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Arhi SS:What you will(retold) (Page 7)

Bavari Goldie

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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 2:03pm | IP Logged
By each chapter you're making us more intrigued. Is Khush and Khushi siblings. Why he landed in RM. Awesome job. Thanks for the PM.

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mints23 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 10:44pm | IP Logged
Res... have to catch up on last couple of Raga's too!! 
Shall be back shortly!! Smile
FeistyDewdrop Goldie

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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 11:29pm | IP Logged
very very intriguing...!!!
i sympathize with khush... he being in such a dire state , im sure  , though she is taking advantage of the Raizada's generosity , its not with any vicious intent... 
i have my own doubts regarding Khushz identity... i strongly believe shez a girl... also what i learn frm the latest update is that  , her family had been quite a normal one with mamma , papa , her n her bro kishore... 
 under what circumstances she had to get into a disguise , what hpnd to her family is what i want to wait n read about  ... :D :D

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mklam Senior Member

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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 5:55am | IP Logged


Edited by mklam - 21 February 2014 at 1:47am

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meera30 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 06 January 2010
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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 5:56am | IP Logged
Timing!! Be back later to unRes

I want to apologize for being late to this but you posted the next one before I could process this!!! I am not used to prompt authors :P

Anyway - I come back to the play. Indeed the stage is being set for the plot to unravel. I see Duke Orsino's mind wheels churning and those hazel eyes with a flash of green wreaking havoc on everyone and around Khush.

Olivia makes an appearance and just as we know, is rather enamored by the young lad - much like the rest of the parivaar - interesting to see that Khush notices the not-so-normal ways of the betrothed couple - Hmmm

Will take one moment to applaud the man that was Shakespeare. How he changed the world with his stories. And helped you bring this to us!!

Edited by meera30 - 09 January 2014 at 9:31pm

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Javeria3991 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 14 April 2013
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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 6:08am | IP Logged
Awesome updateClap
something is not adding up, eerything is very confusingConfused
Lavanyah is engaged to Arnav but ther are not acting like the one. Perhaps he dont like it openly but he is ASR, he never cares for the world. 
i like lavanyah, she is modern yet traditional. i dont like her in page 3 avatar. 
Now the boy also have light green hazel eyes. I am constantly gathering Clues you are droping and they are making story intriguingThumbs Up.
 it is making me restless and my mind is wandering in different directions to predict what is going on behind the scene. I can't think hard enough.Stern Smile
Please dont take too much time to reveal the secret khush hold. 
I hope the back ground check reveal something interesting about the quite observor, khush.
waiting eagerly for the next update

Edited by Javeria3991 - 08 January 2014 at 6:22am

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cocoamob Senior Member

Joined: 07 March 2013
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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 7:05am | IP Logged
When I read the first chapter, I wasn't sure how old the young boy was and imagined him to be a little boy (under 10). Now it looks like he (or maybe she) is older and could be Khushi dressed up as a boy :-) That probably is more in line with storyline of Shakespeare's Twelfth Night.

This also reminds me of a story by Georgette Heyer called "These old Shades" where the heroine disguises herself to be a boy and is later the Duke's ward.
I am a big fan of Ms Heyer's books and this one and its sequel "Devil's Cub" are my top favorites.

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Kishmish IF-Rockerz

Joined: 08 February 2012
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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 7:09am | IP Logged
So Arnav and Khush (i) get to meet finally ! 
and surprisingly he quite calmly accepts the lad being in his house without 
blowing a fuse ! LOL
True to their characters Arnav and Lavanya are pretty indifferent and detached 
to each other ... 
Manorama Mami is as usual falling all over Lavanya ! 

Waiting for more of the story to unfold ... 
Thanks for the PM ... 

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