New FF yayayayayayayyy
That too by you Avantika!!! Yayyy
Ok, sorry for the super late reply to this! I had exams and then was super busy at work! Sooo just catching up with all updates 😳
What a brilliant prologue! I must say again, you literally can write a novel (in fact this would make a very good one😳) and get it published! Like really! And i m not just saying it
The beginning was beyond amaazing..loved how you introduced Sakshi and Arjun
I was literally at the station, waiting with Sakshi.. but feel so bad for her
Coming to the first chapter!
First of all - OMG have u been to Dhanaulti? I went there so many years ago..and it is beautiful! Its the first time i saw someone mentioning that place😃 MMM you transported me there, amongst the mountains and the pine trees😳
LOOOLLL Shree and Chotu's dialogues are hilarious hahaha😆😆
Aisha's entry was superbbb!! hahaha i can just imagine Chotu and Shree gobbling down the paranthas 😆😆😆
OMG your descriptions are so amaaazing
Sorry if the comment is getting a bit long. I m actually reading and writing at the same time lol
OH. MY. GOD.
Did you just say that was NOT an epic meet? Seriously? Did i hear that right?
That was the most amazing first meet i have ever read! I could literally feel the rain, hear the thunder (even though its not raining here - for a change lol😆)
And I could see the whole scene playing out in front of my eyes..like the most amazing movie ever!
Ahhh it was just amazing beyond amazing!
And the last few lines were just superbbb👏👏👏
I dunno how you write so beautifully! Most of all, how come you didnt go into being a writer? You could have had a good many books published - honestly!
Anyway already bada wala comment ho gaya hehe
I absolutely loved it! And i shall be waiting for the next update whenever it is 😳
I shall be going to bed with the memory of their first meet
Thanks Avantika 🤗🤗🤗
P.S - I hope you are feeling better now! 🤗
Edited by ritu_24 - 10 years ago
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