Read Prologue & chapter 1.*Prologue*
Sounds promising.
Arakshi's character & past was written brilliantly.
Sakshi lost her parents & the only relative she had was her uncle, Who didn't sound friendly to me.
Arjun: A person who has no one to call his family.
His attachment to his mentor was remarkable.
He devoted his life to get a justice for his teacher.
Unique & Excellent concept.
*Chapter 1*
After reading prologue I thought Mamaji is a neg character. But I was wrong.
The only thing sakshi is remained with is her uncle & a mission to get justice for her father.
Mamaji just not gave shelter to her but also made her continue her studies & tried to alleviate her pain. Seems like an ideal to me.
Shree-chotu scene was funny. They left everything behind & moved to the academy just for Arjun. & they never complained about anything. they indeed are true friends.
I love Sameer of your stories. A mysterious man to his own wife. He may contradict with his friend's view, but still he is there for him.
& Ayesha left her job & became housewife๐
Arjun is now second-in-command of the academy. I think this academy holds many secrets.
& now that whole ETF is transferred there, There most be something really important.
Arakshi meeting. It was not something really fancy, it was casual yet I loved it.
It seemed natural. Two strangers with same destination, finally met each other๐
Loved it
Edited by laila1994 - 10 years ago