Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4 - Page 61

Avni the lines which u have written in the start were so meaningful.  Beautiful

 

Coming to the update Sakshi could not sleep. She was desparate to confront Arjun.  She just wanted to talk to Arjun. Her heart was telling that Arjun is not that kind of guy who would forget her or hurt her.  But her mind was telling that he is not the same Arjun whom she knew.

 

She could not stop herself from going to his house.  ACP Rawte kaha Sakshi ne. Arjun se seedha ACP Rawte.  Ayesha noticed her changing tone & sensed that something is wrong.

 

She went to academy and there she saw a man beaten to death by Arjun. She thought how cruel a man can get.  But after knowing the true reason she sensed that Arjun is disturbed and she just wanted to be in his side.  She forgot her anger. She was concerned about Arjun & nothing mattered at that time.

 

Phir usne jab dekha ki he was throwing things in his house & driving like a maniac she was hell worried for him.   

 

Waterfalls. It's a perfect place when a disturbed person who just wants to be alone goes. No one will be there to see your tears, no one will be there to bombard you with questions. And that silence. No words to describe the situation.

 

She saw that he was hurting himself . She was in his side at that very minute. Arjun ne kitni baar jaane ko kaha but Sakshi knew that he needs someone to be with him & pour out all his feelings.

 

And that hug.  Really ek pyaara sa hug khaafi hota ye dilaasa dilaane keliye ki koi hain hamaare saath jo humaari parwa karta ho, humhe samajta ho.

 

Curious to know what Arjun went through in his past.

I cannot tell u how much i love the update
beautifully written
everything was perfect
the pain, the understanding, the anger everything
waiting for next part

its amazing...awesome... I love it... ur stories are always full.of suspense... meko nhi...pata kya hai...arjun ka past...tum hi bata do... update soon

Awesome emotional

*snif*
a very emotional part *snif*

sakshi's inner battel with mind and heart was potryed beautifuly

grrr hate men mho treat ladies like that*angry*
uff yeh ankh macholi ka khel, *sigh*
akhir kab milenge arakshi???
Kempty falls *dreamy*

hayee kia nazara hoga wahan ka jab arakshi wahan ek dosre ki bahoon mei kharey ek dosree ka sukh dukh baant rahe hain aur apni aane wali zindagi ke liye khuwaab bun rahe hain *emotional*dreamy*

a voice from my head:
areesha control kar muharram chal rahe hain

par isme mera koi qasoor nahi, sab avni dii, kempty falls aur situation kai *puppy face*

hmm kuch kuch idea hai arjun ke past ke bare mein, dekhte hain apne kia socha hai avni di..

full on amazing update

thanks for pm

update soon

Awwwsssmmm Update
Supperbly written
Loved it very much
Every emotion was portrayed Sooo Beautifully..
Sakshi's desperation to make sure he is fine n then she understand his pain...
Wonderful Update
Cont Sooon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

Awesome awesome awesome heart wrenching update..

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