Hi Suvi finally sat down and read your chapter , trust u to have multiple cliffhangers ,
Ashu' s behavior has confused Nidhi all the more , somewhere in her past she recollects his harshness, but in bits and pieces , where does Armaan and Prthvi fit in , maybe to escape ashu , or if she was lonely she turned to them for solace
And Ashu's tentativeness , also makes Nidhi think , after all they are married , and he has missed her for so long ,
Liked the wedding , very sweet , and of course the culmination ,
You write very beautifully , the language and the narrative very interesting , but the cliffhangers!!!!!! But Suvi will be Suvi ,
Waiting for the story to unfold
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