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SwaRon||VruShan AT#112-Chaklate Girl Completes A Successful Year<3 (Page 76)

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Posted: 09 January 2014 at 7:22am | IP Logged
distru I need someone to proof read my SS's coming update and give me the desired and required feedback

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i mean like someone should read it and then tell me from a reader's point of view that what is missing and what can be added or edited so that I can make it more effective.
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Originally posted by cenation123

i mean like someone should read it and then tell me from a reader's point of view that what is missing and what can be added or edited so that I can make it more effective.

hmmm...
but u are a brilliant writer isli kya zarurat hai?
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are distru this update is what made me write the whole thing to i want ki uska impact waisa hi ho and I am not so sure about what i wrote so I want to get a reader's genuine opinion.I mean this update is really going to be the thing that will lead to the climax so I want that ki iska impact zabardast ho
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Originally posted by cenation123

are distru this update is what made me write the whole thing to i want ki uska impact waisa hi ho and I am not so sure about what i wrote so I want to get a reader's genuine opinion.I mean this update is really going to be the thing that will lead to the climax so I want that ki iska impact zabardast ho

acha...good idea...
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i just need a person who is not biased gives me the genuine review so as i can improve and edit accordingly
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Originally posted by cenation123

i just need a person who is not biased gives me the genuine review so as i can improve and edit accordingly

hmm... u know anyone you can do that?
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Posted: 09 January 2014 at 7:38am | IP Logged
nope thats why i was asking here but tere alaawa no one here.I have no particular person in mind anyone who is interested can do it.Only condition that they should forget that I am harshita and just read it as something they expect you know

I am making no sense here but i think you get what I mean

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