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@pup03

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

fabulous OS !!!!

thanks for pm 😊

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 10 years ago

beautiful os

loved it

thanks for the pm

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

Just one thing, How I wish CVs would have given us this!

Absolutely brilliant:D

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SS88

@SS88

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

I wish the show's writers had even half your sensibility. I was so angry with Arnav at that point, and he never really apologized to Khushi for it. Or any of the other times he belittled her. It's not OK for a man to insult his wife, or anybody else , based on their financial status and social standing.

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navjot7

@navjot7

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

awesome
i alway want arnav to apologies to khushi
he was wrong that time
but nothing like that happen in show
i am happy after reading this
thnx for pm

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847546

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

I wish something like this was shown in IPK, this was fantastic. Loved your take on this scene and you wrote it so beautifully. Brilliant work 👏👏👏

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800971

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

This was a beautiful way to give an insight into why Arnav did & what he did and why he behaved the way he did mostly in the show.
Khushi handled it pretty well than going for that stupid Mrs. India competition. I till date don't understand why that track was made. There were so many possibilities. Thanks for this alternate track.
Loved it.

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

Amazing and brilliant one shot, yet quite heart breaking.

The one shot was written exceptionally well and a brilliant read,

It's a shame the argument between Arnav and Khushi turned out to be quite painful as Khushi was left so distraught and heart broken.

I'm glad Khushi made Arnav open up to her and reveal why he has got so much hatred inside him which leads him to insult her.

Arnav finally revealing his painful past and sharing the sad memories with Khushi was so emotional,

I absolutely loved the one shot, wonderful writing.

Thanks for the PM xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 10 years ago

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Chandana

@chandana.s

IF-Rockerz

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

Brilliant... I really wanted to see all this in IPKKND but it never happened but i really enjoyed reading the OS...

Arnav insecurities,reason behind his actions r very beautifully described..

Im glad Khushi wanted to get him out of his past & end this rather just took his insult,cry & forgive him like always ...

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833275

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

Very very very beautifully written

From srart till end not a single place where I got bored or I missed the words

Loved it..

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