ArHi FF #11: Desert Heat *Ch 24 Pg 1* (Next thread link pg 1) - Page 26

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Posted: 10 years ago
Fabulous & well written update...love it
Eagerly waiting to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago
mindblowing update
loved it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
So Arnav and Khushi are officially married now?! I'm excited to see how this new twist will effect their relationship. 
Do continue soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved the update marriage thumps engagement in every way in the world even in the past loved him him filling her mang and loved that he stopped when she wanted him to poor asr wanted to make sure and mark his territory awesome update loved it and the precap loved the change in to banner thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
brilliant update
loved the last scene,,ooh they are married now=]
how will khushi react now?
congrats for new thread=]
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG, what an update
so many things happened
what will happen now?
will khushi no longer go back to her former fianc?
did Arnav do this un purpose?

can't wait to read the next part
your stories are just EXCEPTIONAL 
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Posted: 10 years ago

Loved it. Loved reading both parts. If started off with Maya sensing A and K were in trouble. As soon as they came to know, they split into two groups and were ready to go back. One should have such caring and trustworthy friends.

 

I was so worried for A and K, how will they travel without Rebel, food or water. Their journey was really heart wrenching. There is so much pure love. The way Khushi hid her discomfort and pain, so that Arnav is not worried about her. And as soon as Arnav came to know about her foot, he carried her through that treacherous path. Beautifully written. I loved their conversation about the baby.

 

Arnav was so jealous when he learnt the name of Khushi's fianc. I really appreciate Khushi's will power. She is trying hard to control their desire and passion to be one.

 

Arnav filled her maang with his blood. Awesome... Khushi considers herself married now. What value does the ring hold now...

 

Precap picture is perfect. The sindhoor looks prominent and the subtitle - "surrender to passion" is just right. Beautiful chapter. Will read it again and again...until next update.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update. They r safe for now.  Arnav filled her mang with his  blood.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...loved ArHi...Arnav Sooo sweet...cant wait 4 Khushi 2 give da ring bck...loved d jealous aman...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update! 
More danger and adventure! I miss rebel! I hope they get away in time! 

Continue soon