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ArHi OS - Aye Dil Bata (Page 6)

Aryancha Senior Member
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Posted: 22 January 2014 at 3:42am | IP Logged
Awesome update..loved it a lot.. Smile

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Posted: 22 January 2014 at 4:07am | IP Logged
he thought she left him
and how much he panicked
but she was still there
thank god for that
but if he hadnt let it out she might have left him one day for sure
oh my she had to do this though
well if she didnt he would keep doing this
and this way they could go further apart
which she doesnt want
well time for him to let it out
after all how long will he hurt himself and her
wow when she doesnt do anything then only you found out that she was the only who took care of it all
that everyone is dependent on her
including him
well that you did so beautifully
making him finally see sense
and let his past outta the way
thanx for this scene
cheers for pm


Edited by chavvi16 - 22 January 2014 at 5:59am

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Posted: 22 January 2014 at 5:13am | IP Logged
Lovely OS !! This is the way IPK should have been !! They were just showing Khushi as an OTT person which she is not !! She is a very strong person and I loved the way u portrayed her in this OS !!

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Posted: 22 January 2014 at 6:14am | IP Logged
that was awesome <3
loved the story

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Posted: 22 January 2014 at 8:36am | IP Logged
Wow.. That was just so damn amazing! Loved it! :D Thanks for the Pm.

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Posted: 22 January 2014 at 9:38am | IP Logged
Very realistic OS.. CVs would never think in this angle ..

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Posted: 22 January 2014 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
Beautiful!!                 










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Posted: 23 January 2014 at 1:19am | IP Logged
I have read such a meaningful OS after, a very long time! :)
Thank you for writing such a beautiful piece! 

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