Sautaaannn๐ค*Tears of happiness*
You know how much I was missing this story and how much I wanted you to update it.. and so I will skip all that and come back to how beautiful it was
I almost wanna skip commenting on the second part but I shouldn't do that coz your part 1 had just as much of a magic as the second part... coz u know why?
THE EYE-LOCK.
Goddd that left me gasping for breath. Sheeshhh u have no idea how fast my heart was beating when I read about his description in the pale blue shirt.. hayeee .. Thankfully I was on my bed already๐๐
Hmmm the case sounds intriguing.. I know the guy was murdered, right? Why would they steal the paintings though...
I liked the way you brought out her identity in front of him so subtly..
THE EYE-LOCK in the press conference.
*thud*
Ok should move on!
But how do I without killing myself? Abhi abhi pata hai na kisko dekhaโบ๏ธ
Uske baad yeh...
Poison, sautann... poison and wine
I have lost it.
Nadiyaa ka paani bhi khamosh behta yahaaannn..
Eeesh the description of rain arriving in the valley was just too too beautiful.. I think I floated to the rain clouds there.. no wait.. i was the mist floating around.. (no no I kept my distance from them...aakhir unke beech khamoshiyaan thi na!)
Silences that speaakkk
Hayeee *thud*
Oh god and then the chai stall wala part.. U know how much I loved their first meeet.. I can still see it you know.. it was that well-etched on my mind.. and now this... it just squeezed that memory to a corner and took up a spot next to it๐
Sheeeshh how beautiful was it
Each and every movement of theirs, their emotions, their smiles and eye-locks and the ...
OMG I blushed so deep when he pulled her away
into the rainnn
Diee Ritu, dieee.
Breatheee.
Ok and then the song... the ... pshhh I lost words.
Meri khamoshiyaan padh lo sautann๐คฃ
Bangles Hayeee.. I swear I couldn't concentrate on work yesterday.. I kept blushing when I thought about them in the rain.. siiigh. Why are they so beautiful?๐ณ๐ณ
Oh wait, you've made them so beautiful!
You know how if a tigress tastes blood, she becomes hungry for more?๐ Samajhdaar ho.. ishare samajh gayi hogi๐๐๐
Siiigh sautann that was one of the most beautiful confessions I have ever read! I cannot even begin to explain how much I loved it.. I want to thank you for penning this down (of course, itna pareshaan karungi toh you'll have to write na๐คฃ)... but I won't ๐
The song was so perfect for them
There were plenty of lines which touched me deep... the end was like the icing sugar on brownies. Soft, gooey, chocolatey brownie.. Sighhh
Ok I should stop. Baaki you know.. please please please please please dont stop writing ๐ค
Even if the updates are months apart, I don't care (ok I do, but I also know you're busy).
As long as there is hope for the next part!๐ณ
Louuuved this one to bits.. I think it was my most favourite one.. along with their first meet, the baingaan and snowman and bangles.. wait, the list is neverending.
Abhi ke liye bye byee๐ค
Back to you-know-whoโบ๏ธ
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