Originally posted by: life93
ok ! happy dusshera :D and the arakshi bg music ! nostalgic !loved itโค๏ธ
Originally posted by: ArmagadonAmazing fantabulous, fantastic chapters...
If I have more time I shall complete this comment - in short I loveee this!Alrighto... finally found time to complete this comment!Loved Ayesha's fluttering emotions as she heard about the case from Shree... and yes... the point of realization as to why did Sakshi meet her... I really love the way you have blended a wife, a homemaker, a simple woman with the sharp cop... I can almost see her eyes squint then widen when she realizes that the "There could be only one reason; the note never reached its rightful recipient.."Aww.. Glad you did.. I loved her character, as much as I loved Arjun.. or perhaps even more.. But alas! It was a major disappointment in the end..Bass apne armaan nikal rahi hoon.. ๐So yes... now I am pondering as to how differently must I say that I love Arjun and Sakshi's bond... truly... I must say how eclectic you are in showing their bond! In one you have them turned on with hot images of them in dreams (credit : Breaking Out - yep half of that credit does go to Shilpa ji..) or you have Arjun running across the seas to finally set things right (credit : You belong with me) and unfortunately both are on hold! *sigh* Arrey now look at me.. kya kehna tha aur kya nikal gaya!๐ ๐ Ha! Break me out was solely mine and Shilpa's guttery baby.. We miss it and really wish we had the time to finish it.. As for You belong with me, I want to finish it, but can't seem to find the right track.. Hopefully, soon..Accha bacchu.. ๐So yes... the bond is beautiful... something that when termed as friendship... you find something missing... but if you call love... it seems to early... ab yeh relation toh sach main "unnamed relationship" ki category main fit hoti hai!Yexactly! Isliye toh ajeeb si daastan hai na.. ๐And yes... I loved the part where they were pondering about each other... beautifully written...Arjun's past.. I am really inquisitive about that.. err... have I missed out on anything... or you haven't revealed yet?Nope you haven't.. I've just thrown a few hints in.. ๐She had surely learnt it from her husband! He muttered under his breath..
Sameer Rathore, who was unfortunately his best friend and the only living person who knew him inside out, loved rattling him up at every given chance.
And now, his better half had taken up the task..
These happen to be my favorite lines! Trust me... I like the way you have shown Ayesha and Arjun's relationship!Me too.. ๐I love it whenever Trivedi gets his share of punches! Hihi! And wow... that was cool... Bahadur was in fact a mole!Sakshi being a welcome distraction *grinning* ok now coming to this point... dear Avantika ji... now that you have brought in this Prince of blah blah land... am sure yeh banda ke daal main kuch kaala hai! Ya phir by chance he might be too good... u know to surprise us! Whatever it might be... am too sure you haven't typed his name only for reading out the headlines!Yep! Prince hai bechara.. Ainvayi side character toh nahi banayenge na usko.. ๐Loved the bond between Ayesha and Sakshi... truly... and yes... the way she understands her... Arjun... yes Sakshi! C'mon she truly has to figure this out.. she is that smart indeed!She will! ๐ Humari Sakshi show wali jaisi thodi na hai.. CV's aaye din bechari ko football ki tarah yahan se wahan phenkte the..Oh my God... my jaw dropped when you wrote about Sakshi wearing her mother's bangles and dupatta going around as a film actress! I just thought I saw my reflection there... my mind was flooded with memories indeed...
Ha! We all did that.. Didn't we? ๐ANd I am simply enthralled by the rest of the chapter... at one point I guess I read his hand being on/near her bangles... this does mean something more symbolic na...Plish tell me am righto!*grinning*
Haha.. Yep! Bingo.. ๐So phew! I made it! I finally was able to complete my comments... trust me this was pending since a week! *teary eyes**moment of sentiness**blowing my nose on tissue!*Love ya stories dear! And I saved this comment from being a thesis! Yippe! *pat on my back*You do have a slight bit idea how much I write (credit : comment on ur ts... last part... lol)Aww.. Thank you so much.. this really means a lot to me.. *hugs*Shabbash.. Yes, I did read it all.. ๐Koi nahi.. Essay writing mein toh humara koi muqabala hi nahi hai.. We break our own records, na? ๐๐
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