Originally posted by: indu6789Sorry feiends...could not keep up to the deadline..no excuses..just plain sorry...but i sat n wrote from 3 in the morning...advantages of being away from hubby...
Will reply to ur loving comments after a few hrs...will read suvika's thread too...
Hope you guys are not angry...sorry plz..maaf kardo na...
Enjoy the chapter...
Originally posted by: Vidishaanice update...hope you haven't forgotten my Meera
Originally posted by: rajanigandha26<font color="#0000FF" size="3">Thank u Induji for last 2 wonderful updates.Full of emotions and love. You wont believe but I didnt even realize when tears started rolling down. Especially Nidhi's outburst touched my heart. I am sure every woman on this forum must have gone through this. We fight on so many fronts of life but a point comes when we break down over small thing. Nidhi said sorry next day but I never say !!
I Very well written and shows your involvement in this FF. Ashu and Nidhi's state of mind is described beautifully. Its true when we are going to meet our loved ones after long time the journey is full of memories.And at last AshNi are together and that makes everything look so complete. Indu ji I appreciate the reason you chose for AshNi's separation and described their love and longing for each other so well. Its not because of some 3rd person coming between them or due to some misunderstanding. Your positivity is what I like the most in this FF.
Hubby ho toh Ashu jaisa 😳
and
Beta ho toh Nishu jaisa.</font>😃
<font color="#FF0099"><font size="3">Thank u once again for wonderful AshNi moments to dream about</font></font>
Originally posted by: VeenaperIndu, just got to read your update - once again delicately and brilliantly crafted 👏👏👏. You have worked wonders here - beautiful portrayal of their long journey from Delhi to London via Dubai and little Nishu so very mature and well behaved for his age - he renders me speechless. Nidhi experiencing the symptoms of the pregnancy on the flight but it just does not strike her and instead sheds tears for what she had lost.
In London Ashu on tenterhooks and waiting when his sunshine will arrive and of course feeling the desire to be with Nidhi again. Mrs. Hudson enquiring about Nidhi and Ashu not giving anything away - wanting to surprise her and Zafar waiting at the airport and looking out for an older lady as Nidhi - wonderful narration.At long last Ashni and Nishu together, Ashu sensing immediately that there is some change in Nidhi. Nishu talking non stop - he seems to be a highly intelligent and smart kid. Nidhi overcome by fatigue fast asleep and Ashu cocooning her in his arms - yes his hands are full with his wife and son and this is the moment he was so eagerly waiting for - enough to erase those painful six weeks of absence. Now waiting eagerly for your next update to see how you will bring in the good news.
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