Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4 - Page 60

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Okay so I read all parts in one go and I was really happy when I saw that u 
Updates 2 hours ago. Anyway I love your story so please continue and update
Soon and if u can please pm me

This content was originally posted by: SeasonOfLeaves

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Unres!😳

Sorrryyy this took a while to unreserve!! I had been saving the second part which I just read teehee😳

Sooo ahem... here we go!

Lalalaa I have Subhanallah playing in my mind right now. The second part was deffo my favourite...although... hold on I am skipping ahead! Let's start from the beginning!

Subhanallaahhh jo ho raha haiii pehli dafa hai wallahhh

Aisa huaaa

Haaayeee

Ok, back to the comment!

Haha.. That little rendition surely had me smiling from ear to ear. 🤗

And you know what! I heard him singing it.. Again (imagine the following lines - Meri khaamoshi se baatein chunn lena *in that husky baritone*)... 🤣   Acchaa.. Ab uthoo.. Don't faint.. 😛 

The beginninggg...

"Swiping a palm across his sweat-covered forehead, he had grasped for the first thing he could; and when he touched warm skin, he had felt an odd sense of security wash over him."

Haayyeee... I was blushing as I imagined the scene, his fingers wrapped around hers.. *thud*

I love how you write even the tiniest details..which makes it even more real! Like this line here:

"Sakshi wiped the mist that had gathered on the inside of the glass surface and looked outside." 

Eeesh! Thank you.. That means a lot coming from you, coz you really have no idea how big I am a fan of yours.. ❤️

Mmm I love how they go to see the snowman first thing in the morning... *Banjaara moment* Haayyeee. I have gone back to the snowstorm and the moonlight.. 

😆 😆 *What if I tell you, there will be another banjara moment soonish minus the snowstorm!* 

Anywaay back to this!

Loved the Aisha and Arjun convo!! I do miss Aisha so much.. she was my second most favourite character after Arakshi😳 ..Okay let's not go there!

Aah! Forbidden territory.. Aaj ka quota khatam.. 🥱

The greenhouse scene!! I was jumping around like a mad person when I started reading it teeeheee... the nature girl in me woke up once moree and I was literally standing there amongst the pretty flowers, breathing in their sweet fragrance, feeling the moist air of the greenhouse..and of course Arakshi

Sigh! I wanted to write more on it.. But then I got carried away and left it incomplete.. Maybe sometime later.. 😉

Hayyeee... and then the song Chahoon bhi toh main... I love it so so much! Especially the bit with Kartik's voice.. it does something to me 😳

Yep! Me too.. ❤️

These lines were sooo beautiful:

"Warm sunlight filtered through the glass ceiling and walls of the greenhouse, plants rustled in their new pots on a long table against the left wall. Soil and specks of dirt covered the floor, and the lush foliage of double-rose begonias and angelwing jasmines rustled in the hanging baskets hissed and whispered."

I wanna be thereee ..it sounds so pretty

Aha! Aisha noticed the two 😆😆 Loved that bit😃

"Ayesha hummed to herself and took the shears from between Sakshi's fingers before she ended up chopping off her plant." 

This part was 

haha! yep.. Mrs. Rathore is after all a cop, na?! 😆

Hayeee their walk in the moonlight and then the almost-accident..I had major goosebumps and a hugeee smile on my face! Phew my mum wasn't around teeheee

"Between the bellowing harsh winds and the darkness, the only thing he could make out was her."

Goosebumps alerrtt!!!

Haayee they are in love alreadyy

Bwaha! Nah! I'm sure knows our little secret by now.. 😆

Funfairrr!!! Ahhh you wrote the description so beautiful.. It was all so real, so alive! Even though I am sitting here in silence, I could hear the music, even the loud Bollywood ones LOL (guess what song was playing😉😆) smell the foood...hayee the street food! (Damn Delhi ki yaad aa gayi)

And mehndiii... mujhe bhi lagwana hai! Just remembered the Mihir Tulsi mehndi sceneee.. you know why😆

@ Bold? 😲😲 Humdard at the funfair?! You would stay there for like forever.. 🤣

This part cracked me up so badd:

"Meow.."

"Meow? What kind of an answer is that?", she rolled her tongue in her cheek, teasing him.

🤣🤣🤣🤣

Kuch kuch ho gayaaa... the time they were walking and he was carrying the canvas boards.. hayeee.. such a simple thing and yet it brought a huge smile on my face😳

LOL LOL LOL Sakshi is jealous.. hahahahaha I cracked up at that🤣

Ab hotwa ke aage peeche kaunsi ladki nahi ghoomegi☺️

Colour palettes to work🤣

Hai na! ❤️ Look at us, such lost causes.. 🤪

And then the pottery scene.. hayeee

Ab aur kya boluunnn.. That reminded me of Saraswatichandra btw.. there was a scene in the beginning when I used to watch the show he he 

Oh! I didn't know.. I could never bring myself to watch it, pata nahi kyun! Errm.. But I had inspiration for the scene.. 😛

This was beautiful and skin tingling:

"There was something unique about the moment; the sight of the molded pot and her hands on top of his, hinted at something he had been struggling to accept for a while now. Was he really falling in love?"

Ah ah ah ah ah ahhh I guessed I guesss

Chubh toh nahi rahaaa

SRK- Kajol

Aapki halwai ki dukaan toh hum hadapke hi rahengeee

AAAhhh.

🤣 Yep! It might've been a misfit, but I just had to use it once.. 

Back to Arakshi😳

That was just too tooo tooo beautifully written!! Damnn I was the mirror for a minute theree..he he he he. They are so pretty I could cryyy *snifff*  *puts kaala teeka*

Ok my most favourite line out of the entire update:

"The fresh earthy colour defined her, for him. She was just like a breath of restful air in his lonely life, and although he hadn't quite accepted it to himself yet, somewhere at the back of his mind, a tiny wish had begun to sprout. "

How how how how how do you do it? How do you write such beautiful lines? Those goosebumpy ones. ahhh Secret batao naa! Wait mat batao! Magicians never reveal their secrets😉

Errrm! What if I tell you you're one massive source of inspiration for all my Arakshi works, of course there are many others too.. 😉 Yep.. Ssshhh.. 

And awwieee he bought bangles for her😳

Subhanallaaahhh ...haaye the song was too perfect! 

When he was looking at her whilst she was dancing..soo beautiful 

Darnn this is becoming too big (as usual!) and loaded with Emos (as usual)😆

Eh! Shh.. I'm loving it.. 

Anywaaay..and wait whaaat just happened towards the end?

🤣 Okay! That emoticon made me think of our dearest Gundi Angel.. Imagine karke toh dekho.. 😆😆🤪

What did ..how did... whaaat?! 

So so he had cut off all contacts with her after DIG Anand's death?!!! But but why would he do that? Of course there must have been a reason...but ... why did you stoppp

Acha ab jaldi jaldi next wala likho!! 

Yes yes.. Oh! there are reasons.. And since it's me, misunderstandings galore.. 😉😆

Thank you sooo much for this mushy mushy goosebumpy update.. I absolutely loved it!! Abhi thoda hangover time hai.. the bangles sceeneee.. damn! 

Subhanallaahhh

This is gonna be me tonight -> 

I love youuu for this update and yeh lo:

Avniii🤗

Yes yes I am ready with my notepad file to write my essay *fingers aimed over keyboard*🤪

Hayeee maar hi daala! With that description of the waterfall and the scene at the end.. you have officially sent me off to a dreamland where I am not listening to Banjaara in the background but but but *drumroll* .. no wait u guessed it so I needn't.. no why not! HUMDARD! Sigh if only he knew how I love his voice *dreamy* and how much I had wanted him to sing Humdard live.. unfulfilled wishes *sigh*

Focus Ritu!!🤓

Ok back to the update. Wait, I have skipped ahead!

So back to the beginning *rewinds tape*

I love love love how you portray her emotions... when her mind tells her something and her heart tells her something and she is confused as to whether to confront the man she loves and ask him for the reasons or whether to keep it to herself.

Darnn I forgot to say what I should have said first.. that quote you started off with, is beautiful!!

So then she heads off to find him at the academy! And then yikes.. he must have really beat that man. But then that man deserved it😡

Ah... so I am guessing that Arjun has a painful.. like really painful past.. his father did the same to his mother? It's just a guess after reading the whole thing.

If so, then I can totally imagine his rage and the way he vented out all his anger on that man.

It scared me when Sakshi goes to his house again and finds his house in the destroyed state *ouch* I could almost hear the glass breaking. And he leaves... I was going to write that was a beautifully written part but am not going to, because then I don't know what to write about the second one!

"Winding her way through the tall trees, she let the sounds guide her and soon stood in front of a resort tucked between the hills, overlooking a lake. She was mesmerised by the sheer natural beauty of the place, the small cozy-looking resort was nestled between the hilly slopes, surrounded by gushing water streams and natural waterfalls."

"Splitting into five cascades, the gushing streams of water seemed to be doing somersaults before leaping on the rocks below. The splashes at the bottom, together with the faint moonlight streaming through the Chilgoza Pine trees, created an arc that resembled a lunar rainbow."

Why why why do you do this? Such beautiful descriptions of nature... Kempty falls! Ahh...😭

You know nature is my weakness *dreamy* I wanna go there now *sobs* I am so far away... 

No wait, I loved it

I went there such a longgg time ago with my grandparents and parents. I think it was in the same trip to Dhanaulti.. or maybe on a different one. These places were at driving distance from Delhi, so we often used to take off during the vacations. Like I said, daddy dearest and his travelling obsession. This is completely random but there was another place which mesmerised me... it's probably not that well-known but it's nearby. It's called Chakrata (google it)... the second time I went there I was 16 or something and the place is so quiet.. pine trees everywhere and lonely roads...the green mountains... it just feels sooo magical! I still can't explain why I loved that place so much. Maybe some time you can (only if you wish) use that place in this story ;)

Back to the update!

Those lines above were beautiful - I know main pagal hoon.. yeh pehle bolna chahiye tha na! Hold on.. flashback moment *thinking* someone said she couldn't write waterfall descriptions.. I wonder who it was? *thinking hardd* Because that someone should totally read those lines. And then... *rolls sleeves* I'll just take care of the rest.😈

Joking! Woman, you transported me there.. like your words were like a portkey! Yes, a portkey! I read them and I was there

That part was sooo beautifull... I am in a dreamland right now *Banjaara moment*

Hayyeee.. the waterfall, the bheega hua Arjun (his pain.. *ouch*) and then her comforting arms... her soothing words. Sigh!

And she didn't leave him :')                             

There was something very beautiful about these lines:

"The man before her was one of the strongest men she had known; he was a protector who shielded people and fought for them when they themselves couldn't. But tonight, he looked broken beyond repair."

"She was the most beautiful thing that had happened to him in a long time."

And then they hugged... hayee

So much pain and hurt... sigh! Ok, I should slip into my dreamland now. I wrote a whole page😲

Yeah I was typing in word lol. Acha, I've bored you enough hehehe😆

I absolutely loveddd the second bit and even thoughhh u stopped at kinda a crucial point, I'm still in the trance of that waterfall in the moonlight and hotwa.. eeesh.

Sirf humdard missing tha .. joking!🤣

It was perrrfect! And yeshhh I love youuu🤗❤️

P.S - I don't know how you do it.. a whole day of work and then you type such a beautiful update and post it soo late  and go in to work tomorrow ..rather today morning.

I respect you! 

So I will just say update when you get some time and doo take care of yourself❤️

Needless to say, I'm waiting for moree (yeah even.. ahem ahem.. that lil thing)
Naah.. take your time😳

P.P.S - I probably filled this comment with random stuff🤣