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ArHi OS - Aye Dil Bata (Page 9)

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Posted: 31 January 2014 at 8:15am | IP Logged
fabulous OS !!!!


thanks for pm Smile

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Posted: 31 January 2014 at 10:18am | IP Logged
beautiful os
loved it
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 31 January 2014 at 2:07pm | IP Logged
Just one thing, How I wish CVs would have given us this!
Absolutely brilliant:D

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Posted: 31 January 2014 at 5:50pm | IP Logged
I wish the show's writers had even half your sensibility. I was so angry with Arnav at that point, and he never really apologized to Khushi for it. Or any of the other times he belittled her. It's not OK for a man to insult his wife, or anybody else , based on their financial status and social standing.

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Posted: 01 February 2014 at 12:59am | IP Logged
awesome
i alway want arnav to apologies to khushi
he was wrong that time
but nothing like that happen in show
i am happy after reading this
thnx for pm

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Posted: 01 February 2014 at 1:51am | IP Logged
I wish something like this was shown in IPK, this was fantastic. Loved your take on this scene and you wrote it so beautifully. Brilliant work ClapClapClap

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Posted: 01 February 2014 at 3:25am | IP Logged
This was a beautiful way to give an insight into why Arnav did & what he did and why he behaved the way he did mostly in the show.
Khushi handled it pretty well than going for that stupid Mrs. India competition. I till date don't understand why that track was made. There were so many possibilities. Thanks for this alternate track.
Loved it.

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Posted: 01 February 2014 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
Amazing and brilliant one shot, yet quite heart breaking.

The one shot was written exceptionally well and a brilliant read,

It's a shame the argument between Arnav and Khushi turned out to be quite painful as Khushi was left so distraught and heart broken.

I'm glad Khushi made Arnav open up to her and reveal why he has got so much hatred inside him which leads him to insult her.

Arnav finally revealing his painful past and sharing the sad memories with Khushi was so emotional, 

I absolutely loved the one shot,  wonderful writing.

Thanks for the PM xx 




Edited by P4rveen12 - 01 February 2014 at 12:46pm

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