Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4 (Page 59)

kunchu IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 July 2014 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
Abla nari on res Embarrassed
Hope i am not in between

Haye snowfall
Its a dream for me to see once in my lifetime
all white and cold...
If magic existed for real, this was it..
true, my dear
wo shirt abhi bhi wahi hai?? hihi... dekho aur dekho... hihihiEmbarrassed
Jay and ye Abhinav Krishna wala funda bohot seedhe look denewala twisted funda lagtha hai. I am not a fool to think its as simple as it looks
lolipop banana shuru kardo my Genie
wo school wala part was too cute re. and hospital scene so warm. 
I loved the khamoshi wala support.
love you...
Silly talks me kuch kuch puch rahe hai Sakshi ke bare me. abhi bhi bohot kuch jaana hai
Aisha ko jhatka hi mila. that precap made me love you more 
The memory of her dad's last time was indeed painful. How much did that man suffer?
hit by number of bullets, branded traiter and even burnt into flames in a hospital car park!!
No wonder Arjun is taking the event too personal just like Sakshi
waiting for more n more
even I am greedy u see
This is my first comment to any updates after my superb holidays and loads of food that I am already missing

Edited by kunchu - 15 July 2014 at 2:51am

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SeasonOfLeaves IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 July 2014 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
Avniii Avniii AvniiiHug
Acha, tell me one thing, how do you manage to keep me hooked until I see the stars at the end and realise that it's all over?
And you said it was long ROFL
Like. Honestly.
Why couldn't you just go on and on and onnn..I was beginning to enjoy the snowww (even though its so summery here!) when you stopped!Ouch
I was like this 
First of all, that scene by the window when Sakshi was thinking about her father...and those memories, they just took me to another world. Especially what you said about the snow - 

"If magic existed for real, this was it..."

Snow is magic Embarrassed
I think your writing made it even more beautifulEmbarrassed

And then the school scene where they meet Day Dreaming I was so reminded of my school and the prayers! 
Btw every time they met I was like 
This cracked me up so bad ROFL

"Aap barf mein bhi jog pe jaate hain?", she casted a glance at his casual attire and raised a brow.

LOOOLLL barf mein jogging...although that would be quite an eye pleasing sightBlushing Hayeee mujhe wahan jaana haiii
Hmmm wonder what Sakshi is planning now...Ermm

I feel the same about hospitals as SakshiOuch but then she has a painful memory associated with it...that was sadOuch

LOOL Arjun had a break and where did he decide to be? By her side. SighhhDay Dreaming
Yeah you have awakened the hopeless romantic in me again Embarrassed
I realise I am typing an essay out of the comment but I am sure you wont mindLOLLOLLOL

Achaaa so, that scene by the temple was just...

Even silences can speak volumes..sighhh. He was there for her when she needed someone the most *dreamy eyes*Day Dreaming

Arjun pursed his lips and nodded, "I'm glad you didn't mind me coming here. I just wanted to make sure that he was fine." That you were fine, a voice corrected him..  

Yess yesss just what I thought lol LOL
You're soo falling for her ACP RawteWink
This part was just beyond beautifully written AvniiiBig smile
Then the scene at the hospital mess just made me hungryLOL Even though I have just had dinner lol
It was such a simple moment and yet I think your words made it so much more beautiful Heart
Am I making sense here?LOL
The last he wants to get Sakshi back? But the question still remains as to what assignment she is on! You're not gonna reveal that until later are youLOL
Anyhooo waiting to
Thank youu for the PM and hope you update that TS soonWink
Am being greedy don't mind meeeROFL

Thanks soo much for giving a "long" update (it wasn't long ..not when it's your writingLOL)
I wanna go back to Dhanaulti! *pouts*
Update sooon and love youuHug

Edited by ritu_24 - 14 July 2014 at 4:53pm

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sisodia_shefali Goldie

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Posted: 14 July 2014 at 1:24pm | IP Logged
nice update
sakshi trying to get to her normal life but will take time and so will people around her it is said na time heals everything
both arjun and sakshi can't help but to think abt eachother and have that strange feeling that r they strangers or r connected somewhere some how
arjun and sakshi convo at school gave arjun some thing to think may be she has more then what meets his eyes
arjun had started feeling for her may be it is just concern but then it is strong enough for him to go to hospital so that he could be there for her and how so ever sakshi may believe that she is strong enough and don't want anyone's support but then u always need some one who can be there for u even silent support is also more then enough
aisha back and getting shocker seeing these two together
precap looks good will sakshi realize that who he is after knowing his first name

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life93 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 July 2014 at 3:23pm | IP Logged
hi avani diHug...
what a magic u create! haye ! beautiful snowfall all i can imagine Day Dreaming...
but really u write each word with a magical touch that i just land into the sceneClap...
sakshi watching the snowfall and her memoriesSmileSmile...and yes ! sakshi is back Big smile...
ACP is always on !WinkWink...always om right time at right place Wink...i'm going to be insane ! just imagine arjun n sakshi snowy atmoshphere Tongue..
n he went to meet sakshi and their conversation in front of the godess idolSmile loved it !
arjun ke silent gestures n sakshi's thanks ...Heart...loving it !
and now dinner ! Wink...chalo baat yahan toh pahuchiLOL...ayesha LOL...
sakshi's past work clearly shows how effiecient she isClapClapClap...
waiting for Sakshi S...back in actionBig smile...
thanks a lot for all the brave awesome female characters u create be it ...sakshi, riya, Ro, Reva...n Priya ...they r my insipirationBig smileBig gave me immense strength...thank uHug ...
precap is super interesting !!!!!

BTW  what about SYHTPH ??...update soon diHug
p.s - the " kuch kuch hota hai" wala AVI Day Dreaming...seriously kuch kuch hota hai dekh kar :PLOLWink

Edited by life93 - 21 July 2014 at 1:47pm

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Humzy IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 July 2014 at 3:47pm | IP Logged
Lovely update
Loved it
Very nicely written
Continue soon

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drunkiiebabe IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 July 2014 at 4:15pm | IP Logged
Awesome update
Thanks for the pm

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SeasonOfLeaves IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 July 2014 at 4:59pm | IP Logged
Just wanted to say that I unreserveddd my comment but I think you'll notice it anyway. 
It's super longROFL

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_Shivani_ Goldie

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Posted: 14 July 2014 at 6:58pm | IP Logged
Its awsm
grt writing haan
aww she is missing her dad..that pain is so unbearable..i bet... :(
arjun n sakshi ke bich ackward toh khatm hue..
Ab arjun ko kaun bachaye aisha or shree se..
I love it
nice update
update soon

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