Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4 - Page 27

Posted: 10 years ago
Sakshi's arrest is well planned i guess..
But why shree and chotu wanted her to get arrested..? and does that Trivedi and all know about her mission and who she is..?
So Aarjun had figured out Trivedi's evil intentions..
cont soon..waiting for next part.
Posted: 10 years ago
d stry is doin damn intrstng.. sakshi being trapped nd dat too at d tym when ayesha wsn't in d academy did giv me goosebumps.. it seems dat a huge conspiracy i goin on in dre.. bt y sakshi?? its stil a mystry.. 
accordng 2 me it ws not at ol slw.. mny thngs did hapn.. mst imprtntly we get 2 knw a bit abt d people bhind d illegal activities in d academy..
precap seemed 2uu intrstng.. do cntinue soon.. cn't wait 2 read d nxt prt
thnx 4 d pm
Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update.
poor sakshi..
intrsting precape
contd soon
thnx for pm
Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...
 
Feeling bad for Sakshi...😭😭😭
Her uncle is also admitted in hospital...
Trivedi...ðŸ˜ĄðŸ˜ĄðŸ˜Ą
Hope Arjun rescue her soon...😭😭😭
But why Shree-Chotu didn't do anything???😕😕😕
 
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
Posted: 10 years ago
No no nooo
you stopped theree! AAHHH
So, Shree and Chotu were not involved in this - phewww😊 
Feel so bad for Sakshi  hope Arjun gets there on time! Get that Trivedi!!ðŸ˜Ą
I must admit I am cheating at work lol...it was so engrossing I couldn't stop reading hehe..and then when I was so into it, you stopped!ðŸĨš

Please dooo continue sooon! ðŸ˜ƒðŸĪ—
Posted: 10 years ago
Usse trivedi ki toh mein ðŸ˜Ą ðŸ˜Ą

Go go arjun...go and save sakshi...she needs you ðŸ˜› ðŸ˜›

Very interesting update avni â­ïļ â­ïļ â­ïļ â­ïļ â­ïļ â­ïļâ­ïļ â­ïļ â­ïļ

An toh am waiting to see how arjun will be convinced that sakshi is innocent and also save her from trivedi ki bachi ðŸ˜Ž

Thank you soo sooo much ðŸĪ—
Posted: 10 years ago
I dont know Avni why are you thinking that the pace is slow!!!
For me, the pace is perfect. .
Pacing up will hamper the serenity of this story..
I have already told you that I feel an amazing peace while reading each chapter of this story..
Something unparallel..hat's off dear..
Coming to the story..
I am bit confused..Why Sakshi??
Do they know about Sakshi's aim also??
Ok..may be I am overthinking it..
Why are Chhotu n Shree also suspecting her??
Why was she trapped so badly??
Infact the precap is so scary..
Poor Sakshi is unconscious..
And that bloody Trivedi is gonna misbehave with her..
Hopefully Arjun will rescue her..
The way you change the scenes is really theatrical. .
Awesome. .and so artistic unparallely..
Waiting for next chapter Avni..
Take care..n thanks..Edited by Amritamalhotra - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
itna chotusa update? dats not like u...!

bt i loved this one...it cleared many things for me...
it even gave quite a gud reason to peep insight of th 'may b' culprit of sakshi's dad!

continue soon

love
Aisha
Posted: 10 years ago
awesome updates.
read both 4 and 5 parts together.
fabulous  work.
really sorry for late comment.
thankx for pm.
cont soon.
Posted: 10 years ago
idhar bhi lollipop
This is cheating. Lady in Red mein unsaid rule tumne set kiya tha for lollipop & not here. Do not cheat warna main strike karugi. 😭
 
Yaha no lollipop pleej
Enough of my nautanki. ðŸĪŠ
OMG she's behind bars

Upar se Tripathi ka innocent background jaankar to panic attack aa raha hai.Arjun se acche se joote khilwaana.I want to see him getting beaten with blue &black or any combination of colors around his eyes. ðŸ˜ĄðŸ˜Ą
Ok lemme be a bit serious.
I wonder if he randomly targeted  Saakshi knowing the fact that she's a frequent visitor at the academy.ðŸĪ”
Now that destiny will bring them face to face once again &I can sense where u r heading with this,I m super super exited for this MUSHKIL PREM KAHANI
 
but then will Arjun come to know about Saakshi whoz none but his mentor's daughter whom he tried searching.O God,kitne questions puchti hu main. ðŸĪŠ
 
It was slow-paced one but then it seems more like it is just like heating up the battery of the car to start with the adventurous ride. Moreover the two's actual journey is about to begin when he brings her out.Am I right? I get it, what u r planning up to bring a big U turn in their lives. Lips sealed.
 
Two sequences that took me to the edge of the seat.one being her panicking in the lockup feeling helpless &eager to get out of the trap laid for her.She might have gone through the pain once more &could have realized how her father felt when he too was trapped for the same chargers. Honesty does takes more than required from a person. Secondly, her uncle state of mind when he came to know about Saakshi's arrest. When he fell down, for a second I felt he is no more but thank u, you r not that evil.
 

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