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Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4 (Page 72)

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Posted: 06 October 2014 at 2:25pm | IP Logged
Okay so I read all parts in one go and I was really happy when I saw that u
Updates 2 hours ago. Anyway I love your story so please continue and update
Soon and if u can please pm me

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i was like  

then 


resTongue
  
 

 

remember the snowman as arjun :P :PSilly

this one for arakshi loversWink
 

 




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Posted: 06 October 2014 at 3:22pm | IP Logged
ressCool
Unres!Embarrassed
Sorrryyy this took a while to unreserve!! I had been saving the second part which I just read teeheeEmbarrassed
Sooo ahem... here we go!

Lalalaa I have Subhanallah playing in my mind right now.Day Dreaming The second part was deffo my favourite...although... hold on I am skipping ahead! Let's start from the beginning!

Subhanallaahhh jo ho raha haiii pehli dafa hai wallahhh
Aisa huaaa
HaaayeeeDay Dreaming

Ok, back to the comment!
The beginninggg...
"Swiping a palm across his sweat-covered forehead, he had grasped for the first thing he could; and when he touched warm skin, he had felt an odd sense of security wash over him."
Haayyeee... I was blushing as I imagined the scene, his fingers wrapped around hers.. *thud*
I love how you write even the tiniest details..which makes it even more real! Like this line here:
"Sakshi wiped the mist that had gathered on the inside of the glass surface and looked outside." 

Mmm I love how they go to see the snowman first thing in the morning... *Banjaara moment* Haayyeee. I have gone back to the snowstorm and the moonlight.. Day Dreaming
Anywaay back to this!
Loved the Aisha and Arjun convo!! I do miss Aisha so muchOuch.. she was my second most favourite character after ArakshiEmbarrassed ..Okay let's not go there!

The greenhouse scene!! I was jumping around like a mad person when I started reading it teeeheee... the nature girl in me woke up once moree and I was literally standing there amongst the pretty flowers, breathing in their sweet fragrance, feeling the moist air of the greenhouse..and of course ArakshiDay Dreaming

Hayyeee... and then the song Chahoon bhi toh main... I love it so so much! Especially the bit with Kartik's voice.. it does something to me Embarrassed
These lines were sooo beautiful:
"Warm sunlight filtered through the glass ceiling and walls of the greenhouse, plants rustled in their new pots on a long table against the left wall. Soil and specks of dirt covered the floor, and the lush foliage of double-rose begonias and angelwing jasmines rustled in the hanging baskets hissed and whispered."

I wanna be thereee ..it sounds so pretty


Aha! Aisha noticed the two LOLLOL Loved that bitBig smile
"Ayesha hummed to herself and took the shears from between Sakshi's fingers before she ended up chopping off her plant." 
This part was 

Hayeee their walk in the moonlight and then the almost-accident..I had major goosebumps and a hugeee smile on my face! Phew my mum wasn't around teeheee
"Between the bellowing harsh winds and the darkness, the only thing he could make out was her."
Goosebumps alerrtt!!!
Haayee they are in love alreadyy



Funfairrr!!! Ahhh you wrote the description so beautiful.. It was all so real, so alive! Even though I am sitting here in silence, I could hear the music, even the loud Bollywood ones LOL (guess what song was playingWinkLOL) smell the foood...hayee the street food! (Damn Delhi ki yaad aa gayiOuch)
And mehndiii... mujhe bhi lagwana hai! Just remembered the Mihir Tulsi mehndi sceneee.. you know whyLOLDay Dreaming

This part cracked me up so badd:
"Meow.."
"Meow? What kind of an answer is that?", she rolled her tongue in her cheek, teasing him.
ROFLROFLROFLROFL


Kuch kuch ho gayaaa... the time they were walking and he was carrying the canvas boards.. hayeee.. such a simple thing and yet it brought a huge smile on my faceEmbarrassed

LOL LOL LOL Sakshi is jealous.. hahahahaha I cracked up at thatROFL
Ab hotwa ke aage peeche kaunsi ladki nahi ghoomegiBlushing
Colour palettes to workROFL

And then the pottery scene.. hayeeeDay Dreaming
Ab aur kya boluunnn.. That reminded me of Saraswatichandra btw.. there was a scene in the beginning when I used to watch the show he he 
This was beautiful and skin tingling:
"There was something unique about the moment; the sight of the molded pot and her hands on top of his, hinted at something he had been struggling to accept for a while now. Was he really falling in love?"

Ah ah ah ah ah ahhh I guessed I guesss
Chubh toh nahi rahaaa

SRK- KajolDay Dreaming
Aapki halwai ki dukaan toh hum hadapke hi rahengeee
AAAhhh.
Back to ArakshiEmbarrassed

That was just too tooo tooo beautifully written!! Damnn I was the mirror for a minute theree..he he he he. They are so pretty I could cryyy *snifff* Day Dreaming *puts kaala teeka*

Ok my most favourite line out of the entire update:
"The fresh earthy colour defined her, for him. She was just like a breath of restful air in his lonely life, and although he hadn't quite accepted it to himself yet, somewhere at the back of his mind, a tiny wish had begun to sprout. "
How how how how how do you do it? How do you write such beautiful lines? Those goosebumpy ones. ahhh Secret batao naa! Wait mat batao! Magicians never reveal their secretsWink

And awwieee he bought bangles for herEmbarrassed
Subhanallaaahhh ...haaye the song was too perfect! 
When he was looking at her whilst she was dancing..soo beautifulDay Dreaming 
Darnn this is becoming too big (as usual!) and loaded with Emos (as usual)LOL

Anywaaay..and wait whaaat just happened towards the end?
What did ..how did... whaaat?! 
So so he had cut off all contacts with her after DIG Anand's death?!!! But but why would he do that? Of course there must have been a reason...but ... why did you stopppOuch
Acha ab jaldi jaldi next wala likho!! 

Thank you sooo much for this mushy mushy goosebumpy update.. I absolutely loved it!! Abhi thoda hangover time hai.. the bangles sceeneee.. damn! 
Subhanallaahhh


This is gonna be me tonight -> 

I love youuu for this update and yeh lo:






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Awesome updates
Loved it
Thanks for the pm

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lovely updates
thanks 4 pm

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wow...two updates back to back...kya baat hai...aj hum par itni meherbaani... hehe...btw thanks yaara...for updates...it was awesome...i love it...waise tumne sach kaha...agar tumne jaldi update nhi kiya...toh koi or na sahi...i will serve u with rotten tomato...vegetable piles...garbage wastes...drainage water...n more...u never know...so jaldi jaldi update karna...or else I will be at ur door step...to welcome u...*evil.smile*

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Posted: 06 October 2014 at 10:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by life93


i was like  

then 


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remember the snowman as arjun :P :PSilly

this one for arakshi loversWink
 

 




Ditto nerajaBig smilethe only difference being,u r portraying to hug your Avni di through the cute snowman &I'll run around to hug her neck Evil Smile

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