Asyaff |Ferocity:the war for and against love|updtnote pg63 22may - Page 41

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Zoya was scared with asad.
She believed that asad never hurt her in a way akram did
Haider started loving humeira.
Asad told haider to marry humeira for revenge
He was shocked to see humeira is the same girl to whom he love
Hope humeira & haider solved asad & zoya misunderstanding
Precap was interesting zoya in danger
Continue when u get chance
Do pm me when u update next
Thanks
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lol as usual goons on the road
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rosyluck

Wow this is sooo goood i cant believe i missed out
On this story.
Thnx for the pm cause niw i can read an really
Lovely story.
Im soo sorry i have to comment lately for ur next update
Caus i've got a really busy week next week
Hey i luv zoya and humaira bond
Its really interesting.
Feelings are growing for humaira and Haider
Thats amazing.
And the best part is that Asad is going to propose Zoya.
The flash back was superb and very lovely.
I love zoya's dress.
U write really good and im happy that i saw this FF.
I hope u did good in ur exam.
Well do cont soon
And dont forget to pm me
Will be late commenting so sorry in advance



Thankyou so much for this lovely lovely comment !...
Asad's proposal was a flashback dear ... :)
Zoya and humaira are very very close to eachother !
Feelings are there for both haider humaira but before haider could confess it ...
There was ASAD AHMED KHAN !!! ...
thanks for the dress i am popular for my dresses πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update
Zoya was scared with asad.
She believed that asad never hurt her in a way akram did
Haider started loving humeira.
Asad told haider to marry humeira for revenge
He was shocked to see humeira is the same girl to whom he love
Hope humeira & haider solved asad & zoya misunderstanding
Precap was interesting zoya in danger
Continue when u get chance
Do pm me when u update next
Thanks


thanks hope for the best ! πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aseelashah

First all the best for ur xams & future

Pls concentrate on ur studies.
We will wait for ur updates,
So update when u got time.
And dont say sorry for it
Now the update was superb
Now zoya is in danger πŸ˜­
When will this misunderstanding clear
Thanks for the pm
Take care😳



Misunderstanding will clear just before the FF ends !! πŸ˜•
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Posted: 10 years ago
        ASYA ff : "Ferocity: the war for and                                 against love " ...



Part : 8 


There were goons on the road and Zoya was helpless . She was not trying to interact with them and wanted to leave the area as soon as possible . But that wasn't the thing . A man mainly in his 30's grabbed her hand pulled her with such a force that she almost fainted due to the force . They were about to hit her when suddenly a hand stopped them . She looked above and found one and only Asad standing there . His one glance and the goons ran away in haste ...


Zoya looked at him with tears . And Asad as a duty placed his coat over her and said ! ...

" Get . in . the . car . right . Now !!! "...

the terror in his voice was enough for her to get terrified . 


XoXoX 


"Where are you going ? " spoke haider from behind to humaira who was going out with her car keys ...
she turned back and saw haider and immediately turned other way and started walking . haider has been discharged from the hospital and was now obeying asad's order ...

Haider came in front of her and held her by her upper arm agressively  . 
"Leave me !!! ...Haider i said leave me !!! ..."

"NO !! ...i am not going to leave you till you tell me the truth ! ..."

"Leave me haider !!! ..."

"No humaira !!!...Just look at me and tell me that you don't Love me !! ..."

"Leave me haider..." she jerked her hand away and turned to other side " I don't love you ! ..." 

" Look in to my eyes Humaira !! ...''

" I know you love me ! ..."

"No i don't "

"U love me ! "

"No ..."

"U love me humaira !! ..."

"NO I DON"T !! ...stop it !! "

"U do love tell me the truth humaira !! ..."

" YES !!!...I LOVE YOU !!...YES I DO ...but we can't be together no never love takes us nowhere ...i don't want to become a living corpse just LEAVE ME !!! ..."


XoXoX 


They were travelling in Asad's SUV and the radio was on . Zoya was feeling very very awkward like this so Asad changed the chanel and played an old hindi song ...


Tere liye, ham hain jiye, honton ko siye 
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, har aansoo piye 
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye 


she looked at him and tears started to stream in her eyes . She easily recognised the song . This song was the same that Asad sang for her in a party of the office . how she wished she could rewind the time and bring back the moments they shared...


Tere liye, tere liye 
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, har aansoo piye 
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, honton ko siye 
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye 
Tere liye, tere liye 


Asad and Zoya looked at eachother for a min and their eyes locked and the tears din't get unnoticed by him ...


Zindagi, le ke aayi hai, beete dinon ki kitaab -2 
Ghere hain, ab hamein, yaadein be-hisaab 
Bin poochhe, mile mujhe, kitne saare jawaab  



Asad's grip was getting tighter on the steering wheel and Zoya was already trying not to broke down in front of him . She just wanted him to hate her so that he don't get any type of hurt this time because of her ...


Chaaha tha kya, paaya hai kya, hamne dekhiye 
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye 
Tere liye, tere liye 




These lines were meant for Zoya it looked like they were describing her phase that "chaha tha kya" was that she wanted Asad and " paaya hai kya " was the that akram's idiotic and brutal behavior ... 



Kya kahoon, duniya ne kiya, mujh se kaisa bair -2 
Hukam tha, main jiyun, lekin tere baghair 
Naadaan hai woh, kehte hain jo, mere liye tum ho ghair 
Kitne sitam, hampe sanam, logon ne kiye 
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye 



Asad's eyes were already bloodshot by this time as all the memories of him and Zoya came in his mind ...


Tere liye, tere liye 
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, honton ko siye 
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, har aansoo piye 
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke ...


And that was the last straw he switched off the radio with a thud and looked away immediately and Zoya quickly brushed her tears off ...


" Stop !!! ..." Said Zoya ...


" huh ?"

"Thankyou i will go now my house is just round the corner ..."

"Your house is ?..."

"Umm ...Yes me and ...er humaira live there...on r-r-re-rent ! "

"Sit back ! " he ordered her to sit back and explained that he will leave her till her house and she didn't argue much ! ...



XoXoX .



"Humaira stop !! " Said haider to her when she was walking away furiously ...


"Why ? ! "

"Because i love you ! "

"Just stop it haider ! ..."

"you will love me ...but at last i will be the one who will hurt you and i can't see you like this ! "

" You will never hurt me ! "
haider said while coming close to her and then wasting no time he kissed her . The kiss was slow gentle yet very passionate . They didn't even realise when they were soaked in rain . Breaking the kiss haider picked up humaira and took her to his car and placed her on the saet and all this while humaira's eyes were shut tightly . Haider's heart pained seeing her trusting him so blindly ...


They reached a small cottage and haider took humaira in after picking her up . Humaira was still very shy and was hiding under his chest . Haider placed her on the bed and stroked her cold cheek with his warm hands placing the lock of hair behind he kissed her again and this time more urgently ...

One things led to another and soon they were lying on the bed naked lost in each other where Haider was showering humair with kisses and she was so lost that she didn't even knew what they were headimng to . Soon they found their lids heavy and then the sleep took over them ...


This was the night that will change everyone's lives . Humaira completely lost herself to haider . And for Haider it could  have been the most pleaserable night of his life if Asad hadn't come to him asking him for help ...


XoXoX .



" Stop it ! ..we are here thanks ! ..." said zoya and ran away asad gazed at her house and was awstruck the house was small very small fior Zoya she always wanted a big house ...


It was raining and he got an idea to know all about her he went away and bought a gown for her . He already organised a party for the success of a deal and now he wanted Zoya to wear what he wants ...

He purposly got soaked so he could gain shelter in her house he knocked on the door and as stunned looking at her there was she who was wearing a blue floral print kaftan dress ...


" Umm...i  have bought a dress for you actually ...there's a party in the office and i now you only must be having ..."


"You are soaked get inside please fast !!! "...

she closed the door behind and rushed in to get a towel and Asad was standing there surprised ...


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Zoya's dress 

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Posted: 10 years ago
A/N : 
hello guyss first of all i m sorry for not updating ! ...

but i wasn't well i had fever ...

so now i am telling you as you people know i am in 10th grade now the most imp in a person's career ...

i won't be able to update frequently you all know but that's not only the reason ther's
a second reason too...

the responses i am getting for all my stories is very very low so as i have lost many readers m deciding to complete my ongoing stories as fast as i could and then quit writing ...

i know you all must be shocked but i don't have an option  ...

PS ; i need someone to send pms for my works to other people id anyone would like to help me i will be very grateful and will be able to give you longer updates ...

i am sorry again but i have no other option !!!  
Edited by ASYA4eveAAA - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow..
Awesome updt tht was.
I loved it..
Nd the sng seq was fabulous..

Continue soon..

Al the very bst for ur exms..
Nd dnt wry dear..
U ll gt more response...
Dnt think to quit plz..
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