Excellent start! I hope you continue soon. I especially like how in your story Paro knows that Varun was a terrorist. I had been wondering that about the show. Yes she fainted for large portions of the fighting, but didn't she realize that the Baaratis were shooting back at the BSD officers? Shouldn't the fact that they have guns been cause for suspicion? Perhaps she is in too much shock, and too blinded by her fear and disdain for BSD to think clearly. Hopefully in the future she will look back and see the flaws in her own beliefs.
Anyway. Please continue soon, I'm anxious to read more!
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