Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4 - Page 59

Posted: 9 years ago
Awwwsssmmm Psrts
Loved it very much...
Wonderfully written...
Loved Arakshi moments it was sooo Beautifully described..
They are falling for each other but not accepting...
Everything was sooo Magical...
Sakshi was jealous... liked it very much...
Finally she came to know he was her Arjun...
Cont Sooon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM
Posted: 9 years ago
Miss LucyπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Lollipoppp   ye pakka pyaar wala hug haiπŸ˜†
Ok Let me get back to the update with  Arjun Aisha first. I just love these two when it comes to their bantering,their way of expressing care towards each other.I may have not said this to you or i have?Chaddo I dont know but I just love the  way you slate down these two relationship whether it be here or Lady.They are a treat to read 
Sameer-Arjun: Awwwiii, Ex ETF chief  Shaq ki nazar se dekhing to his buddy.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†But seriously,who says that best friends needs to be always sharing sugar coated words while exchanging pleasantries.Look at us.🀣
Forgive whom 
About Saakshi-Aisha:They always resembles more like Aisha being a mother hen to Saakshi being protective & caring πŸ˜ƒ

"It's okay. Maybe we should carry a torch next time onwards
OMG lollipop,I was about to say & bingo there goes the next sentence that I was expectingπŸ˜†
"So there will be a next time?"😳😳😳

Hell! Since when did cops start wearing colour palettes to work?
Arjun Rawte is the only exceptional one in this🀣🀣🀣 (Siya ka fruit salad wala comment yaad aa gaya🀣🀣🀣 )

Haaye Chudiya wala scene ***Ewww Too girly expression Farheen**
But that was one epic scene after DDLJ  which was enacted by SRK-Kajol & now here with the two adding another angle to this epic scene through their charm😳
"Inn lugaayion ko samajhna thoda mushkil hai.. Lekin koi baat nahi.. Aadat pad jayegi.."
Lugaai πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

About the funfair part,truely today's funfair have lost their true essence of simplicity.Your mela descripition brought in my  childhood happy times we used to enjoy in funfair.Giant Wheel,food,toys & many more.Thanku for giving me a trip back to my happy times.πŸ˜›

About the last chat conversation,his absence...I got my queries answered.THANKUπŸ˜›

To end my comments,here is what i have for the two "Your soul mate is the person who mends your broken heart, by simply giving you, Theirs".
Waiting for the mending of broken heart & of course the mystery behind her Father's & his mother's death.
Posted: 9 years ago
Missed so many chapters..😭.Sorry Avantika Di..bohot late se comment kar rhi hun..maafi please..Comments jaise bhi ho bhavnao ko samjho..And yes I missed your updates..have to comment on LIR too..will do that soon.
Chapter 9:
Sakshi must be feeling horrible watching her uncle on the hospital bed..Their bonding is so strong..He has full faith in her that she won't do anything wrong and she loves him like her own father..
Prof Khanna getting angry and Arjun saying sorry was all so nice.

Arjun- Sakshi's convo was superb and amazingly written..loved it.πŸ‘πŸΌ.!!! It was soothing..The thoughts they shared, the questions which rose in their mind and answers which they got, everything sent me into a thinking mode and well self-realizations did occur and brought out something positive for me.. So Thank You for that..πŸ€—

Shree apologized..that was nice..
Arakshi were chatting with each other before..
One question..She knew he is an ACP and the chat name included his name Arjun..then didn't she knew he was the one?? Or am I missing something??πŸ˜•
It was an awesome update..emotional too..one more helpful too for me..πŸ‘πŸΌ

Chapter 10:
Snow..Never got to see it nor feel it..πŸ˜” But I get attracted towards it..Imagining myself playing in the snow, skiing, making snowballs, throwing it at my friends..Uff..! I love nature-filled scenes..😳
Sorry back to update..
Sakshi still has that shirt..😳 thinking about him..😳
School wala part was so nice..I remembered my school days..specially the bell..πŸ˜ƒ
Hospital scene..kya kahu..her Dad's last memory..indeed painful..😭
Arjun went to hospital and was there to support her..the silent support was enough for her..Thank God, her uncle is safe.
 "I'm glad you didn't mind me coming here. I just wanted to make sure that he was fine." That you were fine, a voice corrected him.. loved this part..
All the emotions were beautifully portrayed..Arakshi part you have written it so beautifully..!!πŸ‘
Ayesha saw them having dinner..surprised..it was nice.πŸ˜†
They want Sakshi back..interesting..
Thanks for the pms..
Edited by Swara85 - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Feelings mutual.
Both feels the unknown pull towards each other, but both want to put the budding feelings aside to done the thing in their hand.

So Saakshi finally got to know who he is.
She hurt and disappointed with him.

How Arjun gonna figure out who she is, and how he gonna react to it ?

Nice chapter.
Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update...

Arjun slept holding her hand to not to see his nightmares...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Sakshi happy to see that nothing happened to their snowman...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Sakshi is now knowing Arjun closely...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Liked Arjun-Aisha's convo...they share a good & unnamed (may be friends) relation...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
LOL...If Arjun didn't cooked well than Aisha will definitely trust Sameer...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Sameer wished that Arjun have affair...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Aisha put all her plants in green house...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
I have a strong feeling that Aisha will be the reason of Arakshi's reunion...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Aisha caugth them red handed...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
The walls Arjun & Sakshi has created around themselves is now melting...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Sakshi now know Arjun better...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Sakshi saved Arjun...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
The feelings has started to grow with these close encounters...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
There will ve definitely next time Arjun...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Arjun is thinking why they have to part their ways every evening...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Why Arjun feel himself responsible for his mother's death...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•
Sakshi convincing herself...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Aisha wanted Sakshi to join her in fair but she denied bcoz of her reasons...
"meow"...🀣🀣🀣
Sakshi-Arjun went to mela...thanks to Nandini...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Arjun wish to be reason of her laugh...bohat jald hi hogi...if the writer permits you...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
Sakshi felt jealous & Arjun too noticed it...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Arjun accpeted the challenge...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Sakshi helped him on wheel...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Really liked this whole scene...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Sakshi got confused while buying bangles...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Arjun helped her in wearing bangles...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
"yet leave a man guessing"...awesome line...🀣🀣🀣
Sakshi was genuinely happy...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Vendor got Sakshi's wish of buying bangles of his choice but Arjun didn't...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
But Arjun bought bangles for her...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
LOL...Arjun was mesmerize to see her eating malupas...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Arjun wipped the syrup from her lips...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
LOL...Sakshi shocked to see him smiling...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Why Arjun didn't replied to Sakshi's messages??πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•
Itna acha romantic(kind of πŸ˜‰) update ke end mein yeh kya tha??? ...
I want next update pretty soon...


Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
Edited by Snehajain - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome updates
Thanks for the pm
Posted: 9 years ago
Yo..dii..
you rocked it again ..
Arjun N Sakshi both have already fallen in love,but cannot recognise it.. Pagal..dono bhi..
just finished reading all the remaining updates.. N my my what a journey..till now,
ab jab Sakshi ko pta chal gaya hai ki Arjun hi Uska wala Arjun hai, jisse wo hate krti hai but jisse wo pyaar bhi krti hai..
ab kyaa kregi bichhari..
n Our Shera k to kya kehne..
love him ..
n Love you..
thanksss..
Posted: 9 years ago
awesome updates
it was a double dhamaka.. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ ..
mela scene was beautifull 😳 😳 .. they love each other soo much but cannot or do not want to confess.. even to themselves
sakshi now knows truth... hope everything gets sorted out
contd. soon
thnx for pm
Posted: 9 years ago
Awwssmm...Awwssmm...Awwssmmm update!!!!!Really loved it!!!! Arjun...Aisha scene was superebbb!!! Yaa!!! Arakshi...roxxx...just love there whole part!!!!Beautifullly written!!!! Briliant workπŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘...Con.soonnn!!!!

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