Culaccino ~ An ArHi SS | Ch 3 Pg 45 Note Pg 58 (4/4/14) - Page 5

Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Anupama.


You totally know how to set in the emotion intended. I totally feel for Arnav and whatever be the case as she says that she couldn't understand ,didn't know..seems that he had said something hurtful and gone away.. And as much as I am repulsed and disappointed by the cheating, I am not able to bring myself against her. Need to know more.
Very intense FP..! Well written..

Reading very carefully, arent you? :D

Thanks so much for the feedback! I hope the story lives up to the expectation! :D
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Crazy4Sobti


It took a while, but my puppy face worked. It always works. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Loved the title, so different and a deeper meaning. Mark left by a cold glass and  I can already relate it to the prologue. Mark left by something that happened in the past. Wonder how thick and strong this mark is? Will they ever will be able to erase it?

This sounds pretty intense, FP. Bring it on!! You already covered so many genres in GHD that I am very confident, this story will excel the standards you set. 

Good luck!!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Thanks so much for your feedback! And for an analysis of the name as well which is spot on btw...the entire story is about that mark.

And for the last line, you deserve a hug, so yeh lo - ๐Ÿค—

PS - Yes, its all due to your puppy face! Lol! :D


Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Bavari


Wow interesting Prologue. Waiting  for  the future updates. Thanks for the PM.

Thanks for the feedback! :D
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Neha2014


That is an interesting start and quite different...hmm, Kushi cheated..
Can't wait to read the next one...

Thanks! :D
Posted: 10 years ago
Very much intriguing! 
Pm me when you update. 
Posted: 10 years ago
too in interesting, please include me in your pm list. ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›
Posted: 10 years ago
Sounds intriguing!
Khushi cheated on Arnav? And now they are together no more. Khushi wanna work it out, but obviously Arnav is raged! Wanna see what happens next!
Posted: 10 years ago
seems to be an intense piece of fictn...
khushi does admit to b on d verge of betraying...thats serious... i wonder how the relationship is gonna survive..!
cont soon...
Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting ..Great start..loved it

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