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ArHi FF #11: Desert Heat *Ch 24 Pg 1* (Next thread link pg 1) (Page 22)

FeistyDewdrop Goldie

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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 11:31pm | IP Logged
the start has been too sexy... i was hyperventilating sooo much... 
they cant be without each other , m glad they are clear with their stand now...  
rebel is a true hero... his sacrifice should not go in vain... 

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sarthshru Senior Member

Joined: 15 June 2012
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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 12:25am | IP Logged
miss rebel..

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dima_a Goldie

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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 12:43am | IP Logged
Congrats on the new thread!

awesome update my dear... feel sad for the horse and the dangerous they are with shaym behind them...CryCryCry
Can't wait for the next update!

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mim15 Goldie

Joined: 28 February 2012
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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 1:15am | IP Logged
poor update...pls update soon...

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Jyo.Arshi.IPK IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 06 July 2009
Posts: 14907

Posted: 08 January 2014 at 1:30am | IP Logged

So finally ... YESSS ... Oh  NOOO ... tissues ready ... but I don't think I was prepared enough for Rebel's death !! he infact wasnt just their companion/protector but he was their cupid as well <3 if not for Rebel they wouldn't have had all those riding sessions !! ;) <3

But damn his final act was to jump in front of the bullet and take it on himself and thereby protect Khushi !! <3 he was ASR's true friend, protecting his master's lady love !! <3

I swear you bloody creep Shyam ... i will one day rip ur heart out and tear u limb to limb for doing this to Rebel !! how could u ?? and bloody twisted bas***d ... you wanted to kill Khushi coz u knew that would kill Arnav too !!

Now u wait ... you will get the worst death possible at the hands of the real prince !!! <3

Arnav's pain at the loss , Khushi's tears ... like you said T .. this death will bring them a lot closer than before ... Khushi wont let Arnav suffer this alone .. she is going to be his rock during this tough phase <3 plus the journey has turned more perilous nw ... them all alone with nothing to provide for them till they reach the northern ranges !!

But atleast now he trusts her intentions ... he knows her love is true <3 they are back to their old teasing self ... ASR knows that his Khushi is coming back to him as soon as she gets rid of the ring and the bond forced on her !!

The incident at the wedding ... it really rips open the pain and no one better than Arnav to understand that !! <3 so proud that they stopped it ... no child deserves to grow with that kinda burden whr they are tied to a person whom they barely know !!

Marriage is a matter of individual choice and no culture should be given the right to force it upon the person !!

ASR trying to make Khushi give in through his passionate assault but at the end he tells her that he wont touch her tells she begs him to do so ;) now thats gonna be interesting ... am sure Khushi will be made to sweat :P <3 and their talk about Lavanya ;) heart goes out to them ... Khushi knows by now that Arnav will never dream of another woman now that she has entered his world !! <3 she is the only one who holds his heart captive <3

All in all a beautiful update T and I loved it !! <3 keeps making me yearn for more !! <3 love you !! <3 hugs 

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divyaarnavsr Goldie

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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 1:45am | IP Logged
I realy loved the way hw u made him trust her again. . Its Jus superb. .and making her agree to stay fo d wedding nd tn he stayd back. .nd him wanting her so badly bt stil Holding back nd wants her whole heartedly. .its so manly and genuine. .
but rebel being killed [:'(]

Khushi is the only soul he have , to find love and solace. .thanx fo d pm. .eager fo update reading the precap

Edited by divyaarnavsr - 08 January 2014 at 1:44am

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Amanram IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 1:51am | IP Logged
Whist reading Desert Heat, I feel like I am watchin a movie with the plot unfolding in front of my eyes. Awesome storytelling!

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AnupamaJY IF-Rockerz

Joined: 19 January 2012
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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 2:13am | IP Logged
loooved the update

loved the morning scene
arnav backed off imediately when khushi hesitated

those girls fooled khushi to stay back for the wedding
arnav was waiting for khushi for 3hourz
rebel didnt eat the apple which was given by arnav but when khushi gave he ate

and arnav was so jealous of rebel ROFL

awww arnav wrote A+K in khushi mehendi
i loved his answer

and the marriage turned out to be a child marriage
khushi protested for the marriage and stopped it. arnav too supported her
thatz when arnav truly understood what khushi is going through

now everything is back to normal

that shyam ordered to kill khushi so that arnav will suffer. they know that khushi is arnav's weakness
but rebel came infront of khushi and saved her cuz arnav was too late to protect her

then khushi ran but arnav found her

those bloody monsters killed rebel. not only that they took arnav and khushi's stuff
i am so sad about rebel

arnav and khushi both are really sad
but they have each other

will be waiting for the next update

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