | IP Logged
Fabulous & well written it
Eagerly waiting to read more

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Happytwinkle IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 February 2014 at 2:59pm | IP Logged
mindblowing update
loved it
thanks for the pm

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Hot.Pink.Heels IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 7649

Posted: 03 February 2014 at 3:17pm | IP Logged
So Arnav and Khushi are officially married now?! I'm excited to see how this new twist will effect their relationship. 
Do continue soon :)

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dumas IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 03 February 2014 at 3:25pm | IP Logged
loved the update marriage thumps engagement in every way in the world even in the past loved him him filling her mang and loved that he stopped when she wanted him to poor asr wanted to make sure and mark his territory awesome update loved it and the precap loved the change in to banner thanks for the pm.

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saarah96 Goldie

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Posted: 03 February 2014 at 3:30pm | IP Logged
brilliant update
loved the last scene,,ooh they are married now=]
how will khushi react now?
congrats for new thread=]

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bea_rom Senior Member

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Posted: 03 February 2014 at 3:58pm | IP Logged
OMG, what an update
so many things happened
what will happen now?
will khushi no longer go back to her former fianc?
did Arnav do this un purpose?

can't wait to read the next part
your stories are just EXCEPTIONAL 

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pinkly Goldie

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Posted: 03 February 2014 at 4:00pm | IP Logged

Loved it. Loved reading both parts. If started off with Maya sensing A and K were in trouble. As soon as they came to know, they split into two groups and were ready to go back. One should have such caring and trustworthy friends.


I was so worried for A and K, how will they travel without Rebel, food or water. Their journey was really heart wrenching. There is so much pure love. The way Khushi hid her discomfort and pain, so that Arnav is not worried about her. And as soon as Arnav came to know about her foot, he carried her through that treacherous path. Beautifully written. I loved their conversation about the baby.


Arnav was so jealous when he learnt the name of Khushi's fianc. I really appreciate Khushi's will power. She is trying hard to control their desire and passion to be one.


Arnav filled her maang with his blood. Awesome... Khushi considers herself married now. What value does the ring hold now...


Precap picture is perfect. The sindhoor looks prominent and the subtitle - "surrender to passion" is just right. Beautiful chapter. Will read it again and again...until next update.

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