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Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4 (Page 15)

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Posted: 26 January 2014 at 12:57am | IP Logged
Yea, I had guessed it before.Both Arjun and Sakshi are set out for the same purpose.They both have the same goal and determination unknown to themselves.
Their first meet was well written and interesting too.
Great start.
Loved it:)    
Thanks for the PM.

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Posted: 27 January 2014 at 6:35am | IP Logged
Okay
So Arjun mentor was Sakshis dad
Loved this updatd
The way everyone was introduced
Update soon
Cant wait 4 their next meeting
Thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 27 January 2014 at 6:53am | IP Logged
nice update
luvd it
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Posted: 29 January 2014 at 3:52am | IP Logged
intrestng start...cntinue soon:-)
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Posted: 30 January 2014 at 7:46am | IP Logged
amazing update
cont soon

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Posted: 01 February 2014 at 11:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ll-Shilpa-ll

*Edited*

I am finally here behna, I may not be able to say much as my brain still hasn't recovered from the bout of flu so please excuse me if I don't make sense at times.


So Sakshi left everything behind after her father's death not only because she needed to but this is the place where she would be able to find the answers to her father's death and his tarnished name.

It must have taken lot of strength and courage for her to do what she did. I am glad she still has her mamaji, at least one relative she can count on.

I loved her playful interaction with the little girl, that was sweet and it would exactly how I picture Sakshi.

The moment between Chotu and Shree is always heartwarming, I could picture the whole scene including their expression from you description of the scene and their conversation.

And surprise, surprise...Ayesha is already Mrs. Rathore in this one, I loved it. So she quit being a cop to be a house wife, again not hard to picture, in fact I think I would have expected this. Thanks behna for bringing her in, I was worried you might leave her out of this one.

When you mentioned Arjun without the past, I wondered how you would bring about his back story, but I shouldn't have been surprised.

He must have been really close to his mentor for him to be affected like this after his death and dismantled reputation.

Both Arjun and Sakshi have a motive to be in the place where they are, unknown to each other they  are both looking for the same thing, I wonder what it will take for them to realize.

So finally they meet, and it seems this first meet is going to take them the long way.

Really loved the update, you revealed so much in this one, and now we have the back stories of each character, I am looking forward to this one behna. Please don't make us wait long.

So sorry for this short comment, will try to do better next time.



Hey B1.. Hug
Aww.. don't u bother.. I hope you're feeling much better now.. 

Sorry about being late, but you know the reasons now.. I officially hate migraines.. D'oh
Thank God! I was worried about it seeming like a misfit, coz the characters are very different from what we're used to seeing.. 

Like I said, I love Ayesha waay too much to keep her out of my fics.. Wink

Yup. Arjun was very close to his mentor. DIG Anand was almost like a father-figure to him (And someone else too). there's a surprise in there.. Wink

Errm.. warned all, it's bhery bhery filmy.. So the revelation to either one of them is going to be very filmy too.. LOL

Thanks behna.. I hope to get moving ahead with this one after the next Chapter.. LOL

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Posted: 01 February 2014 at 11:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rinku95

Awesome thanks for pm

Originally posted by drunkiiebabe

awesome start
thanks for the pm 

Originally posted by Sakuu

Awesome first chapter!

Thanks so much guys.. Big smile
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Posted: 01 February 2014 at 11:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Krazzy4u786

Awesome start!!
Love ur style of writing!!
Thnx 4 d pm!!
Extremely Sorry about nt commenting on ur other stories bt will soon catch up on them and start commenting regularly again!!


Originally posted by misakiscarlet

awesome post..
their meet was azing
well written..
continue soon and do pm me when u update nxt

Originally posted by ...Maha-Srk...

Awesum start
veri well written amazing n intresting story plz continue soon n thanx 4 pm w8tng 4 next

Originally posted by IshaniSinghh

very beautifully written, awsm


Thank you.. Glad you like it.. 

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