Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4 - Page 55

This content was originally posted by: SeasonOfLeaves

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You updated you updateddd

Warning: Since this is a long update, expect a long comment!🤪

Haww.. 😲 *Thud* Gets up.. Reads.. *Thud*

Snow snow snow snow snowww...

I want Christmas already! I can almost hear the Christmassy music, smell the gingebread in the air and see the magical lights everywhere

Ok, i m getting carried away 😛

  Do not mention Christmas ever! 😭

Aisha is backkk 😳

Aisha-Arjun convo - brought a hugee smile to my face. How well she knows him he he😃

Trivedi phir pita! I was like 😈 Serves him right!

That part made me miss the show..and all that action sighhh.

Anyhooo!

The chat convo the chat convoo!!!😳😳

I love youuu for this flashback! ahh ahh can we have more chat convos pleassshhh 😳

It was a teeny tiny one but i loved it..and ahh she finally begins to realise that ACP Arjun Rawte might be her Arjun. 

(Got carried away in my dreams again)

Lol.. Your wish my command, but I'm pretty sure you'll be after my life with GB's bloody axe after you read the next chat convo.. 😆

That lil scene when Aisha gives her those bangles was so beautiful ..you do know how to make simple things sound so beautiful through your words 👏😃

I could almost feeel the bangles in my hands😳

Sheesh! That's a huge compliment coming from you.. (Coz you do just that to me.. Remember me inside the lily pond?) 😛

Nononononooo you mention Kolkata and sweets and now I am missing both (hayee)😆

Awwie.. 

My favourite line out of the whole update:

"The golden glass bangles clinked melodiously against each other with the playful cold breeze carrying the pleasant sound through the snow covered valley as if delivering a cryptic message across."

Dedication to meee...hayeee biggg hug 

These lines touched real deep:

"The truth doesn't always set one free, perhaps they were happy being in the situation they were in. Because for the first time in many years, silence was offering them a strange sort of sweet solace, and not jabs and pricks at their insides.. A friend, a companion or a stranger, whatever they meant to each other, didn't matter. What mattered was that there was someone by their side, who saw them for who they were, without asking questions, pitying or judging them.."

Especially the last line...there are so few people who stay by your side no matter what and don't judge you for your actions. Those are the real friends...and it's a pity that sometimes people you thought would be by your side forever just drift away from you because of distance... or maybe just because their priorities change. Oh well! Life goes on ...

Yeah that was random...ignoree😆

Lol yeah.. It's okay.. You're allowed to rant.. Coz that is soo true.. 

The scene at the temple was beautiful and emotional and sad *sniff*

Hehehe that bit where his stomach rumbles from hunger was funny and brought a hugeee smile on my face 🤣

The snowstormmm

haye kitna intezaar kiya maine iske liye.. kitne sapne bhi dekhe! (With Humdard playing in the bg - mera kuch nahi ho sakta🤣)

Hayeee Maggi and chaiii and Arakshi ..plus snowstormmm outside

 

The part where she talks about her father was emotional..but he was there to comfort here *goosebumps*

Ha! I know.. And I still think it could've been better.. I'm really being modest here.. Sniff.. 

They're gonna build a snowmannn! (what an awesome thought)

I wanna build a snowmannn!! 

"Her loose curls danced with the playful breeze, and Arjun felt his heart thump wildly. The soft moonlight streaming through the clouds was dimmer than usual, but bright enough for his trained eyes to witness the array of expressions on her face."

These lines did something to me..like Humdard does (you know)☺️🤪

Like Humdard?! *Auntyyy... Uncleee* 😲

Hayeee hayeee Banjaaraaa hayeee 

This part was sooo 

LOLL they forgot the nosee😆😆 And then he carved out a nose to bring a smile on her face😳

"Janamdin Mubarak ho, Sakshi." ->Jeez that reminded me of the episode of Sakshi's birthday for a minute.🤔

But this is sooo much better 😃

Oh I had that scene replaying in my head too..  They left that scene unfinished.. 😕

I had serious goosebumps while reading the whole snowman building! I could only picture his gaze, with snow all around and Banjaara in the bg..hayeee am dreaming 

The night, the snow, the song..and Arakshi Can it get more magical? NO.

No Humdard today, just Banjaaraaa

lalalalaaa...that was so beautiful ❤️

Coming to the end...eeekkk *thud* *thud* *thud*

His fingers wrapped around her wrist...sighhh..and she was wearing those bangles 

Ahh...finished already! IF made my comment disappear like twice...good that i had the text written in notepad else pata nahi kya hota!😡 (i had more emos...but oh well..)

Anywaaay... I loved loved loved both updates to bits (second one a bit more and you know whyyy)
Thank you sooo much for writing huge wale updates...🤗 As usual, your magic will have me dreaming for hours 

Ab main chali sone..to listen to Banjaara and dream about snow and those two😳🤪

Aaj nahi likh paaoungi🤣

Farheen was right...the ASD hangover begins!🤣

God bless the document I am supposed to finish off tomorrow😆😆

This content was originally posted by: EashaYousufzai

Hi ddu,

Just read your FF and am greatful I did.

Firstly the name you choose.

It has an aura of it's own.

It pulled me towards the story.

When I started reading it I just couldn't stop myself from reading further.

I sat on my chair eyes glued to the screen.

I couldn't avert my gaze until I finished it.

The way you described every emotions and twist and turn.

It's just mind blowing.

You are just a gifted writer.

Now back to your updates...

 

Prologue:

 

The way you portrayed Sakshi..

My heart wrench imagining her in the station.

In her nineteen years of life she had seen both good and bad.

And her Mamaji.

Seems like a very stern person.

But what safety measure they were talking about?

She was leaving the city she brought up.

Poor girl lost her mother in such early age now her father died too!!!!!!

What tragedy she had to face!!!!!!

Her Mamaji is really very genorous who offered his hand in her bad time.

She cut down her sim card!!!!!!

She is a very brave and intelligent girl.

Arjun man of steel.

Loved the ChoRee duo.

Yeh Arjun ka to kuch nehi ho skata.

Sahi kaha mere bhi dimag mein same sawal.

"Policewala hai ya Atankvadi?"

What showed on the tv screen that Arjun reacted like that?

Ohh his mentor died.

Seems like he was a good person.

And Arjun was very attached to him.

System in which they believed blindly failed them.

Now only thing left is revenge.

 

Part 1:

 

You started the update with a mystery.

Six years have passed since the incident.

Both were looking for revenge but what happened?

Sakshi was unprepared and needed time to be ready.

But what happened with Arjun?

Why is he in the academy?

And Sakshi is a total mystery.

So, she still live with her uncle.

What was she doing in the dark night alone in the road?

What assignment she was talking about?

Arjun is such a gentleman.

But do they know each other from before?

Did some incidents separated them?