Originally posted by: kushi.raizadaGreat going..intense part..so much pain both of them have..continue soon
Originally posted by: kushi.raizadaGreat going..intense part..so much pain both of them have..continue soon
Originally posted by: avika_ShArMaInteresting Chapter. Im so gripped to the story and the concept looks amazing. 😊
Has khushi really cheated or there's some kind of misunderstanding? But she herself is so confused and in the prologue when arnav asked her if she would have gone with her action and she said 'I don't know'. If she really did what she did, arnav will surely find it hard to forgive her.
Its so sad naa that people do such things without realizing what trouble they'll be falling in, how many lives they would be jeopardizing and destroying the peace of mind of everyone, just for their pleasure.
Loved it FP. update soon!😊
Originally posted by: luvbugoh wow wat a fantastic start...lovely update... i guess we r in a ride with ASR's hot and cold behavior :D
Originally posted by: FieryPhoenix
Awww! Thanks so much for reading this even though you dont like the genre :)And about not being able to believe that Khushi cheated? Why do we put her character up, just by the name that too, on a pedestal so high? She is also a human who can make errors, no? Anyway, keep reading to know the answers to all your questions! :)
Originally posted by: FieryPhoenix
Thanks for the feedback! :DBut in the prologue she admits that she cheated but makes it clear that she did not sleep with NK and that is when Arnav says that she would have had he not come to which she answers she doesnt know an answer to that. Please read the prologue again, it would help :)And yes, the last part of what you have written is very true but there are many complexities involved in these things and clearly Khushi was not looking for pleasure and neither has she derived any out of it if one was to assess her in the present time.
Originally posted by: tr0001Really liked this chapter, FP. You words clearly described the pain and anguish in these situations. It is hard to let go so easily for Arnav understandably. I loved the dad and DIL part. All of it was very realistic. Will wait to see how it plays out.
Originally posted by: mimosa658This looks so promising FP dear...
Loved it...Somehow it is very difficult to believe that Khushi has cheated Arnav...I have a feeling that theres more to it...I will wait for the story to unfold...You write so brilliantly...👏
Originally posted by: 1chillyThis is a brilliant story FP.
I was in tears reading it.Brilliantly depicted emotions.One could feel the love and the hurt of all three characters.You've made a fan of your writing with this chapter.Loved it.And Geeta's banner is too good.
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