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Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4 (Page 16)

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Posted: 01 February 2014 at 11:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shreya09

amazing start
no meeting would have been better than this
beautiful writing
superb Clap Clap
waiting for more Embarrassed

Originally posted by skrafty

Awesome update
loved it
Beautifully written
waiting for the next part
continue soon

Originally posted by _Nikita_

Awwssmmm part
loved it
Supperbbb...
Woowww! Sam-Aisha married...
loved Arjun-Sakshi meet... suupper awwssmmm n cute...
cont sooon
thanks for the PM

Thank you! More coming up! Big smile

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Posted: 01 February 2014 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by vidya.anand

Brilliant update...
Nice start...kuch kuch samajh aagaya...
Sameer and Aisha already married...and Arjun joining the academy as second in command...
Looks like a big under cover operation to find out the truth...loving it already...super interesting


and loved the Arjun-Sakshi meet...Sakshi is so cute and Arjun sweet bhi hai...awesome combo!

cont soon

Thanks Vidzi.. 
Yeah.. But it isn't all about the truth, for the moment.. ACP Sahab khichdi paka raha hain.. Wink

Yup.. I hope cute-sweet Arakshi clicks! 

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Posted: 01 February 2014 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by life93

hi avani diHug
 
hmmm...haye ! barsih hai . cutting chai, . aur acp and sakshi ...Wink humein aur kya chahiyeWinkLOL...
 
mausam bhi hai suhana ...aur kuch na ho what the LOL u know the song khushi used to  sing tease arnavLOL...
 
well finaly they met ...mulaqat toh ho gayi now as they have a mission head jaldi se kuch kuch karwao naWink...
 
precap sounds too interesting!
 
update soon di ...when you are updating LADY IN RED ?

Lol.. Abhi se baarish mein romance ke sapne.. LOLWink

'Aaj mausam hai suhaana.
Kapde dhone ka hai bahana..
What the! What the! What the!

Kya dhoop nikli suhaani..
Ho gayi kapdon ki safai..
What the..what the..what the.. 

Lol.. I've lost it.. I just Loved Khushi Kumari Gupta *holding mangalsutra* Singh Raizada.. LOL

Err.. karvaate hain.. ruko! Wink

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Posted: 01 February 2014 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kunchu

who said the meet was not epic
IT IS!!!
the first part was very smooth going through some of the changes in Sakshi's life.
Even Sree, Chotu Sameer and Aisha
then came his entry
the rain, teastalll and meet scene was just picture perfect my dear.loved it to the bits
waiting eagerly for next part
come back soon

Thank you Kunchu.. Hug
The next one's right here.. It's a bit slow, but we'll get to the dhamaka soon.. Tongue

Originally posted by miss_precious

Amazing work and u were right... Arakshi are so different in this... I like that... Thanks for the pm

Please update soon x

Thanks.. Yes, they are.. I wanted them to be.. Big smile

Originally posted by rizwanaa

awesome n interesting start
Sakshi's convo with l'll girl was nice
loved the care which she n her uncle hold for each other
Choree were nice as always
Arjun coming to academy as second in command
Arakshi's meeting was beautiful
Arjun helping to reach her destination was really
sweet n appreciable gesture of his
her hesitations n mind state was well defined
while Arjun was a keen observant 
thanks for pm
cont soon

Thanks dear.. 
Glad you like it.. 

Originally posted by Snehajain

Awesome start...
 
ClapClapClap ClapClapClap 
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

Originally posted by Anjali.Mital

Wow... I loved their first meet...
It was so beautiful...

Awesome update dear...

Waiting for more...

Thanks for the pm...

Originally posted by -Beth-

Great and lovely update!

Thanks ladies.. Embarrassed
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Posted: 01 February 2014 at 12:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sisodia_shefali

Even if we i want i cant complaint for late update because the update u have given is simply outstanding and beautiful
u described everything so beautifully the whole valley forest and all the charecters sakshi arjun and ya even shree sam aisha and chotu
Will be just waiting for next chapter Day Dreaming
thanks for pm Smile Hug

Hey.. Lol.. I'm thankful about that.. LOL
Thanks! Glad you're liking it so far.. Hug

Originally posted by roshanay

You write beautifully... loved t:)

Thanks! Big smile

Originally posted by Amritamalhotra

You know Avni what I was feeling. ..
I know its too early to say this...
But I feeling ek movie banni chahiye iss story pe...
It was really like watching a movie..
I can see the tea stall..
I can see Sakshi to hesitate...
I can see her bindi..
I can see Arjun to open the door for her..
I donn if this feeling of mine is due to the detailing..
Or due to the way of your storytelling. ..
Respect you a lot Avantika...
I am still in trance..
An awesome piece of art is under creation stage...
Awesome chapter...
Their meeting was so beautiful..
it was like an usual smell of soil after first rain...
Waiting for next chapter...
Take care...

Hey Amrita.. Big smile
Aww.. Movie?! Arre baap re.. Pehle mujhe likh toh lene do.. Who knows, sab joootey phenkenge.. LOL

Thank you soo much. Really appreciate all of it.. 




Edited by _Mohabbatgirl_ - 01 February 2014 at 1:01pm
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Posted: 01 February 2014 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by yas23

Awesome update
loved the start
so Sameer and Aisha are already married
Shree and Chotu scene was nice
Arjun joining the academy as the second in command
Arjun Sakshi meeting was amazing and cute
looking forward to the next part
thanks for pm
continue soon

Thanks dear.. Glad you like it.. Big smile


Originally posted by yams.s

Wonderful Update. Awesome.

Please do continue this story.eager to know how it unfolds


Thank you! Big smile


Originally posted by PoohLover

Hello ji..first of all hope you feeling much better Hug
Coming to the update...thats was very interesting Big smile Big smile
I came to know about the places,i never heard of and i love it Tongue Tongue
Hmmm thats going to be very interesting to know how to person with the same goal will come together to achieve it,in their own way Smile Smile
Awesome update and superb precap...am actually eager to discover the other side of sakshi now that you mentioned Embarrassed Embarrassed
Thank you heaps for the update and pm avniii Hug Hug

Thanks so much.. Hug
Yupp.. better now.. Still recuperating.. 
Oh! You have to visit it.. It's one of the most beautiful places in India.. Embarrassed

Err.. I'm going to cheat.. TongueLOL
More on the way! 


Originally posted by Swara85

Awesome update..
Sam and Aisha married..
Shree and Chotu's antics as always sweet..
And Arjun and Sakshi's meet was superb..loved that part..
Waiting for next part
cont soon. 

Originally posted by anu91

awesome and lovely update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
waiting for next...
do cont soon...


Thanks! 
More on the way! 




Edited by _Mohabbatgirl_ - 01 February 2014 at 1:10pm

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Posted: 01 February 2014 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ritu_24

New FF yayayayayayayyyDancingDancingDancing
That too by you Avantika!!! YayyyDancingDancingDancing
Ok, sorry for the super late reply to this! I had exams and then was super busy at work! Sooo just catching up with all updates Embarrassed
What a brilliant prologue! I must say again, you literally can write a novel (in fact this would make a very good oneEmbarrassed) and get it published! Like really! And i m not just saying it 
The beginning was beyond amaazing..loved how you introduced Sakshi and Arjun
I was literally at the station, waiting with Sakshi.. but feel so bad for her Ouch

Ditto here, my dear.. I've been soo busy and then sick with fever and migraine! 
I'm sorry, will read your PM's soonish.. 
Thanks soo much! Oh god! a novel? wait until u read more.. A flying shoe might come my way.. LOL

Coming to the first chapter!
First of all - OMG have u been to Dhanaulti? I went there so many years ago..and it is beautiful! Its the first time i saw someone mentioning that placeBig smile MMM you transported me there, amongst the mountains and the pine treesEmbarrassed

I have been.. It was an accidental trip.. And trust me, i can't get those scenic memories out of my head even today! It's soo serene and beautiful.. Embarrassed

LOOOLLL Shree and Chotu's dialogues are hilarious hahahaLOLLOL 
Aisha's entry was superbbb!! hahaha i can just imagine Chotu and Shree gobbling down the paranthas LOLLOLLOL
OMG your descriptions are so amaaazing
Sorry if the comment is getting a bit long. I m actually reading and writing at the same time lol

Oh I love them all! Embarrassed  Thanks.. 

OH. MY. GOD.
Did you just say that was NOT an epic meet? Seriously? Did i hear that right?
That was the most amazing first meet i have ever read! I could literally feel the rain, hear the thunder (even though its not raining here - for a change lolLOL)
And I could see the whole scene playing out in front of my eyes..like the most amazing movie ever!
Ahhh it was just amazing beyond amazing!
And the last few lines were just superbbbClapClapClap

Oh my! You're not too good for my bloating ego.. LOLLOL 
Jokes apart, thank you! I love the rains and I love Arakshi toh club kar ditta.. Wink

I dunno how you write so beautifully! Most of all, how come you didnt go into being a writer? You could have had a good many books published - honestly! 

Eeesh.. It's just a hobby and some pagalpanti.. LOL  But yeah, I love reading.. And you my dear, are a fantastic writer yourself! Hug

Anyway already bada wala comment ho gaya hehe
I absolutely loved it! And i shall be waiting for the next update whenever it is Embarrassed
I shall be going to bed with the memory of their first meet 
Thanks Avantika HugHugHug

P.S - I hope you are feeling better now! Hug

Thanks soo very much! Glad you like it.. 


Edited by _Mohabbatgirl_ - 01 February 2014 at 1:28pm

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