Arhi SS:What you will(retold) - Page 14

wow! this was amazing. no wonder khush got so scared of shyam in the last chapter. i havnt read the twelfth night, but i assume he must be a malevolent character in the book. yay!! finally he/she gets to meets his/her brother, kishore. did he recognise her?? cant wait to see what happens!!

Loved it...lavanya seems to be mesmerize by the hazel eyes

simply fabulous
loved it

😃

Edited by Kishmish - 10 years ago

Oh ! Great chapter !
Kishore Gupta enters the play , the one for whom Khush was here the first place ...
Wonder what Shyam has done wrongly this time ?
This has been such a intriguing story right from the beginning...
Waiting for the next chapter eagerly !
:)

nice update. I almost died laughing when I read about the kashmiri pulav sample. believe me when I say that I totally agree with anjali and nani coz for the life of me I just can't fast 😆
so kishore gupta is khushi's brother and he seems to be doing quite well financially. why on earth would khushi take up a job as a cook with the Raizadas? hmm ... daal mein kuch tho kala hai. and not to mention khushi was shit scared on seeing shyam. care to solve the mysteries here writer ji?😉

Oh you have the story in twists that I am unsure about what happens next...

Oh now that is very interesting...Kishore who I am assuming is Khushi's brother is there...plot thickens J

looks like Khushi is caught in the storm.. waiting..

Right now! I'm fangirling hard over this chapter!!! It was awesome, man! AWESOME!!!! And I can't wait for tomorrow!!! <3