Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4 (Page 100)

Swara85 Senior Member

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Posted: 20 May 2015 at 10:32am | IP Logged
Haila..!!!!!Shocked My comment got posted FINALLY..! *Relieved*

Part 15:
The quote at the beginning itself was.. so true..
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This is the toughest listen to your heart or to believe what your mind tells you. Sakshi's conflicting thoughts, feelings and emotions she was battling with was beautifully etched out..Thumbs UpI loved it, though it was like feel-sad part but still I loved it.
And Yes..I got the answer to my question..I should have waited to know..
She is going to meet him..?? My heart is beating at a faster rate..
Aree no re..
Disapproveghar pe nahi..ab academy mein bhi nahi.. what are you doing Di..?

Resort that too in a hilly area and waterfalls surrounding it..*dreaming*
Day Dreaming
OMG..Jaw-dropping description about the falls.. *dreaming again*..No can't distract me like this..I need to get back to Sakshi and Arjun but the waterfall..Hayee..!!! *dreaming again*..Does such place really exist..?If  yes..then I wanna go there..*restless* *sigh*..*dreaming*Day Dreaming

She found his vehicle and relieved that he is not hurt..*tears*
Okay..It took me lot of struggle to focus on the story..
Arjun drenched in water..
Blushingok this is not the time to drool over..but still..Embarrassed and the song..EmbarrassedDamn I'm getting distracted too much in this update.Dead

The last scene was
Clap...He is so much pain..Cryand the hug..My throat feels dry and I need water now..
It was Beautifully done..I loved it.!
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Will be back with my comments on the pending chapters..

Swara85 Senior Member

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Posted: 20 May 2015 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
Part 16:
This was an extremely emotional part. I'm chocked with emotions.
I'm not able to say anything here because I guess I have taken this chapter way too personally. But I can surely say that the emotions brought out here from every character was perfect and not like *for-the-sake-of-writing* thing.

And about Arakshi..Brilliantly written..Their relationship went a level higher and the depth just increased..
Loved the kind of bonding they had till now.It was Beautiful.

Arjun's character specially in this chapter was very much connecting.And I loved it how you have portrayed him.

Esshhh..I am reading all the chapters again..This is the 3rd time I'm reading the whole story again in this one week..And I'm loving it even more..Embarrassed

P.S: Di..the convo between Arjun and his ma..the font colour makes it difficult to read against black bg..

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anu91 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 31 May 2015 at 12:08am | IP Logged
Hello di...
Sry for late reply...
Its was awesome parts last two parts in one go...
Just loved it...
The way Arjun observed sakshi was cute...
There scene in kitchen awe!! Just loved it...
Superb update d...
Thank u so much for pm...

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_Tabassum_ IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 June 2015 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved It
The kitchen wala part was Mindblowing
Loved Arakshi's teasing n leg pulling sessions Sooo Lovely
Mamaji also noticed the bond between them
Loved the little scene on the verandah
Arjun and Sakshi both have started hoping for a life togethe
"Bharva baingan se nahi, Sakshi.." Loved this sooo very much
I wish he had complete the sentence
Wonderfully Written
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

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..sweetchilly.. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 June 2015 at 11:54am | IP Logged
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Roja1990 Newbie

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Posted: 27 July 2015 at 3:47am | IP Logged
Hai, this is really nice story
ur way of writing is simply superb,

no words to describe,

I want to know remaining story ,

pls send me
_Shivani_ Goldie

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Posted: 14 August 2015 at 2:08am | IP Logged
Awesome Updates... Yaar dil khush kar dita... I loved it... It was truly...amazing... oyee hoyee...Arakshi din ka kab se intezaar tha.. Btw i m very much interested in ur stories...pls..pls...mujhe list se mat nikalna...Your n the two writer's stories are the reason i am visiting IF... Continue Soon..

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kunchu IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 August 2015 at 2:26am | IP Logged
Ek ladki bhigi bhagi si
Soti raaton mein jaagi si
Mili ik ajnabi se
Koyi aage na peechhe
Tum hi kaho ye koyi baat hai, hmm

This is the first that came to mind. kya re
bache ki jaan longe kya?
and u added my fav lines tooo
muah my genie

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