Posted: 06 October 2014 at 3:22pm | IP Logged
Unres! Sorrryyy this took a while to unreserve!! I had been saving the second part which I just read teehee
Sooo ahem... here we go!
Lalalaa I have Subhanallah playing in my mind right now. The second part was deffo my favourite...although... hold on I am skipping ahead! Let's start from the beginning!
Subhanallaahhh jo ho raha haiii pehli dafa hai wallahhh
Ok, back to the comment!
"Swiping a palm across his sweat-covered forehead, he had grasped for the first thing he could; and when he touched warm skin, he had felt an odd sense of security wash over him."
Haayyeee... I was blushing as I imagined the scene, his fingers wrapped around hers.. *thud*
I love how you write even the tiniest details..which makes it even more real! Like this line here:
"Sakshi wiped the mist that had gathered on the inside of the glass surface and looked outside."
Mmm I love how they go to see the snowman first thing in the morning... *Banjaara moment* Haayyeee. I have gone back to the snowstorm and the moonlight..
Anywaay back to this!
Loved the Aisha and Arjun convo!! I do miss Aisha so much.. she was my second most favourite character after Arakshi ..Okay let's not go there! The greenhouse scene!! I was jumping around like a mad person when I started reading it teeeheee... the nature girl in me woke up once moree and I was literally standing there amongst the pretty flowers, breathing in their sweet fragrance, feeling the moist air of the greenhouse..and of course Arakshi Hayyeee... and then the song Chahoon bhi toh main... I love it so so much! Especially the bit with Kartik's voice.. it does something to me
These lines were sooo beautiful:
"Warm sunlight filtered through the glass ceiling and walls of the greenhouse, plants rustled in their new pots on a long table against the left wall. Soil and specks of dirt covered the floor, and the lush foliage of double-rose begonias and angelwing jasmines rustled in the hanging baskets hissed and whispered."
I wanna be thereee ..it sounds so pretty
Aha! Aisha noticed the two Loved that bit
"Ayesha hummed to herself and took the shears from between Sakshi's fingers before she ended up chopping off her plant."
This part was
Hayeee their walk in the moonlight and then the almost-accident..I had major goosebumps and a hugeee smile on my face! Phew my mum wasn't around teeheee
"Between the bellowing harsh winds and the darkness, the only thing he could make out was her."
Haayee they are in love alreadyy
Funfairrr!!! Ahhh you wrote the description so beautiful.. It was all so real, so alive! Even though I am sitting here in silence, I could hear the music, even the loud Bollywood ones LOL (guess what song was playing) smell the foood...hayee the street food! (Damn Delhi ki yaad aa gayi) And mehndiii... mujhe bhi lagwana hai! Just remembered the Mihir Tulsi mehndi sceneee.. you know why
This part cracked me up so badd:
"Meow? What kind of an answer is that?", she rolled her tongue in her cheek, teasing him.
Kuch kuch ho gayaaa... the time they were walking and he was carrying the canvas boards.. hayeee.. such a simple thing and yet it brought a huge smile on my face LOL LOL LOL Sakshi is jealous.. hahahahaha I cracked up at that Ab hotwa ke aage peeche kaunsi ladki nahi ghoomegi Colour palettes to work And then the pottery scene.. hayeee
Ab aur kya boluunnn.. That reminded me of Saraswatichandra btw.. there was a scene in the beginning when I used to watch the show he he
This was beautiful and skin tingling:
"There was something unique about the moment; the sight of the molded pot and her hands on top of his, hinted at something he had been struggling to accept for a while now. Was he really falling in love?"
Ah ah ah ah ah ahhh I guessed I guesss
Chubh toh nahi rahaaa
Aapki halwai ki dukaan toh hum hadapke hi rahengeee
Back to Arakshi That was just too tooo tooo beautifully written!! Damnn I was the mirror for a minute theree..he he he he. They are so pretty I could cryyy *snifff* *puts kaala teeka*
Ok my most favourite line out of the entire update:
"The fresh earthy colour defined her, for him. She was just like a breath of restful air in his lonely life, and although he hadn't quite accepted it to himself yet, somewhere at the back of his mind, a tiny wish had begun to sprout. "
How how how how how do you do it? How do you write such beautiful lines? Those goosebumpy ones. ahhh Secret batao naa! Wait mat batao! Magicians never reveal their secrets
And awwieee he bought bangles for her
Subhanallaaahhh ...haaye the song was too perfect!
When he was looking at her whilst she was dancing..soo beautiful
Darnn this is becoming too big (as usual!) and loaded with Emos (as usual)
Anywaaay..and wait whaaat just happened towards the end?
What did ..how did... whaaat?!
So so he had cut off all contacts with her after DIG Anand's death?!!! But but why would he do that? Of course there must have been a reason...but ... why did you stoppp
Acha ab jaldi jaldi next wala likho!!
Thank you sooo much for this mushy mushy goosebumpy update.. I absolutely loved it!! Abhi thoda hangover time hai.. the bangles sceeneee.. damn!
This is gonna be me tonight ->
I love youuu for this update and yeh lo:
Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 08 October 2014 at 4:44pm