Posted: 06 October 2014 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Devilicious
wow..that was so amazing
i read ur story many days ago and i was eagerly waiting for ur update and finally thanks god u did it!
part 11 was so awesome...
thanks for the pm
Glad you returned to find it..
Originally posted by EashaYousufzai
read your FF and am greatful I did.
the name you choose.
has an aura of it's own.
pulled me towards the story.
I started reading it I just couldn't stop myself from reading further.
sat on my chair eyes glued to the screen.
couldn't avert my gaze until I finished it.
way you described every emotions and twist and turn.
just mind blowing.
You are just a gifted writer.
back to your updates...
way you portrayed Sakshi..
heart wrench imagining her in the station.
her nineteen years of life she had seen both good and bad.
like a very stern person.
what safety measure they were talking about?
was leaving the city she brought up.
girl lost her mother in such early age now her father died too!!!!!!
tragedy she had to face!!!!!!
Mamaji is really very genorous who offered his hand in her bad time.
cut down her sim card!!!!!!
is a very brave and intelligent girl.
man of steel.
the ChoRee duo.
Arjun ka to kuch nehi ho skata.
kaha mere bhi dimag mein same sawal.
hai ya Atankvadi?"
showed on the tv screen that Arjun reacted like that?
his mentor died.
like he was a good person.
Arjun was very attached to him.
in which they believed blindly failed them.
only thing left is revenge.
started the update with a mystery.
years have passed since the incident.
were looking for revenge but what happened?
was unprepared and needed time to be ready.
what happened with Arjun?
is he in the academy?
Sakshi is a total mystery.
she still live with her uncle.
was she doing in the dark night alone in the road?
assignment she was talking about?
is such a gentleman.
do they know each other from before?
some incidents separated them?
Thank you soo much, my dear.. This really means a lot..
I wish I could reply to every comment of yours, but unfortunately I'm running out of time.. So quoting the first one.. I will, from the next time onwards..
Yes, there's a lot more to their past, which will be revealed in bits and pieces.. Bohot kuch choot raha hai..
Originally posted by misha26
eshu it was the one i told u ajeeb si dastan lovely naa ilove ittt
aisi stories read kar k iwant to write something as well
Thank you for recommending it.. Really appreciate it..
Oh! You must.. That is exactly how we all started out..
Originally posted by _Nikita_
Loved it sooo very much...
Ek Dum Awwwsssmmm...
Loved Aisha-Sakshi moment... Very sweet... the blangles gifing was Lovely...
Loved the changes in Arakshi's relationship...
Sakshi didn't celebrate her birthday for last six years... n now Arjun is with her...
Arakshi moments were Supper Awwssmmm...
WOW! Maggi n Showman...
Arjun bring her smile back...
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM
Thank you so much..
Glad u enjoyed reading it..
Originally posted by Snehajain
But Why Arjun-Sakshi are not together???
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
Firstly, @ Bold.. They will be.. Very soon.. Oh! And thank you soo much for that detailed POV.. I really enjoyed reading all of it. Wish I could answer some of those, but I'd rather leave you with those for now..
Lots more hints and real scenarios coming up in the next one..
Stay tuned for more..
Originally posted by skrafty
Just loved them
part 11 was great
the case part was nicely written
Loved Aisha and Sakshi's convo
Things have started to change
So is Arjun and his relation with Sakshi
loved their growing Bond
So it was Sakshi's birthday
and he made it one to be cherished for Lifetime
Tea and Maggie
Arakshi making a snowman
waiting for the next part
Thank you.. My favorite too..
Glad you liked it. Lots more cuteness and revelations coming up!
Originally posted by Nethravathi
Part 11 n 12
Sakshi was glad tht Arjun was with her in hard time. Aisha n Arjun's bonding is getting stronger n close too.
Aisha teased Sakshi. Sakshi ko doubt hain ki jis Arjun ko vo abhi jaanti hain vo pehle hi ek doosre ko jaante hain
Arjun n Sakshi r getting closer day by day. Arjun was with Sakshi on her birthday.
Tea, Maggie. Wow Arjun tum bhi naa.
Snowman banaya Sakshi aur Arjun ne. Perfect gift fr sakshi as it made her happy.
Yep.. Thanks a lot..
Yes, Arjun is changing.. Lots more coming up next..
Originally posted by rajeeviansonai
awesome update dear.
Keep it up :)
Originally posted by shreya09
I sooo love the friendship of Arjun & Aisha here... "she still felt her heart thud nervously each time he delivered his trademark samjhe ya samjhaun' with a menacing glare.
love the way she is making everything easy between Arjun & her angry husband.Can imagine an annoyed & amused Rathore glaring at his sweet wife & best-friend's banter
Sakshi...was feeling really bad for the birthday girl... glad Arjun reached there... atleast someone was there for her...
... ah this part was really sweet
the noseless snowman
... an angry Arjun staring at it to detect the defect
and then Sakshi's smile after seeing the wooden nose
it was perfect
brilliant & beautiful chapter
waiting for more
More of Rayesha and Arjun in the next.. Aww.. Yes.. He would burn it down, if he could.. Thank you..
Originally posted by sisodia_shefali
nice updates and as u updated 2 parts so can't even complain for late updates rishvat jo dedi
so aisha had some doubt on her driver and so she clarified all with arjun
trivedi is not going to open his mouth so easily and now DIG says that driver was a mole
confusion and difficulties have increased for arjun in his investigation
confusions r there for both arjun and sakshi as well regarding their feelings for each other but then time will tell them what is in there hearts
aisha came to meet sakshi and through her sakshi came to know arjun's full name and the name has brought some memories back but then she is confused
oho toh daily coffee saath main pena routine ho gaya
nice atleast they r coming closer to each other and may be soon they will realize what their is deep down in their heart
sakshi wanted to be alone for her b'day but some how arjun landed with her and now that he knows her so well and can read her every move knew something was bothering her
he stayed with her long enough for her to open up if not much then atleast she said abt her b'day
what he did for her was so out of his character but then may be this is real arjun who wants just happiness and joy for sakshi its just that he realized it now and may be even sakshi realized what arjun is for her
their heart have fallen for eachother its just matter of time when they both themselves will realize
hope thay come to know abt each other 's past soon
thanks for pm
Dobara rishvat milne wali hai.. And I've made sure, you wouldn't complain.. Yes, they're slowly getting there but acceptance will take a while.. Falling in love and accepting, can sometime take ages.. Yeh dono toh phir bhi novices hain..
I do not think it was out of character, that was the real Arjun.. Well, you wouldn't know, because I haven't revealed him yet.. Remember, no Roshni and hence our ACP sahab is as normal as any other guy out there..
Thank you.. More realisations on the way..
Originally posted by ...Maha-Srk...
superb love it
its feel so real, awesome
wonderful updates thank u so much 4 such detailed n long parts, finger crossed 4 arjun n sakshi facebook but lagta hai uske liye abhi bohat time hai but eagerly w8ng 4 next plz continue soon n thanx 4 pm
Facebook? Typo tha kya?
Lots more coming up..
Originally posted by Shivi1997
wow...such long updates...thank you so much... coming to ur updates... I love it their unnamed relationship is growing day by day...hope it ever turned to love...may be...kahin na kahin thodi feelings to hai ek dusre ke liye...its quite visible... snowman...nt bad...mujhe v banana hai...afsos yahan itni garmi hai ki snowman mera pani pani ho jae...hehe... awww...hand in hand...lagta hai aisha ki khawish jaldi puri hone wali hai... once again thanks for the updates... love u
Their unnamed relationship will now get a name, well unofficially atleast.. lol.. I know.. I miss the snow and the snowman we used to make.. Mumbai ki garmi mein snowman bhi suicide kar lega.. Thank you..
Originally posted by Kiyaa-Rhapsody
woww such fabulous, long updates! Firstly, I loooved the cover photo and the quote. and overall, love love loved the last two chapters! I love the way you're showing arakshi's journey, it's so breathtakingly beautiful. those unspoken feelings they're starting to harbour for each other.. hayee dil khush kar diya. update soon girlie! :)
Thank you dear..
Glad you could relate to the fic and Arakshi's journey..
Originally posted by Arakshiya_58
amazimg updates di...
really loved it a lot...
its so beautifulll...and wonderfulll...
u just create the lovely magic with arakshi...
that line janamdin mubarak ho remind me arakshi scene...**sigh*
its brilliant piece of work...
plz do con.soon...
Me too.. Chaddo! I will..
Originally posted by Devangana
Loved it. Please continue soon. It is so rivetting..
Thanks a lot..
Originally posted by yams.s
Aisha coming to know about the happenings in the Academy in her absence
Saakshi and Arjun trying to figure out their realationship with each other.
Aisha and Saakshi's conversation was beautiful
Saakshi never knew Arjun by his first name.
Hope they are together soon
They will get there sooner than you think..
Naah.. She never knew him by his last name.. And there's a mystery there too..
Originally posted by yams.s
Saakshi feeling very sad on her birthday but Arjun steps in and make it a memorable day for her
Both of them making snowman was funny
Funny? I hope the cute funny.. JK..
Originally posted by Radhika Shah
Originally posted by coolRD
upd8 ws wndrful.. arjun nd sakshi's relation has improved quite a lot nd its so clear that they r falling for each other.. really deep
loved ayesha nd sakshi's convo.. gave sakhi sme hints abt her arjun
ws quite painful also bt beauitfully writn.. I'm loving this ayesha actually.. a very headstrong person.. her convo with arjun brought a huge smile on my face
not 2 4gt the chat convo.. ufff!! they r jst amazing!!!
the school scene ws jst outstanding.. specially d snowman part.. it ws so beautifully written that I couldn't stop myself 4m reading it again nd again.. showed how deep a bond is forming between them
why am I getting this inkling that smethng's cooking among DIG, Abhinav Krishna nd Akash Singh Sodha
can't wait 4 d stry 2 unfold.. dying 2 read d nxt upd8
continue soon.. nd thnx 4 d pm
p.s.: loved d banner
Lol.. Of course not.. Isliye toh pitvaati hoon na.. Oh! I've always loved Ayesha as much as I loved Arjun..
Aww.. Thanks so much..
Gotcha! Hold on to that thought.. We'll get back to it soon.. Thank you..
Originally posted by anitasharma
arjun-ayesha and sakshi-ayesha was great
snowman part was cute
waiting for next
And Arjun-sakshi part?
Originally posted by _BlackPearl_
Both are feeling the pull towards each other, and both are holding back for other's betterment or for their own reasons.
There is change in every relation with time.
Arjun truly understood her unspoken pain, and act accordingly.
Very Nice chapters !
Yes, but perhaps those reasons aren't strong enough.. Who knows..
Originally posted by anu91
no words to say...
Originally posted by Anjali.Mital
The updates were awesome...
Slowly they are getting more and more comfortable and
friendly with each other...thats really great...
And a snowman...!!! that was so sweet ...
He just managed to make her happy on her birthday...nice..
Thanks for the pms dear...
Thank you so much.. Glad u like it.. Yes.. Ayesha is the soul of this story.. What would anyone do without her..
And yep.. So glad you could relate to Arakshi's journey from being strangers to friends..
He would go to any ends to make her smile, especially now that he's willing to give them a chance..
Thank you so much..