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Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4 (Page 71)

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Posted: 06 October 2014 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by laila1994

unres...

Arakshi's moments were beautiful Heart
Their relationship is improving from mere acquaintance to friends. 
I won't term their relationship as love yet. I mean when you meet someone almost regularly, He/ she takes care for you, Do things that nobody does for you then you are bound to get attracted. I know this is more than just attraction but very less than Love.Smile

Aww.. yes! You got it right. It is less than love for sure, but is it? Watch out.. Wink

I think Sakshi has realized that ACP Rawte is her Arjun but she is not ready to accept it yet. We don't want to accept things that happens to us which we didn't want to happen unless we get 100% confirmation. I think that is what is happing with sakshi.

their scenes were beautifully written especially the making of snow man.Day Dreaming

Yup! Cool

Ayesha-Sakshi scenes worth the praise. Only a woman can understand other woman's agony. 
the bangals scene was very nice & heart-touching.
Ayesha-Arjun: I would say it was a treat to read. Lovely sceneHug
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Point 1:Bahadur was appointed by DIG who particularly used Sakshi to get to Tripati. 
Point 2: the person who appointed Sakshi & jai to do the assignment is now being lenient when he should be more strict. I think these two points are connected somehow.

Aha.. Smart you.. Yes, they are indeed connected.. Tongue

Point 3:Prince Akash Singh Sodha,. Another player of this game. I am looking forward to know which league he is following. 
BTW, I am still not sure what is Mr. Abhinav Krishna hidden role in this story.

About Arjun's life:
1.a man who was abandoned by his loved ones at every step of life
2.He didn't even know if one could ever get over the grief of losing a parent, because he hadn't..
3.ever since she left him.
4.everything he had believed in, had been nothing but an illusion.

His life seems more mysterious than Sakshi's life. Shocked

Haha.. for sure! I wanted to reveal it in the next one.. But they're suuper dooper long already.. So that will have to wait for now.. 

PS. Banner is superb.Heart



Thanks laila.. Really appreciate it.. Means a lot.. Big smile


Originally posted by Areesha566

part 12

beautifuly cute and awesomly written

love it

p.s. Sorry bakiyoon ki tarha super long comments nahi kar sakti, i only write what i feel

Hey.. that's seriously okay; I'm not fishing for compliments either; i only want everyone's honest opinions. And I'm glad you're not silent atleast.. Thank you.. 

Originally posted by NainaSM

Wowww superb awesome 
Sakshi ayesha chit chat and bangels superb 
Arjun ayesha and Sam bonding nice
Sakshi bday part was super se upar 
Tea and Maggie
Snow fall 
Arakshi together 
Snowman wowww just love it 
Continue soon

Thank you.. Glad you enjoyed it.. 

Originally posted by angelicdeepti

after so long..
thanx for the update & the PM...
very emotional updates... beautifully written...

continue soon

Thank you.. Big smile
Yes, I've been very busy lately.. 

Originally posted by life93

hi avani di HeartHug
 
this particular one is the most beautiful chapter of this beautiful tale !Heart

You sure Nee? Wink Silly
 
actually lost in another landDay Dreaming u r giving me hangover now a daysSilly

Haha.. That's a good thing, nahi? 

arjun and aisha's suspicious about bahadur and then DIG's involvement Confused back to square one !

aisha and sakshi's  convo was very beautiful Big smile she brought bangles for her , aisha's concern for sakshi feels so niceBig smile
 
sakshi and arjun meetings and and now as they are neither strangers nor friends Wink but whatever it is the mid of strangeness and friendship is nice . soothing one !
 
both are comfortable with each other for unknown reasonsBig smile

Yep.. And they will soon take baby steps and then huge ones, to move out of that zone into something more beautiful.. 
 
temple scene ! kya kahoon u write these scenes so amazingly beautiful each timeDay Dreaming but really sad that how her life made her like the way she is . but now when arjun is here toh kahe ki fikarWinkLOL
  
sneaking in school oops ! cop in action alwaysWink...and acp sir chup chup ke kya dekh rahe theWinkLOL
 
baatetin mulakatein and their convo masha allah ! amazing ! light gayi maggie treat with tea that too in snowfall with freezing cold lucky acpWink
 
and snowman making scene totally clean bold Blushing...nose is missing lol so cuteTongue

Aww.. Of course, Arjun is here, toh kaahe ki fikar! Tongue
 
he made her smile cause her face which reflect pain affects him Heart kuch kuch ho raha hai .Wink her curls dancing in air and acp totally charmed by her beauty it was so magicalBig smile
 
and her question made him think Wink serously aag dono tafar hai equally LOL aisha should know thisTongueLOL
 
Tathastu baalike.. Mrs. Rathore will be the first to know.. 

and the last scene jus took my breathe away . he made her wear those golden banglesShocked ...what a scene just beautiful !HeartBlushing
 
ok coming back from dreamland who is behind jay and sakshi's missionConfused who wants to reveal the mysteryD'oh
 
so sakhi. s back in action and sakshi. stranger and arjun footballfanic convo was fun reading LOL
 
aisha' s question really made me laughLOLLOLLOL arjun sir...acp rawte...acp arjun rawte...what's wrong with u sakshiROFL
 
well entire update was a treatClap...
 
ok end of the lecture its 4 am and my brain isn't working properly so plz overlook
 extra banterLOL 
 
banjara was beautifulWink...
 
precap sounds interestingSmile...update soon di love uHeartHug




Awwie.. Thank you soo much Nee.. Hug You know how much I love reading your feedback.. There's lots more in store.. Wink


Originally posted by niki795

Awesome updates
Loved it
Thanks for the pm

Thank you.. Embarrassed

Originally posted by drunkiiebabe

Amazing updates
Thanks for the pm

Thanks.. 

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Posted: 06 October 2014 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
Amazing fantabulous, fantastic chapters... 

If I have more time I shall complete this comment - in short I loveee this!

Alrighto... finally found time to complete this comment!

Loved Ayesha's fluttering emotions as she heard about the case from Shree... and yes... the point of realization as to why did Sakshi meet her... I really love the way you have blended a wife, a homemaker, a simple woman with the sharp cop... I can almost see her eyes squint then widen when she realizes that the "There could be only one reason; the note never reached its rightful recipient.."

So yes... now I am pondering as to how differently must I say that I love Arjun and Sakshi's bond... truly... I must say how eclectic you are in showing their bond! In one you have them turned on with hot images of them in dreams (credit : Breaking Out - yep half of that credit does go to Shilpa ji..) or you have Arjun running across the seas to finally set things right (credit : You belong with me) and unfortunately both are on hold! *sigh* Arrey now look at me.. kya kehna tha aur kya nikal gaya!

So yes... the bond is beautiful... something that when termed as friendship... you find something missing... but if you call love... it seems to early... ab yeh relation toh sach main "unnamed relationship" ki category main fit hoti hai!

And yes... I loved the part where they were pondering about each other... beautifully written...

Arjun's past.. I am really inquisitive about that.. err... have I missed out on anything... or you haven't revealed yet? 

She had surely learnt it from her husband! He muttered under his breath..

Sameer Rathore, who was unfortunately his best friend and the only living person who knew him inside out, loved rattling him up at every given chance.

And now, his better half had taken up the task..


These happen to be my favorite lines! Trust me... I like the way you have shown Ayesha and Arjun's relationship!

I love it whenever Trivedi gets his share of punches! Hihi! And wow... that was cool... Bahadur was in fact a mole!

Sakshi being a welcome distraction *grinning* ok now coming to this point... dear Avantika ji... now that you have brought in this Prince of blah blah land... am sure yeh banda ke daal main kuch kaala hai! Ya phir by chance he might be too good... u know to surprise us! Whatever it might be... am too sure you haven't typed his name only for reading out the headlines!

Loved the bond between Ayesha and Sakshi... truly... and yes... the way she understands her... Arjun... yes Sakshi! C'mon she truly has to figure this out.. she is that smart indeed!

Oh my God... my jaw dropped when you wrote about Sakshi wearing her mother's bangles and dupatta going around as a film actress! I just thought I saw my reflection there... my mind was flooded with memories indeed... 


ANd I am simply enthralled by the rest of the chapter... at one point I guess I read his hand being on/near her bangles... this does mean something more symbolic na... 

Plish tell me am righto!

*grinning*

So phew! I made it! I finally was able to complete my comments... trust me this was pending since a week! *teary eyes*

*moment of sentiness*

*blowing my nose on tissue!*

Love ya stories dear! And I saved this comment from being a thesis! Yippe! *pat on my back*

You do have a slight bit idea how much I write (credit : comment on ur ts... last part... lol)


Edited by Armagadon - 06 October 2014 at 12:36pm

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Posted: 06 October 2014 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SeasonOfLeaves

ressCool
Unress!
You updated you updateddd

Warning: Since this is a long update, expect a long comment!Silly

Haww.. Shocked *Thud* Gets up.. Reads.. *Thud*

Snow snow snow snow snowww...

I want Christmas already! I can almost hear the Christmassy music, smell the gingebread in the air and see the magical lights everywhere
Ok, i m getting carried away Tongue

Ouch Ouch Do not mention Christmas ever! Cry

Aisha is backkk Embarrassed
Aisha-Arjun convo - brought a hugee smile to my face. How well she knows him he heBig smile

Trivedi phir pita! I was like Evil Smile Serves him right!
That part made me miss the show..and all that action sighhh.
Anyhooo!

The chat convo the chat convoo!!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
I love youuu for this flashback! ahh ahh can we have more chat convos pleassshhh Embarrassed

It was a teeny tiny one but i loved it..and ahh she finally begins to realise that ACP Arjun Rawte might be her Arjun. Day Dreaming
(Got carried away in my dreams again)

Lol.. Your wish my command, but I'm pretty sure you'll be after my life with GB's bloody axe after you read the next chat convo.. LOL

That lil scene when Aisha gives her those bangles was so beautiful ..you do know how to make simple things sound so beautiful through your words ClapBig smile
I could almost feeel the bangles in my handsEmbarrassed

Sheesh! That's a huge compliment coming from you.. (Coz you do just that to me.. Remember me inside the lily pond?) Tongue

Nononononooo you mention Kolkata and sweets and now I am missing both (hayee)LOL

Awwie.. 

My favourite line out of the whole update:
"The golden glass bangles clinked melodiously against each other with the playful cold breeze carrying the pleasant sound through the snow covered valley as if delivering a cryptic message across."

Dedication to meee...hayeee biggg hug 


These lines touched real deep:

"The truth doesn't always set one free, perhaps they were happy being in the situation they were in. Because for the first time in many years, silence was offering them a strange sort of sweet solace, and not jabs and pricks at their insides.. A friend, a companion or a stranger, whatever they meant to each other, didn't matter. What mattered was that there was someone by their side, who saw them for who they were, without asking questions, pitying or judging them.."

Especially the last line...there are so few people who stay by your side no matter what and don't judge you for your actions. Those are the real friends...and it's a pity that sometimes people you thought would be by your side forever just drift away from you because of distance... or maybe just because their priorities change. Oh well! Life goes on ...
Yeah that was random...ignoreeLOL

Lol yeah.. It's okay.. You're allowed to rant.. Coz that is soo true.. 

The scene at the temple was beautiful and emotional and sad *sniff*Ouch
Hehehe that bit where his stomach rumbles from hunger was funny and brought a hugeee smile on my face ROFL

The snowstormmmDancing
haye kitna intezaar kiya maine iske liye.. kitne sapne bhi dekhe! (With Humdard playing in the bg - mera kuch nahi ho saktaROFL)
Hayeee Maggi and chaiii and Arakshi ..plus snowstormmm outsideDay Dreaming
 
The part where she talks about her father was emotional..but he was there to comfort here *goosebumps*

Ha! I know.. And I still think it could've been better.. I'm really being modest here.. Sniff.. 

They're gonna build a snowmannn! (what an awesome thought)
I wanna build a snowmannn!! 

"Her loose curls danced with the playful breeze, and Arjun felt his heart thump wildly. The soft moonlight streaming through the clouds was dimmer than usual, but bright enough for his trained eyes to witness the array of expressions on her face."
These lines did something to me..like Humdard does (you know)BlushingSilly

Like Humdard?! *Auntyyy... Uncleee* Shocked


Hayeee hayeee Banjaaraaa hayeee 
This part was sooo Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming
LOLL they forgot the noseeLOLLOL And then he carved out a nose to bring a smile on her faceEmbarrassed

"Janamdin Mubarak ho, Sakshi." ->Jeez that reminded me of the episode of Sakshi's birthday for a minute.Ermm
But this is sooo much better Big smile

Oh I had that scene replaying in my head too.. Ouch They left that scene unfinished.. Confused

I had serious goosebumps while reading the whole snowman building! I could only picture his gaze, with snow all around and Banjaara in the bg..hayeee am dreaming Day Dreaming

The night, the snow, the song..and ArakshiDay Dreaming Can it get more magical? NO.
No Humdard today, just Banjaaraaa
lalalalaaa...that was so beautiful Heart

Coming to the end...eeekkk *thud* *thud* *thud*
His fingers wrapped around her wrist...sighhh..and she was wearing those bangles Day Dreaming

Ahh...finished already! IF made my comment disappear like twice...good that i had the text written in notepad else pata nahi kya hota!Angry (i had more emos...but oh well..)
Anywaaay... I loved loved loved both updates to bits (second one a bit more and you know whyyy)
Thank you sooo much for writing huge wale updates...Hug As usual, your magic will have me dreaming for hoursDay Dreaming 
Ab main chali sone..to listen to Banjaara and dream about snow and those twoEmbarrassedSilly
Aaj nahi likh paaoungiROFL
Farheen was right...the ASD hangover begins!ROFL
God bless the document I am supposed to finish off tomorrowLOLLOL


Awwie.. You're my angel, you know.. Had it not been for you three, my little guttery magician's timeless VM's and Vidzi who is the only other writer who I read these days, I don't think this fic would've reached so far.. 

Thank you soo much for always being there and jhelofying my insanity.. LOLLOL Hug

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Posted: 06 October 2014 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Devilicious

wow..that was so amazing
i read ur story many days ago and i was eagerly waiting for ur update and finally thanks god u did it!
part 11 was so awesome...
thanks for the pm 

Thank you.. 
Glad you returned to find it.. 

Originally posted by EashaYousufzai

Hi ddu,

Just read your FF and am greatful I did.

Firstly the name you choose.

It has an aura of it's own.

It pulled me towards the story.

When I started reading it I just couldn't stop myself from reading further.

I sat on my chair eyes glued to the screen.

I couldn't avert my gaze until I finished it.

The way you described every emotions and twist and turn.

It's just mind blowing.

You are just a gifted writer.

Now back to your updates...

 

Prologue:

 

The way you portrayed Sakshi..

My heart wrench imagining her in the station.

In her nineteen years of life she had seen both good and bad.

And her Mamaji.

Seems like a very stern person.

But what safety measure they were talking about?

She was leaving the city she brought up.

Poor girl lost her mother in such early age now her father died too!!!!!!

What tragedy she had to face!!!!!!

Her Mamaji is really very genorous who offered his hand in her bad time.

She cut down her sim card!!!!!!

She is a very brave and intelligent girl.

Arjun man of steel.

Loved the ChoRee duo.

Yeh Arjun ka to kuch nehi ho skata.

Sahi kaha mere bhi dimag mein same sawal.

"Policewala hai ya Atankvadi?"

What showed on the tv screen that Arjun reacted like that?

Ohh his mentor died.

Seems like he was a good person.

And Arjun was very attached to him.

System in which they believed blindly failed them.

Now only thing left is revenge.

 

Part 1:

 

You started the update with a mystery.

Six years have passed since the incident.

Both were looking for revenge but what happened?

Sakshi was unprepared and needed time to be ready.

But what happened with Arjun?

Why is he in the academy?

And Sakshi is a total mystery.

So, she still live with her uncle.

What was she doing in the dark night alone in the road?

What assignment she was talking about?

Arjun is such a gentleman.

But do they know each other from before?

Did some incidents separated them?

 


Hey Easha.. Hug

Thank you soo much, my dear.. This really means a lot.. 

I wish I could reply to every comment of yours, but unfortunately I'm running out of time.. So quoting the first one.. I will, from the next time onwards.. 

Yes, there's a lot more to their past, which will be revealed in bits and pieces.. Bohot kuch choot raha hai.. Wink

Originally posted by misha26

eshu it was the one i told u ajeeb si dastan lovely naa ilove itttSmile tooo  muchhh
 aisi stories read kar k iwant to write something as well


Thank you for recommending it.. Really appreciate it.. 
Oh! You must.. That is exactly how we all started out.. Smile

Originally posted by _Nikita_

Supperbbb... updates...
Loved it sooo very much...
Ek Dum Awwwsssmmm...
Loved Aisha-Sakshi moment... Very sweet... the blangles gifing was Lovely...
Loved the changes in Arakshi's relationship...
Sakshi didn't celebrate her birthday for last six years... n now Arjun is with her...
Arakshi moments were Supper Awwssmmm...
WOW! Maggi n Showman...
Arjun bring her smile back...
Wonderfully written...
Cont sooon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

Thank you so much..
Glad u enjoyed reading it.. Big smile


Originally posted by Snehajain

Awesome update...
Aisha is shocked & angry with Trivedi's revelations...OuchOuchOuch
Aisha is thankful of Arjun for handling the situation in the best way he can...Big smileBig smileBig smile
Arjun was always looking fr Sakshi's uncle...Big smileBig smileBig smile
A unnamed feeling has started its way in both hearts...Big smileBig smileBig smile
Aisha-Arjun discussed about their findings...Big smileBig smileBig smile
LOL...Aisha scared of Arjun's SYS...LOLLOLLOL
LOL...Aisha learned from Sameer How to tease Arjun...LOLLOLLOL
Trivedi not answering Arjun's question...AngryAngryAngry
Bahadur was planted by DIG...ShockedShockedShocked
How many are behid this racket??? & Who is the mastermind???ConfusedConfusedConfused
This Akash sounds fishy...OuchOuchOuch
Finally Aisha & Sakshi met...& Aisha made her calm...Big smileBig smileBig smile
Message chat was LOLLOLLOL
Both Arjun-Sakshi are not realizing each other...OuchOuchOuch
Aisha gifted bangles to Sakshi...Big smileBig smileBig smile
Sakshi was also having a dream of getting married but now her father's honour is more & most important for her...OuchOuchOuch
But Why Arjun-Sakshi are not together???ConfusedConfusedConfused
Aisha also wanted her to get marry...Big smileBig smileBig smile
Finally Arakshi became friends...Big smileBig smileBig smile
Both like to be in each others company...Big smileBig smileBig smile
The wall between SamJun is also melting...Big smileBig smileBig smile
Her mission is stopped in mid way...OuchOuchOuch
Today is Sakshi's birthday & she is remembering her father more today...OuchOuchOuch
She wanted to keep her busy thats why stayed late at night in school but Arjun came there accidentally...Big smileBig smileBig smile
Arjun found something different of her today & came to know how closely he has observed her...Big smileBig smileBig smile
Arjun's stomach made noises...ROFLROFLROFL
A perfect timing by storm...WinkWinkWink
Both had Maggie together...Big smileBig smileBig smile
Liked the snowy update...& the gradual changes in Arakshi's friendship...Big smileBig smileBig smile
Arjun came to know about her birthday & to cheer her up asked to make Snowman...Big smileBig smileBig smile
Nose-less snowman...ROFLROFLROFL
Finally Arjun made her birthday special...Big smileBig smileBig smile
I just love this song...Big smileBig smileBig smile
Arjun was holding his wrist that had those bangles...its a nice hint for Sakshi...WinkWinkWink

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

 
Firstly, @ Bold.. They will be.. Very soon.. Wink

Oh! And thank you soo much for that detailed POV.. I really enjoyed reading all of it. Wish I could answer some of those, but I'd rather leave you with those for now.. Tongue
Lots more hints and real scenarios coming up in the next one.. 

Stay tuned for more.. 
Thank you.. Hug
 

Originally posted by skrafty

Awesome updates
Just loved them
part 11 was great
the case part was nicely written
Loved Aisha and Sakshi's convo
Part 12
Things have started to change
So is Arjun and his relation with Sakshi
loved their growing Bond
So it was Sakshi's birthday
and he made it one to be cherished for LifetimeBig smile
Tea and MaggieBig smileBig smile My favourite
Arakshi making a snowman
So cute
Really
Awesome updates
waiting for the next part
continue soon

Thank you.. My favorite too.. 
Glad you liked it. Lots more cuteness and revelations coming up! Big smile

Originally posted by Nethravathi

Part 11 n 12

Sakshi was glad tht Arjun was with her in hard time. Aisha n Arjun's bonding is getting stronger n close too. 

Aisha teased Sakshi. Sakshi ko doubt hain ki jis Arjun ko vo abhi jaanti hain vo pehle hi ek doosre ko jaante hain

Arjun n Sakshi r getting closer day by day. Arjun was with Sakshi on her birthday.

Tea, Maggie. Wow Arjun tum bhi naa.

Snowman banaya Sakshi aur Arjun ne. Perfect gift fr sakshi as it made her happy.

Yep.. Thanks a lot.. 
Yes, Arjun is changing.. Lots more coming up next.. Big smile

Originally posted by rajeeviansonai

awesome update dear.
Keep it up :)

Thank you.. Big smile
 

Originally posted by shreya09


Great great great Update Thumbs Up Clap Clap Clap Clap 
I sooo love the friendship of Arjun & Aisha here... "she still felt her heart thud nervously each time he delivered his trademark samjhe ya samjhaun' with a menacing glare.LOL LOL love the way she is making everything easy between Arjun & her angry husband.Can imagine an annoyed & amused Rathore glaring at his sweet wife & best-friend's banter  Big smile LOL
Sakshi...was feeling really bad for the birthday girl... glad Arjun reached there... atleast someone was there for her... 
Snowstorm Day Dreaming Day Dreaming ... ah this part was really sweet Day Dreaming Day Dreaming
the noseless snowman LOL... an angry Arjun staring at it to detect the defect ROFL and then Sakshi's smile after seeing the wooden nose Day Dreaming Day Dreaming it was perfect Thumbs Up
brilliant & beautiful chapter Clap Clap
waiting for more Day Dreaming


LOLLOL
More of Rayesha and Arjun in the next.. LOL
Aww.. Yes.. He would burn it down, if he could.. LOL

Thank you.. Embarrassed


Originally posted by sisodia_shefali

nice updates and as u updated 2 parts so can't even complain for late updates rishvat jo  dedi Wink
so aisha had some doubt on her driver and so she clarified all with arjun 
trivedi is not going to open his mouth so easily and now DIG says that driver was a mole 
confusion and difficulties have increased for arjun in his investigation 
confusions r there for both arjun and sakshi as well regarding their feelings for each other but then time will tell them what is in there hearts Big smile
aisha came to meet sakshi and through her sakshi came to know arjun's full name and the name has brought some memories back but then she is confused 
oho toh daily coffee saath main pena routine ho gaya Wink nice atleast they r coming closer to each other and may be soon they will realize what their is deep down in their heart 
sakshi wanted to be alone for her b'day but some how arjun landed with her and now that he knows her so well and can read her every move knew something was bothering her 
he stayed with her long enough for her to open up if not much then atleast she said abt her b'day
what he did for her was so out of his character  but then may be this is real arjun who wants just happiness and joy for sakshi its just that he realized it now and may be even sakshi realized what arjun is for her 
their heart have fallen for eachother its just matter of time when they both themselves will realize 
hope thay come to know abt each other 's past soon 
thanks for pm 

Dobara rishvat milne wali hai.. And I've made sure, you wouldn't complain.. LOL
Yes, they're slowly getting there but acceptance will take a while.. Falling in love and accepting, can sometime take ages.. Yeh dono toh phir bhi novices hain.. Tongue

I do not think it was out of character, that was the real Arjun.. Well, you wouldn't know, because I haven't revealed him yet.. Remember, no Roshni and hence our ACP sahab is as normal as any other guy out there.. 

Thank you.. More realisations on the way.. Big smile

Originally posted by ...Maha-Srk...

Just wow
superb love it
its feel so real, awesome
wonderful updates thank u so much 4 such detailed n long parts, finger crossed 4 arjun n sakshi facebook but lagta hai uske liye abhi bohat time hai but eagerly w8ng 4 next plz continue soon n thanx 4 pm

Thank you.. 
Facebook? Typo tha kya? 
Lots more coming up.. 

Originally posted by Shivi1997

wow...such long updates...thank you so much... coming to ur updates... I love it their unnamed relationship is growing day by day...hope it ever turned to love...may be...kahin na kahin thodi feelings to hai ek dusre ke liye...its quite visible... snowman...nt bad...mujhe v banana hai...afsos yahan itni garmi hai ki snowman mera pani pani ho jae...hehe... awww...hand in hand...lagta hai aisha ki khawish jaldi puri hone wali hai... once again thanks for the updates... love u

Their unnamed relationship will now get a name, well unofficially atleast.. Tongue
lol.. I know.. I miss the snow and the snowman we used to make.. Ouch Mumbai ki garmi mein snowman bhi suicide kar lega.. Sleepy
Thank you.. Big smile

Originally posted by Kiyaa-Rhapsody

woww such fabulous, long updates! Firstly, I loooved the cover photo and the quote. and overall, love love loved the last two chapters! I love the way you're showing arakshi's journey, it's so breathtakingly beautiful. those unspoken feelings they're starting to harbour for each other.. hayee dil khush kar diya. update soon girlie! :) 

Thank you dear.. 
Glad you could relate to the fic and Arakshi's journey.. Big smile


Originally posted by Arakshiya_58

amazimg updates di...
really loved it a lot...
its so beautifulll...and wonderfulll...
u just create the lovely magic with arakshi...
that line janamdin mubarak ho remind me arakshi scene...**sigh*
its brilliant piece of work...
plz do con.soon...

Thank you.. 
Me too.. OuchSleepy  Chaddo!
I will.. Big smile

Originally posted by Devangana

Loved it.  Please continue soon.  It is so rivetting..

Thanks a lot.. Big smile

Originally posted by yams.s

Part 11:

Brilliant Update

Aisha coming to know about the happenings in the Academy in her absence

Saakshi and Arjun trying to figure out their realationship with each other.

Aisha and Saakshi's conversation was beautiful

Saakshi never knew Arjun by his first name. 

Hope they are together soon

Thank you.. 
They will get there sooner than you think.. 
Naah.. She never knew him by his last name.. And there's a mystery there too.. Wink

Originally posted by yams.s

Part 12:

Beautiful Update

Saakshi feeling very sad on her birthday but Arjun steps in and make it a memorable day for her

Both of them making snowman was funny

Continue Soon

Funny? I hope the cute funny.. JK.. Big smile
Thanks.. 

Originally posted by Radhika Shah

Awesome updates..

Thanks.. Big smile

Originally posted by coolRD

upd8 ws wndrful.. arjun nd sakshi's relation has improved quite a lot nd its so clear that they r falling for each other.. really deep Embarrassed 
loved ayesha nd sakshi's convo.. gave sakhi sme hints abt her arjun Wink ws quite painful also bt beauitfully writn.. I'm loving this ayesha actually.. a very headstrong person.. her convo with arjun brought a huge smile on my face Big smile not 2 4gt the chat convo.. ufff!! they r jst amazing!!!
would you mind if I say that I get sme sort of sadistic pleasure when arjun beats d life out of that trivedi Angry Angry Angry Angry
the school scene ws jst outstanding.. specially d snowman part.. it ws so beautifully written that I couldn't stop myself 4m reading it again nd again.. showed how deep a bond is forming between them Day Dreaming
why am I getting this inkling that smethng's cooking among DIG, Abhinav Krishna nd Akash Singh Sodha Ermm can't wait 4 d stry 2 unfold.. dying 2 read d nxt upd8 Cry Cry continue soon.. nd thnx 4 d pm Hug

p.s.: loved d banner Heart Heart its beautiful 

Lol.. Of course not.. Isliye toh pitvaati hoon na.. LOL
Oh! I've always loved Ayesha as much as I loved Arjun.. Embarrassed

Aww.. Thanks so much.. 
Gotcha! Hold on to that thought.. We'll get back to it soon.. Cool

Thank you.. Hug


Originally posted by anitasharma

Amazing update
arjun-ayesha and sakshi-ayesha was great
snowman part was cute
waiting for next

Thank you.. 
And Arjun-sakshi part? LOL
Just kidding.. 

Originally posted by _BlackPearl_

Both are feeling the pull towards each other, and both are holding back for other's betterment or for their own reasons.

There is change in every relation with time.
Arjun truly understood her unspoken pain, and act accordingly.

Very Nice chapters !

Thanks you.. 
Yes, but perhaps those reasons aren't strong enough.. Who knows.. 
He did.. Smile

Originally posted by anu91

beautiful update...
no words to say...

Thank you.. 

Originally posted by Anjali.Mital

The updates were awesome...

Slowly they are getting more and more comfortable and 
friendly with each other...thats really great...

And a snowman...!!!   that was so sweet ...
He just managed to make her happy on her birthday...nice..

Thanks for the pms dear...

Thank you so much.. Glad u like it.. Big smile

Originally posted by ss_nov

wow... awesome update...2 chapters!!!!!!!!!!!
aisha is a true friend of sakshi... concerned for her... also aisha is teasing arjun... hahahaha...so nice...Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap 

hmm... arjun;s interrrogation is going deeper... hope soon gets to know the truth...

aisha gifted bangles for sakshi...also it is her favourite... both are teasing each others... they become good friends in short span of time...Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap 

aisha and arjun jelled up together much to the annoyance of sameer rathore...

slowly arjun and sakshi's relationship is growing... now they are in friendship... good...

hmmm...arjun is concerned seeing the bulbs on in the school... sakshi is also concerned of arjun's injury...wah wah arjun is so much hungry!!!!!! sakshi is laughing at him!!!poor him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap 

both having dinner... so cute... arjun has bribed someone... they are sharing some beautiful moments... so nice...
hmm... arjun is slowly seeing sakshi's pain and also wants to clear them out...

both are making snow man...nice...arjun is so happy seeing sakshi happy and that too because of him...!!!!! finally atleast sakshi smiled from her heart on her birthday...

all credit goes to arjun...unknowingly arjun and sakshi are attracted to each other,...wah arjun's hand clasped around sakshi's hand...nice...hope soon they realize their feelings and also the truth...Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap 

continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yes.. Ayesha is the soul of this story.. What would anyone do without her.. Embarrassed
And yep.. So glad you could relate to Arakshi's journey from being strangers to friends.. 
He would go to any ends to make her smile, especially now that he's willing to give them a chance.. 

Thank you so much.. Big smile


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Originally posted by Fantasia_junkie

Originally posted by life93

waiting for next part !EmbarrassedErmm
 
Aww...Im working on it..but long weekend na, toh lots of work.. D'oh
 
ok ! happy dusshera :D and the arakshi bg music ! nostalgic ! Day Dreaming
 
loved itHeart

Nee... Hug
Thank you.. And same to you.. Hope you had a great time.. 

Sorry, late dekha.. Ouch

Eesh! I know.. I love it.. Day Dreaming


Originally posted by Armagadon

Amazing fantabulous, fantastic chapters... 

If I have more time I shall complete this comment - in short I loveee this!

Alrighto... finally found time to complete this comment!

Loved Ayesha's fluttering emotions as she heard about the case from Shree... and yes... the point of realization as to why did Sakshi meet her... I really love the way you have blended a wife, a homemaker, a simple woman with the sharp cop... I can almost see her eyes squint then widen when she realizes that the "There could be only one reason; the note never reached its rightful recipient.."

Aww.. Glad you did.. I loved her character, as much as I loved Arjun.. or perhaps even more.. But alas! It was a major disappointment in the end.. 
Bass apne armaan nikal rahi hoon.. LOL

So yes... now I am pondering as to how differently must I say that I love Arjun and Sakshi's bond... truly... I must say how eclectic you are in showing their bond! In one you have them turned on with hot images of them in dreams (credit : Breaking Out - yep half of that credit does go to Shilpa ji..) or you have Arjun running across the seas to finally set things right (credit : You belong with me) and unfortunately both are on hold! *sigh* Arrey now look at me.. kya kehna tha aur kya nikal gaya!

LOL LOL Ha! Break me out was solely mine and Shilpa's guttery baby.. We miss it and really wish we had the time to finish it.. As for You belong with me, I want to finish it, but can't seem to find the right track.. Hopefully, soon.. 
Accha bacchu.. Tongue

So yes... the bond is beautiful... something that when termed as friendship... you find something missing... but if you call love... it seems to early... ab yeh relation toh sach main "unnamed relationship" ki category main fit hoti hai!

Yexactly! Isliye toh ajeeb si daastan hai na.. Wink

And yes... I loved the part where they were pondering about each other... beautifully written...

Arjun's past.. I am really inquisitive about that.. err... have I missed out on anything... or you haven't revealed yet? 

Nope you haven't.. I've just thrown a few hints in.. LOL

She had surely learnt it from her husband! He muttered under his breath..

Sameer Rathore, who was unfortunately his best friend and the only living person who knew him inside out, loved rattling him up at every given chance.

And now, his better half had taken up the task..


These happen to be my favorite lines! Trust me... I like the way you have shown Ayesha and Arjun's relationship!

Me too.. Big smile

I love it whenever Trivedi gets his share of punches! Hihi! And wow... that was cool... Bahadur was in fact a mole!

Sakshi being a welcome distraction *grinning* ok now coming to this point... dear Avantika ji... now that you have brought in this Prince of blah blah land... am sure yeh banda ke daal main kuch kaala hai! Ya phir by chance he might be too good... u know to surprise us! Whatever it might be... am too sure you haven't typed his name only for reading out the headlines!

Yep! Prince hai bechara.. Ainvayi side character toh nahi banayenge na usko.. Wink

Loved the bond between Ayesha and Sakshi... truly... and yes... the way she understands her... Arjun... yes Sakshi! C'mon she truly has to figure this out.. she is that smart indeed!

She will! Cool Humari Sakshi show wali jaisi thodi na hai.. CV's aaye din bechari ko football ki tarah yahan se wahan phenkte the.. 

Oh my God... my jaw dropped when you wrote about Sakshi wearing her mother's bangles and dupatta going around as a film actress! I just thought I saw my reflection there... my mind was flooded with memories indeed... 

Ha! We all did that.. Didn't we? LOL

ANd I am simply enthralled by the rest of the chapter... at one point I guess I read his hand being on/near her bangles... this does mean something more symbolic na... 

Plish tell me am righto!

*grinning*

Haha.. Yep! Bingo.. Tongue

So phew! I made it! I finally was able to complete my comments... trust me this was pending since a week! *teary eyes*

*moment of sentiness*

*blowing my nose on tissue!*

Love ya stories dear! And I saved this comment from being a thesis! Yippe! *pat on my back*

You do have a slight bit idea how much I write (credit : comment on ur ts... last part... lol)

Aww.. Thank you so much.. this really means a lot to me.. *hugs*
Shabbash.. Yes, I did read it all.. Big smile
Koi nahi.. Essay writing mein toh humara koi muqabala hi nahi hai.. We break our own records, na? WinkLOL


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Originally posted by kunchu

Hayeee. dedication!!!
Wo bhi kithni achi...
Thank you...Embarrassed

Aisha returns. Aur ni tho kya!! you have no idea how much I miss that lady
Mrs. Rathod banne ka asar tho hai
I always liked the dynamics you showed between Arjun and Aisha in all your story.
Nothing OTT
but a simple friendship
I am glad that the old ETF inside her is still alive. Loved that part
She looked at the white blanket of snow sprawled across the valley...
I wish I could see it too.
Long white fields. How much ever you say its no so happy to be cold, but still I wanna be there

Trivedi gets another round!! Aur do... it makes me happy too.
The new developments are tricking a lot. waiting for your brand new lollipops

And those bangles. I could see it sparkling. Those lil FBs and emotions... I wont elaborate, Ritu had already mentioned my fav lines before. 
Ithna kaam aur lab ke beech me u wrote it!!
Hats off to you janeman

"HER Arjun..." that sounds so good. add 2+2 please...
Temple, bday and pain... hayeee... rula diya mujhe
but then cold cold and sooo cold
snowfall, snowman...
Hayee dreaming to see snowfields...
And yes GB, if you get any way to snow Mumbai, tell me the secret too
mujhe bhi snow chahiye...
The silent support.. you know how much I love khamosh wala love...Embarrassed

I have already counted the lollipops my dear... aur himmath ni hai
I know what comes next for me.
What can be better than an icing that too after a snow..
yuhooo




Originally posted by ll-Farheen-ll

Lollipop
Mast snowman k ander wrap karke lollipop daale haiLOLLOLOk thik hai kuch nahi bolti  

First& foremost important question :Wat was written in the letter that Aisha sent through Bahadur for Saakshi before leaving that even after returning She first went to Saakshi's place to visit her. Also, now that it's clear that Bahadur was a mole ,how did he managed to get an entry at Rathod's place as a driver knowing the fact that the two husband &wife are cops &very vigilant.

 

She wouldn't admit it even to her husband, but despite knowing Arjun personally now, she still felt her heart thud nervously each time he delivered his trademark samjhe ya samjhaun'with a menacing glare. 
***Calling Rathod***

Tripathi *Le pad gayi kalege wich thand*. 3-4aur de dena next time  

Dig vikram Kumar

Akash Singh Sodha +He was in the Indian Army

Awwwii Ayesha-Saakshi moments were adorable. Ayesha is more like a mother hen trying to bring happiness in Saakshi's life.**Happy Wale Tears**

Lollipop**Calling sweetly**Somewhere at the back of their hear they did get the thought that  the two are no strangers right? I mean she is sakshi.stargazer  for him &he is arjun_ footballlfanatic for her especially with the two calling each other by their first name
"Arre Deva!",  Did that expression reminded him about his nemesis sakshi.stargazer  .
I m sure this cannot get unnoticed by atleast THE ACP Arjun Rawte
 
What were you expecting? 
Was this that he had been missing all along?  

 After this, I can very well come to conclusion that Arjun k dil ki  baj gayi hai

They both carried painful secrets in their heart and were pretending to be someone they weren't, willingly.
Ok here's another lollipop. Saakshi's painful secret is very well understood but what's with Arjun's painful one other than the death of his mentor. What's the conspiracy behind his parents, especially his mother?  
 
Also ,his secret mission that landed him in Dhanaulti that even Rathod isn't aware of?
 
P.S.:KOi Mumbai mein snow lekar aaoOuch


Will be back, chudailon.. 

Oopsie,.. Sweet-hearts.. 

Fursat se thank-you jo bolna hai.. 

I louuve you too.. Hug


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