ArHi FF #11: Desert Heat *Ch 24 Pg 1* (Next thread link pg 1) - Page 18

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...
Finally Arnav listen to khushi' s plight and understood her... Though his opinion about her decision doesn't change but still he is respecting it... Glad to see them together again...
I m happy that Arnav and khushi raise their voice against child marriage... Its shameful that even today people are following this tradition... Snatching a child from his childhood in the name of tradition is cruelty...
Rebel is dead... Why did this happen??? For everyone he might be an animal but for Arnav he was his friend, his companion...
I don't know what to say... :(
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
The conflict in both of these still rages and both are right in their own way.  Khsuhi scrunching her nose at the mendhi smell, is that a sign? ;-) 
Sad to see Rebel die like that but it keeps the story real, in war there is always collateral damage. Shyam will truly suffer more at the ahnds of Arnav.
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome updt
so evrything is settle between them
now arnav trust her its good
they are together again I am happy after reading this
oh poor rebel die its sad
precap is confusing
thnx for pm
updt soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww rebal ko kyun mara :(
Awesome update 
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Posted: 10 years ago
glad that they stopped the wedding..and now Arnav knows Khushi is saying the truth

😭Rebel😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
That last update was very painful.  The chase and Rebel's death just got to me but you are right, that is reflective odd reality specially in historical romances where lawless brigades roamed with very little monitoring.
The cliff hanger where she stops the wedding was fantastically done...I swear I thought Khushi's long lost husband was the groom and she recognized him...lol.
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Posted: 10 years ago
aww that wos so sad, poor rebel 😭. but a brilliant update as always,
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG...
I just read chapter 21!!! 😭😭😭

Thud...

It was sooo emotional

Sooo touching & sad!!

Poor Rebel!!!

He was killed by those evil monsters!!

I'm glad Arshi is ok though...I nearly had a heart attack when the bullet was aimed at Khushi!!

I love how finally Arshi is not fighting anymore 

and how they finally understand each other!!

Although Arnav may not agree with Khushi's decision but he is respecting it!

I loved the way Arshi's moments were filled with undying love and passion!!

The update was beautiful, emotional, sad and very touching!!!

Absolutely loved it!!!

Please do update the next chapter soon cuz im spamming you very soon!! 😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
I so-so hate Shyam. That vile man couldn't stoop any low. Rebel was the one who stood courageously and unabashedly by ASR when he was in need and true, that he never expected anything in return. He had the most amazing master and undoubtedly did not think twice before sacrificing his life for him. And for this I hope Shyam is pinished and soon.
 
Child-marriage has tainted our society and you beutifully pictured it. I am glad the marriage was called off as it is high time a stand is taken against such malpractices and atrocities.
 
Their love is the purest thing. The way he respects her decision though its killing him and the way she soothed him when he broke down was heart warming. I hope their journey to northern reaches is not very difficult.
 
Waiting for the next part.
Update soon. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
RIP Rebel 😭 You will be missed❤️