Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4 - Page 35

nice..

Yippee...Aap wapas aagayi with one of my favorite FF...

after such a long time but then update was full of action so it's ok
trivedi deserved every single punch slap he received and more picture abhi baaki hain 🤢😡
poor sakshi gone through such horror will take time to recover from the shock
hope now this will bring arjun sakshi closer to each other and may be arjun will be able to find
real identity of sakshi
thanks for pm

My dearest Avantika,

Thank you!!!!

I had asked for " a full scale bashing of Trivedi till his ugly mug has been nearly reduced to a pulp", and you have given me, and all the others who must have made similar demands, exactly what we wanted. There is real pleasure in having such a scum of the earth treated exactly the way he deserves to be. You are now excused for the stomach-turning exercise to which you subjected me in Chapter 6!

You have superbly  captured not only Arjun's blind rage at something so ugly committed against an innocent girl by a renegade and traitorous colleague, but also his sense of guilt at not having been there to prevent it - heightened by the memories of what had happened to his mentor,  who was pulled down  by those with whom he had worked, while the system he had served all this life stood by with callous indifference and let him be destroyed.

Then there is  the instinctive delicacy and thoughtfulness with which Arjun handles the matter, which is striking in one so hot-headed and impulsive. What he does is for the best all round, first of all for Sakshi.

But her instinctive horror and revulsion at the sight and touch of any man, even her saviour (though she does not know that as yet), is also  entirely credible, and this too has come out very well. As is the reaction of Dr. Lisa to what has been done to Sakshi by, as she might have assumed at first, Arjun. It is interesting that even before she learns the truth, systemic discipline holds and she listens to and obeys his orders.

What happened to Samar Anand is, however, beyond belief. There have been several cases of guilty police  and army officers having been arrested, rightly or wrongly, for spying, arms trafficking, etc, but I have never heard of such things happening to any of them. You need that disclaimer,my dear!

It is a lovely, engrossing story, and I for one intend to stay with it as along as you keep writing it. But take care of your health, especially in this heat. I have been quite under the weather for nearly 2 weeks now, and I know that it is tougher to take in the heat.

Shyamala Aunty

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Awwwsssmmm part
Loved it to the core
Supperbbb...
Brillantly written...
Amazing...
Loved Arjun bashing Trivedi...
Precap seems interesting...
Cont sooon
Thanks for the PM

Wonderful Update

Atlast you have updated waited very long for this.

Angry and unstoppable Arjun. Arjun was angry that he was unable to save an innocent girl but how will he react when he comes to know that she is none other than her mentor's daughter.

Eager to know.

Saakshi's vulnerabilities were beautifully written.

Overall very nice update

Do continue Soon.

Waiting eagerly

Username change karke aapne bohat solid wala confuse kar diya...😆😆😆

hi avani di 🤗...




Edited by life93 - 9 years ago

awsm update
cntinue soon
thanx for pm

U changed ur user name?!
What a gruesome update
Arjun and Sakshi in the clinic were so well written
The action was full on bollywood amitabh bachchan style
Thanks for the pm
Please Update soon x