Khushi,dis girl never fails to impress me..!
She is controlling her every burning desires nly to respect d tradition where none actually should care abt it but here dis angle is all set to follow everythng properly nd in d process she was going to loose her love of life but still she stuck up wit her decision wit d belief dat her love is strong enough to make arnav undrstnd dat she loves nly her nd wit tym he will undrstnd her decision..!
I loved it how they both were so much eager to make love but khushi could not hlp it but started to submit herslf to him feeling dat she is not right but still it felt perfctly all r8 nd arnav seeing her backing off nd her uneasiness he just got all angry nd d way he said dat next tym khushi will beg him to make love nxt tym actually sent shivers down my spine breaking my skin into goosebumps..! ☺️
Goshhh dat scene,ahhh intense nd damn damn damn beautiful..!
Nd den arnav's jelousy for d dress dat khushi worn nd also he got jelous wit rebel as khushi was giving it xtra attention,oh god nly d dark prince can do like dis..! No no me not complaining at all coz i loved to see him like dis,all lost in love wit his beautiful khushi..!
Nd as xpected wit tym arnav started to undrstnd her nd seeing her attitude nd her love for him he could undrstnd dat khushi loves nly him but still as betrayal was alwaz d most common thng in his life his head cannot agree wit his heart nd still one ounce of doubt alwaz remained in his heart abt khushi chosing him over dat tradition..!
I loved it how u have brought up d childhood marriage issue nd also made that one scene perfct for arnav to undrstnd dat khushi kumari gupta will never chose d tradition over him..!
D whole part of marriage ceremony,taking from mehendi to her getting ready nd their small talks nd her getting teased by d girls of d house nd den her small eye contact wit arnav nd their sweet teasings nd their drooling over each other nd their passion,everythng was described beautifully..!
I loved it how khushi was all happy to enjoy d marriage ceremony but one look at d bride nd groom made her shiver nd she could not hlp but shout demanding d marriage to get stopped nd as usual arnav came running to her holding her close xamining her traumatised condition nd also giving her d much needed warmth making her undrstnd dat he is nd will b alwaz wit her no matter wat nd i loved it how khushi justified her points properly making everyone undrstnd dat child marriage is indeed a curse nd wit dis arnav singh raizada could easily undrstnd dat watever happens in life wit them but his khushi will never leave him nd will never ever choose anythng in life over him..!
Wit marriage ceremony getting all stopped wit everybody undrstnding khushi's point of view they both got out of d venue to continue wit their journey but dis tym also luck did not played right in their favour nd shyam's men attacked them nd as xpected shyam nd his men targetted khushi thnking dat arnav could get shattered nly if sumthng happened to his khushi but arnav sensing sumthng just turned nd undrstnding dat d gun has been pointed to khushi he shouted but it was too late nd those jerks had already set up their shot for her but this tym rebel gave his life to save his master's love..!
Ahhh wat a brilliant piece of writing,i was reading nd my tears made their way seeing rebel lying in pain wit the gun shots in his body..!
Den khushi running in order to save her life but fear gripping her thinking abt arnav's safety nd her steps slowing down tjnking abt him but den nly arnav came rushing to her making her believe dat nothng can touch her dark prince anyway md they ran away savimg their lives from those men nd from shyam,ahhh wat a chasing scene it was..!
I must say didu,d whole chasinh scene left me breatheless,though i knw it dat never will u let anythng happen to my arnav nd khushi nd i also i knw it well dat rebel will lost his life but still i could not hlp but felt all restless thinking abt them nd dats where u actually succeed being a writer,d scene was so beautifully penned down dat i was utterly tensed sensing somethng gonna happen soon to them..!
Nd den wen they both could sense dat shyam nd his men were not chasing them they came back to rebel nd arnav could not help but broke down seeing his rebel lying lifeless nd wit him touching him for d last tym he breathed his last breathe nd gave his life saving khushi nd marking a new beginning of arnav nd khushi's rltnship..!
Goshhh this is indeed a heart breaking chappy,i knw it dat u were planning dis sequence but never i felt dat i will b dis much sad reading dis part..!
I have actually nothng more to say..!
Lovely update 👍🏼
u indeed make my breathe stuck wit dis chappy didu,goshhh one of d best chapters of DH,hats off to u my darling doctorji,u simply rock..! 👏
love ya ❤️
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Edited by ara_000 - 10 years ago
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