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Culaccino ~ An ArHi SS | Ch 3 Pg 45 Note Pg 58 (4/4/14) (Page 54)

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Posted: 17 March 2014 at 1:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kooldewdrop

the entiree proposal n the companionship shared by Arnav n Khushi was simply spectacular.. The flashbacks then immediately make me wonder why did K do what she did?? May be m repeating it again n again in my every comment but i cant help it... Sigh!!!
the conflict of emotions which Arnav us fighting against is so saddening... N wot do i say about Khushi??? Its simply breakiing my heart to c both of them going through such an emotional roller coaster...
the gleam of hope which had filled her with so much of warmth when Arnav promised to try twisted my heart with agony n happinezz at the same time...
 
Devender Raizada is one guiding force on whom we can depend blindfoldedly... The words he stated touched my soul!!!
 
the tenderness with which Arnav handled her... Sigh!!!!

Thanks for the feedback and again keep reading to know answers to all your questions :)

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Posted: 17 March 2014 at 1:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Uzii

I just read ur story n it's really good, the concept is different.

Thanks so much! :D
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Posted: 17 March 2014 at 1:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by avika_ShArMa

Lovely chapter. Smile

Arnav and his father share a rare deep bond. The way he looks upto his father and seeks his advice in important matters is so goodt to see.

Im happy he agreed to khushi's wish. It takes a lot of effort, open-mindedness, and a heart filled with loads of true love to forgive your partner for infidelity. Khushi is so lucky to have him in his life. 

Looking forward to the next chapter. Wonderful story btw. Big smile

Thanks so much for the feedback! :D
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Posted: 17 March 2014 at 1:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MsDroolKanthan

Khushi did cheat on Arnav but why and under what circumstances .
Will you reveal this or leave it to our imagination?
I must applaud you for for daring to experiment with such a genre inspite of knowing the chappals that could have come your way.

All questions will be answered as the story moves forward but thanks so much for the feedback! :D

And yes I knew that there may be many biases and many people who would need convincing to look at these characters as characters of just this story and not with the burden of the names they come with  - this story was conceptualized a certain way and thats what I keep in mind while writing it :)

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Posted: 17 March 2014 at 1:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by harshitfever

hey just read the story
 
I must say it is different from otherss
as khushi has done something wrong
which effect their relationship
 
love arnav dad he has a great bonding with both khushi and arnav .
 
I don't know arnav is doing correct or wrong Because we don't know actually what happened.
 
but one thing is clear he still love and care for her
 
will love to read more pls continue soon
 

Thanks so much for the feedback but even more for that one line of not taking Arnav's side because we dont really know the entire story just yet. Now, I am not saying that Arnav is to blame for whatever happened (nor am I saying he is not) but I am merely commending you on not passing judgments on either party without knowing the entire dynamics of the situation :)

And I am glad you like the role reversal here - for once Khushi is in the obvious wrong. 
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Posted: 17 March 2014 at 1:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anu1017

Wow that was such an awesome update!!! Just loved how tender Arnav was with Khushi, despite everything he just cannot stop loving herSmile

Every story Arnav is morally flawed this is so different to see flawed Khushi!!! Please continue soon cannot wait to see how the story progressesSmile

Thanks so much for the feedback and for liking the role reversal portrayed here :)
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Posted: 17 March 2014 at 1:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by spilla

Fabulous update

Thanks! :D
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Posted: 17 March 2014 at 1:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by IronButterfly

Missing the story.
Looong time.

I know! I am missing it too! But college has been hectic...however I will update this as soon as I write something! Sorry for the delay!

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