Arhi SS:What you will(retold) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
Another terrific story from u...awesome...i'm already hooked...a very intriguing first part...loved it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
simply fabulous
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Posted: 10 years ago
My name of Khush? - hello hie bye byee.. Ee ka? Humka to ismein something blackwa in the pulses lagat hai! Ee bouy ka naam kya hui? 'Khush'..? Or is he relatd to Khushi some way?


True, for a hungry stomach bread is gold! :) Devyani Raizada indeed a kind and big hearted Women! I dunno what this boy would bring to them, but i trust her judgement. She was already taken in by him and his luckhnow connection earned him extra brownie points!

Besides the way he hugged her after listening that she was given him a place under her roof, his gratitude didn't seem fake! :)


Intriguing start! Would Love to read more! PM me!

And finally you've posted in IPK forums. Now more people would be able to enjoy you're stories! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
NICE START PLEASE CONTINUE.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I'm all intrigued now :)
PS: Do we ever escape the bard of Avon??
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Posted: 10 years ago
yaaay - what a great news - this new year is turning out to be tooo special these days
 
lovely start
khush - is it khushi in disguise or is it khushi's son???? - iam not good at guesses - will love to read more -
 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Intriguing start. Waiting for to read more. Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Booking my seat.😉
Will read and comment in the morning.
Its very late in my part of the world.

Just read the first part.
Interesting beginning.
Does Khush have a reason for coming to the Raizada mansion?
And why is she dressed like a boy?
Edited by 1chilly - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
That's a very interesting start...I am sure we have a entertainer  and I am definitely following you here...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ohh Shakespeare.. very interesting concept..wonderful descriptions..looking forward to see how you unravel this story. all the best!