This content was originally posted by: -doe-eyes-This was the perfect time for that flashback. I could feel the magic of the moment coming off my screen and drowning in it and after the tensions of the previous chapter, it was blissful. That moment had been poignant because it had marked a beginning for them, and this moment, as he promises to try, even though he's not sure it'll work- the chance that he gives her is another beginning, and I hope for their sakes that it's a beginning of good things :) This was the most beautiful part of the update, for me, how the past and present are intertwined and you feel like you're on the verge of something wonderful happening. I'm so happy he gave her the chance, so happy Khushi is determined to erase each of his doubts. The hope she gleans from his ambivalent agreement was palpable.
I love the relationship shared between Arnav and his father. The older man has a wise head on his shoulders and I'm glad to see him being more rational than his son instead of flying into a temper as on assumes almost hereditary with the family. His keeping his cool and choosing not to judge at the heat of the moment, and valuing the relationship ArHi shares makes him an awesome dad and character in my book. His bluntness only makes me feel happier, because I feel Arnav needs someone like that in his life, to keep him grounded. I also love how in this story we get to see an Arnav who was left behind by his mother, and doesn't abhor his father. I've honestly never read an FF with this concept before, and you've done it so well and so realistically this might have been happening on screen the whole time *claps*The last scene...sigh. Reminded me of the night of her birthday. The Arnav here too succumbs to his emotions when no one can see him- or at least, that's what he thinks. It was a beautiful, poignant, profound scene, and I'm kinda running out of adjectives here to describe how much I'm enjoying this story. Continue soon!
This content was originally posted by: IDatIFIt was a beautiful update
It was very nice of Arnav to give khushi a chance
This content was originally posted by: jdukeFabulous update. "I will try...but I cant promise anything." gives the essence of this chapter. Glad he accepted to try and hope everything works out at the end. Really like your writing skills and liked the way you connected Kushi current emotional state to flash back. Also liked the way you portrayed Father-Son relationship. This story is different because it portrays female cheating male :). BTW Culaccino is it a water ring left on glass table(which can be removed easily) or wooden table (can't be removed unless resurfaced)?
This content was originally posted by: kondhiliAfter reading this last update i just can't help but ponder about what pushed khushi to the edge?
What made khushi ready to give up this man whose life seems to start and end with khushi and khushi alone. That was some proposal that khushi got from Arnav...why the hell was khushi ready to give up all of this.Arnav's father, he stole the show for me...inspite of everything that has happened he is so good to khushi.Can't wait to find out how things reached such a sad stage.
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