Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4 - Page 63

res!!!!!

Hi, 

Ajeeb Daastaan Hai Yeh
Kahan Shuru Kahan Khatam
Yeh Manzile Hai Kaunsi
Na Voh Samajh Sake Na Hum

Ajeeb Daastaan Hai Yeh
Kahan Shuru Kahan Khatam
Yeh Manzile Hai Kaunsi
Na Voh Samajh Sake Na Hum

Yeh Roshni Ke Saath Kyoon
Dhuaan Utha Chiraag Se
Yeh Roshni Ke Saath Kyoon
Dhuaan Utha Chiraag Se
Yeh Khwaab Dekhti Hoon Main
Ke Jag Padi Hoon Khwaab Se
Ajeeb Daastaan Hai Yeh...


yes this was the song I was listening to while reading this whole update...

the pain and anguish of sakshi mixed quite up with the misunderstandings and her own relevant assumptions were rightfully described well...

did I tell you that u r one of those gifted writers who make me feel the pain of the characters right to the core
hats off to u for this

that filthy creature of disgust deserved this from arjun for doing those horrific things to his wife...

you described the serene and beautiful waterfalls so spell bounded that I could feel myself walking in between those pine trees...

pain reflecting through each word of arjun sent shivers down my spine

I m glad that the confrontation waits as of now...
I really wanted both of them to know the real of each other

well that was an expected Cliffhanger

continue soon avni

PS: dying to read Lady in red...



Edited by fly.high - 9 years ago

Hey dear
Sorry read late and comments late
Very nice indeed
Especially the scene you create
Mesmerising me
The way you express the pain Arjun feel
It's really touch my heart
Sakshi anger and after that her consoling way
It's so beautiful
Thanks for pm me
Very good going story
I can't wait to reveal Arjun past

amazing update ..
very well written.. i could actually imagine it all before my eyes and thats what i really like with your stories.. ur way of writing is fabulous...
arjun's pain and sakshi's conflict was very nycily potrayed..
the scene was beautifully created...
i am waiting u to reveal arjun's past soon
so plz plz dont b late.. and contd. soon
thnx for pm

Speechless !!!!!! 

Awesome update

Res for thank-you's.. 

And another.. 😆

kahan  gai res kar k😡😡😡  ab unress k liye ek or letter likhon kiya????🤢🤢🤢🤢