Posted: 01 February 2014 at 11:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ll-Shilpa-ll
I am finally here behna, I may not be able to say much as my brain still hasn't recovered from the bout of flu so please excuse me if I don't make sense at times.
So Sakshi left everything behind after her father's death not only because she needed to but this is the place where she would be able to find the answers to her father's death and his tarnished name.
It must have taken lot of strength and courage for her to do what she did. I am glad she still has her mamaji, at least one relative she can count on.
I loved her playful interaction with the little girl, that was sweet and it would exactly how I picture Sakshi.
The moment between Chotu and Shree is always heartwarming, I could picture the whole scene including their expression from you description of the scene and their conversation.
And surprise, surprise...Ayesha is already Mrs. Rathore in this one, I loved it. So she quit being a cop to be a house wife, again not hard to picture, in fact I think I would have expected this. Thanks behna for bringing her in, I was worried you might leave her out of this one.
When you mentioned Arjun without the past, I wondered how you would bring about his back story, but I shouldn't have been surprised.
He must have been really close to his mentor for him to be affected like this after his death and dismantled reputation.
Both Arjun and Sakshi have a motive to be in the place where they are, unknown to each other they are both looking for the same thing, I wonder what it will take for them to realize.
So finally they meet, and it seems this first meet is going to take them the long way.
Really loved the update, you revealed so much in this one, and now we have the back stories of each character, I am looking forward to this one behna. Please don't make us wait long.
So sorry for this short comment, will try to do better next time.
Aww.. don't u bother.. I hope you're feeling much better now..
Sorry about being late, but you know the reasons now.. I officially hate migraines..
Thank God! I was worried about it seeming like a misfit, coz the characters are very different from what we're used to seeing..
Like I said, I love Ayesha waay too much to keep her out of my fics.. Yup. Arjun was very close to his mentor. DIG Anand was almost like a father-figure to him (And someone else too). there's a surprise in there.. Errm.. warned all, it's bhery bhery filmy.. So the revelation to either one of them is going to be very filmy too.. Thanks behna.. I hope to get moving ahead with this one after the next Chapter..