Culaccino ~ An ArHi SS | Ch 3 Pg 45 Note Pg 58 (4/4/14) - Page 31

Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by likeadesigirl


Their sadness makes me so sad- I do hope this has a happy ending, even if life doesn't always get one. After all, that's what stories are for- to take us away from the sadness of our own lives and into a different world. I'm really looking forward to seeing how you resolve their differences and how she gains his trust back.

Very well written. Thanks for sharing your thoughts :)

And also thanks for the feedback and I hope I wont disappoint you :)
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Bavari


Beautiful update. You've explained Arnav's turmoil and pain and Khushi's guilt and pain so perfectly. Waiting for Arnav's answer to Khushi's solution. Thx 4 d PM.

Thanks so much for the feedback! :D
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by areeba_blossom


Perfect!

Thanks! :D
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by ShikhaKhushi


My heart lies shattered on the ground...

Awww! 

Thanks so much for such a poetic feedback! 
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by luvbug


wow this was a wonderful chapter... im glad khushi while advising..kept his best interests in mind and was there for him as a friend :)
emotions were very beautifully portrayed! 

Thanks for the feedback! :D
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by IronButterfly





The last one depicts Arnav's feelings at the moment very well.

Thanks so much for sharing! :)
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Gurmeet4Drashti


Brilliant update !!! :)

Thanks for the feedback! :D
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by naj84


Awesome story...👍🏼
Just loved it...😛

Thanks! :D
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Vidhi_K


Interesting story. I like it

Thanks for the feedback! :D
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by aarrsshhii


Its understandable that arnav loves her alot but his trust is shaken beyond what khushi can repair at the moment.. ofcz fidelity in a relationship is the most important part to it...I wonder what happened that khushi tried to cheat on arnav...well...waiting to see if they can sort out this mess...

Keep reading to get answers to all your questions.

Thanks for the feedback! :D

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