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ArHi FF #11: Desert Heat *Ch 24 Pg 1* (Next thread link pg 1) - Page 71

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Posted: 10 years ago
So ASR is going to rectify his wedding night fiasco and give Khushi a memorable one???

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Posted: 10 years ago
That was some suhag raat ;-). That was hot and passionate romance. After a long time khushi wanted him and Arnav stopped just in time.

I like taj and his never say die attitude. He is asking the same thing again and again. I was smiling while reading that part.

The best part for me was: when Arnav asked khushi to choose the sindhoor or the ring. Perfect question. I am sure she will choose sindhoor. But does she still want to return the ring...

Hey Tina, I read the PM. I just want to tell you something. You are one of the best and most versatile writers. People are bound to pull your legs. Don't be discouraged. Please always remember that there are people like me who wait for an update, a teaser or even a small note from you with bated breath. I love your stories with all my heart.Edited by pinkly - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing udate.
Loved it..
I wonder how can u manage such a lng updates.
Superb update.
I love khushis character
i love 18 year khushi..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Rabba vey
that's all i have to say after your this awesome update
love it
hayeee she will chose him now
i know that
update soon
 
ps: every part was my favorite dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesum update really loved it noo this tine noo ring i want she accept asr n throw that ring for gud now n dear u update nxt prtsoon i hate cliff hanger in DH 
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Posted: 10 years ago
do you even have to ask  what was our fav
the whole freaking chapter i tell ya
from maya and aman to arhi to taj and imran
gosh lot happened
what with aman being such devil
and maya of course not giving in to him
but i think there is hope for him yet
to arhi and their nocturnal activities
sheesh he fell asleep
but of course not when she came to him
helped him bathe
and of course it went far more than that
oh my they were this close to making love again
but of course he snapped outta that drunken stupor
but of course wife wasnt happy with her hubby
not that i blame her either
he was being a right headache
bless with these two they cant help but fight
so once again ring debate
but this time ring versus sindoor
oh teri what now
and if she does chose the sindoor does it mean they dont have to go to the north reaches
but they have to how else will they all meet up
hmmm have to give it to arhi romance bhi utna hi jitna inka jhagadna
taj is gonna give imran a right headache
but it has to be done right
or zara and him cant be together
and she has been waiting pretty long
time to give themselves a chance too
if arhi can so can these two
cheers for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update... Loved the way the story is progressing... Nw its gng to be Sindoor vs Ring.!! Well. Hope Khushi vl choose wisely. So, Maya and Aman is smwat getting closer. Hope Aman soon realise his love for Maya.. And Imran too. Thanks for the chances.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Waiting for the village update. Thanks for d PM.
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Posted: 10 years ago
hope khushi wl chose arnav.. .i dnt understnd why she z being so adamant to go to nidhants house...if dey care for her dn dey would cm to tak her long tym bk...n wat if dey refused to let khushi go to arnav evn after knowing her relationship wid arnav????dn wat wl khushi do????
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing Tina...I just can't describe how beautiful your work is...hats off girl...