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Culaccino ~ An ArHi SS | Ch 3 Pg 45 Note Pg 58 (4/4/14) (Page 22)

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Posted: 17 January 2014 at 9:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by RITIKA..

Loved the update
Really want to know the reason behind their separation
Continue soon

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Keep reading to get the answers to all your questions! 

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Posted: 17 January 2014 at 9:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ShikhaKhushi

Oh God! The first chapter was sooo beautiful! I totally loved the depiction of the emotions of the different characters. And I would love to know what pushed Khushi to do what she did... Because she really loves Arnav a lot, it sees dammit!

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Posted: 17 January 2014 at 9:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by V3Od

Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was a superb startClap

Words are not enough to tell how wonderful it was. I loved the idea of you displaying newspaper articles. It was mind-blowing. But the reporter was too much. How can she be so happy and encouraging about the news of Arnav and Khushi's separation. WeirdosAngry

Arnav's actions were harsh, but I really get what he is going through. Right now, my heart goes to both of them. I'm sure there must have been some kind of reason behind Khushi's actions. I really wonder why Khushi took such a step, when clearly she seems to love Arnav so much. I just can't bear to see these two in so much pain. Hope both would come out of this misery soonEmbarrassed

Thanks for penning down such a wonderful update, and long updates are always welcomed with open armsLOL

Eagerly waiting for the next chapterDay Dreaming

One week seems so long, so if possible update before thatWink

Thanks so much for the feedback! :D

The reporter was bitchy because well a. Its Page 3 news so catty-ness is expected and b. Clearly Arnav is a media darling and Khushi the woman who stole him from all the single ladies but is now open to criticism with Arnav not openly shielding her :)

Keep reading to know the answers to all your questions! :)
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Posted: 17 January 2014 at 9:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by yeshyeshna

awesome chapter
very well written
loved the newspaper cuttings
their love life was  good
wonder what problems occured for khushi no do this
arnav was so hurt
he still loves her
waiting for next part

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Posted: 17 January 2014 at 9:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ni_singh

well written chapter...loved it...waiting for the next one

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Posted: 17 January 2014 at 9:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by AnjuRish

why did she cheat ???
its really sad and difficult to forgive when u r partner cheats and u catch it red handed
 

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Posted: 17 January 2014 at 9:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by IronButterfly

What a brilliant job you did with this first chapter.

Really liked how you added these articles.

Nice to have a bit of insight to their past and relationship and i'm sure we will be getting it in future too which will help understand the characters better.

For a base, you've done brilliantly well.

People who are used to the best find it difficult to manage with anything less than that and that is what is happening with Khushi.
She's only seen love from Arnav and his father. It's difficult for her to adjust to this indifference but at least she's trying.

And despite everything Arnav is failing to be indifferent.

Bring it on!

Thanks for the detailed feedback! :D

You have described Khushi's state well - she has always ever seen Arnav's love and protective stance and hence his perceived indifference is a bitter pill to swallow not only inside the house but outside in the media too where she had always enjoyed Arnav's shielding previously but yes she also knows that his indifference is just 'perceived' and hence wants to still attempt to make it work :)

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Posted: 17 January 2014 at 9:52pm | IP Logged
I'll be honest, I'm having trouble believing that khushi cheated. It's so hard to
Wrap my hear around. But cheers to you for trying something completely out of the box, and I'll admit- it's gotten me interested. I can't wait to see the reasons behind what happened (although I have to say, I'm hoping there will be a happily ever after- after the angst is solved, of course). I'm looking forward to this- I love your other story, so I can't wait to see where this goes!

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