Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4 - Page 56

Originally posted by: life93

 

ok ! happy dusshera :D and the arakshi bg music ! nostalgic ! 

 

loved it❤️

Originally posted by: Armagadon

Amazing fantabulous, fantastic chapters... 

If I have more time I shall complete this comment - in short I loveee this!

Alrighto... finally found time to complete this comment!

Loved Ayesha's fluttering emotions as she heard about the case from Shree... and yes... the point of realization as to why did Sakshi meet her... I really love the way you have blended a wife, a homemaker, a simple woman with the sharp cop... I can almost see her eyes squint then widen when she realizes that the "There could be only one reason; the note never reached its rightful recipient.."

Aww.. Glad you did.. I loved her character, as much as I loved Arjun.. or perhaps even more.. But alas! It was a major disappointment in the end.. 

Bass apne armaan nikal rahi hoon.. 😆

So yes... now I am pondering as to how differently must I say that I love Arjun and Sakshi's bond... truly... I must say how eclectic you are in showing their bond! In one you have them turned on with hot images of them in dreams (credit : Breaking Out - yep half of that credit does go to Shilpa ji..) or you have Arjun running across the seas to finally set things right (credit : You belong with me) and unfortunately both are on hold! *sigh* Arrey now look at me.. kya kehna tha aur kya nikal gaya!

😆 😆 Ha! Break me out was solely mine and Shilpa's guttery baby.. We miss it and really wish we had the time to finish it.. As for You belong with me, I want to finish it, but can't seem to find the right track.. Hopefully, soon.. 

Accha bacchu.. 😛

So yes... the bond is beautiful... something that when termed as friendship... you find something missing... but if you call love... it seems to early... ab yeh relation toh sach main "unnamed relationship" ki category main fit hoti hai!

Yexactly! Isliye toh ajeeb si daastan hai na.. 😉

And yes... I loved the part where they were pondering about each other... beautifully written...

Arjun's past.. I am really inquisitive about that.. err... have I missed out on anything... or you haven't revealed yet? 

Nope you haven't.. I've just thrown a few hints in.. 😆

She had surely learnt it from her husband! He muttered under his breath..

Sameer Rathore, who was unfortunately his best friend and the only living person who knew him inside out, loved rattling him up at every given chance.

And now, his better half had taken up the task..

These happen to be my favorite lines! Trust me... I like the way you have shown Ayesha and Arjun's relationship!

Me too.. 😃

I love it whenever Trivedi gets his share of punches! Hihi! And wow... that was cool... Bahadur was in fact a mole!

Sakshi being a welcome distraction *grinning* ok now coming to this point... dear Avantika ji... now that you have brought in this Prince of blah blah land... am sure yeh banda ke daal main kuch kaala hai! Ya phir by chance he might be too good... u know to surprise us! Whatever it might be... am too sure you haven't typed his name only for reading out the headlines!

Yep! Prince hai bechara.. Ainvayi side character toh nahi banayenge na usko.. 😉

Loved the bond between Ayesha and Sakshi... truly... and yes... the way she understands her... Arjun... yes Sakshi! C'mon she truly has to figure this out.. she is that smart indeed!

She will! 😎 Humari Sakshi show wali jaisi thodi na hai.. CV's aaye din bechari ko football ki tarah yahan se wahan phenkte the.. 

Oh my God... my jaw dropped when you wrote about Sakshi wearing her mother's bangles and dupatta going around as a film actress! I just thought I saw my reflection there... my mind was flooded with memories indeed... 

Ha! We all did that.. Didn't we? 😆

ANd I am simply enthralled by the rest of the chapter... at one point I guess I read his hand being on/near her bangles... this does mean something more symbolic na... 

Plish tell me am righto!

*grinning*

Haha.. Yep! Bingo.. 😛

So phew! I made it! I finally was able to complete my comments... trust me this was pending since a week! *teary eyes*

*moment of sentiness*

*blowing my nose on tissue!*

Love ya stories dear! And I saved this comment from being a thesis! Yippe! *pat on my back*

You do have a slight bit idea how much I write (credit : comment on ur ts... last part... lol)

Aww.. Thank you so much.. this really means a lot to me.. *hugs*

Shabbash.. Yes, I did read it all.. 😃

Koi nahi.. Essay writing mein toh humara koi muqabala hi nahi hai.. We break our own records, na? 😉😆

Originally posted by: kunchu

Hayeee. dedication!!!

Wo bhi kithni achi...

Thank you...😳

Aisha returns. Aur ni tho kya!! you have no idea how much I miss that lady

Mrs. Rathod banne ka asar tho hai

I always liked the dynamics you showed between Arjun and Aisha in all your story.

Nothing OTT

but a simple friendship

I am glad that the old ETF inside her is still alive. Loved that part

She looked at the white blanket of snow sprawled across the valley...

I wish I could see it too.

Long white fields. How much ever you say its no so happy to be cold, but still I wanna be there

Trivedi gets another round!! Aur do... it makes me happy too.

The new developments are tricking a lot. waiting for your brand new lollipops

And those bangles. I could see it sparkling. Those lil FBs and emotions... I wont elaborate, Ritu had already mentioned my fav lines before. 

Ithna kaam aur lab ke beech me u wrote it!!

Hats off to you janeman

"HER Arjun..." that sounds so good. add 2+2 please...

Temple, bday and pain... hayeee... rula diya mujhe

but then cold cold and sooo cold

snowfall, snowman...

Hayee dreaming to see snowfields...

And yes GB, if you get any way to snow Mumbai, tell me the secret too

mujhe bhi snow chahiye...

The silent support.. you know how much I love khamosh wala love...😳

I have already counted the lollipops my dear... aur himmath ni hai

I know what comes next for me.

What can be better than an icing that too after a snow..

yuhooo