Originally posted by: ll-Shilpa-ll*edited*
Will edit this later, just finished reading the whole update, even the PM part, it is fantastic, truly no words.
Loved, loved it all.π€ I will have to read it again for sure, to clearly write my comments.
I am back!
Okay, I don't know if you have realized this but the conversation we had long ago about Rosy and Arjun's respective strengths come to mind when I read this update.
You always worried that Rosy appeared stronger than Arjun and I assured you that somewhere down the line Arjun will be just as strong as Rosy is and that time has arrived behna.
But there was a never a doubt that he was strong, if he wasn't then he wouldn't have walked away from her just because she asked him to. And that strength in him came from their years of friendship and bond between them.
It must have killed him to walk away from her at the most crucial phase of their lives but he did because that is what she had wanted it.
I am not blaming Rosy for asking him to leave, she thought he was in love with her best friend and she didn't want to get in the way of that because of whatever happened between her and Arjun. She also had other insecurities and obligations that prevented her from tying him down to her.
Hope that made sense, in other words what I am trying to say is both Arjun and Rosy's POV in this update clears so many things yet it also leaves many questions in mind, which I won't post her.π
Hmm..so Rahtore has the confirmation he had been seeking but he is still reluctant to share what he has found out.
Has he planted a seed of doubt in Arjun's head yet? I am sure once Arjun's starts questioning things he will realize where Rathore was leading him. I think we should all brace ourselves for your next revelation.π
Once outside his room, he clenched his eyes tight for a moment and mumbled, "I wish I was there, Rathore. I wish I hadn't left."
Aha, he is going to remember this words to himself soon and will repeat them too I am sure about this.
Ufff...Mario and his inability to keep his hands off Rosy...seriously the man gives me the creeps and its no wonder Rosy is repulsed by him, just reading about him disgusts me.
Does he not know any other way to seduce a lady? This is the second time he spikes her drink in hopes of getting to her? But then Rosy is a smart lady, she would not fall into his trap with his cheap tricks.
But I think that he has also reached a limit and you are about to give us some dhamakedaar episodes I am sure, so bring them on I am ready for them.π
A drunk Rosy, now that I enjoyed the most. It was funny the way she kept thinking she was talking to Karan and not Arjun himself, and I am surprised Arjun was amused by it rather than irritated, but then again he has just been reintroduced to his Miss A and her antics so of course he would be amused.π
And finally the moment on the beach, Rosy's pain, Arjun's frustration at not being able to fix what is ailing her was beautifully written behna.
Finally Rosy finds peace in his arms, if only he knew how much she had needed him when she lost all that was precious to her, I hope he continues to be there in her time of need because he is the only one who can bring that peace in her life.
Loved, loved the update behna, please, please update soon.π€
Originally posted by: laila1994*Edited*
Why? You did it again to meπIt started as a fun part (part b) but again, you ended it like this.Rosy had gone through so much... I wonder if in reality a person can tolerate this much.Rosy no REAL rosy is a funny girl."Even during his marriage with Roshni, he had tried his best to move past her and give his new relationship a fair chance. But now he realised, he wasn't looking for a lover or a soulmate. He had only been running around, looking for a shelter, looking for a place he could call home."I wonder how Arjun & Roshni's relation was? In one update you said it was complicated. But how much? I know Arjun could never be unfair to her, but again did she know that her husband loved her friend. And she unintentionally came in between them?Why Roshni never told Rosy that Arjun loves her?Why Roshni never told Arjun that Rosy & Sha are alive? ( When she was alive)And yes, I am missing mishtiπ
Originally posted by: coolRDi'm xtremly sry 4 nt rplyng 4 dis stry.. hav read olmst hlf of it nd i mst say dis stry is really fantstic nd is beautifully writn.. til nw watevr i'v read hs mde me fall 4 ur stry.. wil definitely try 2 finish readng it soon
Originally posted by: drunkiiebabeawesome update
thanks for the pm
Originally posted by: hal96Awesome update
Firstly im honestly really sorry cudnt read previous update till now ... i was really ill n college n ill so did not get the timeBut loved the uodatesRosys weak formRathod doing his own investigationRosy drunkAcp Karela Rawte lolIm giggling soo much think my mums gunna kill me in her sleepLoved itThanks 4 pmUpdate soonCant waitπ
Originally posted by: ...Maha-Srk...Wow
such a long update
amazing just love it
read both parts wonderful sab ne sub kuch bol dia i have no words so in simple just fabolus eagerly w8ng 4 next plz update soonish n thanx 4 pm
Originally posted by: Shivi1997Wow such a long updatei like itno..no..i love ititna wait karwaya to itna bada wala update to banta haibtw thanks 4 the pmNow coming to ur update
i m lil' confusedy sam asked arjun abt yash?Did he find smthing and if yes, then wat?Rosy also stated that she never ever belong to yash..mrovr she told there's nthng beautiful btwn themwat that mean?U didnt disclose the whole yash part plz disclose d other half in nxt partu promised that too pakka walano adha adhura ok
btw that arjun-rosy part was so funny
arjun's plastic surgery wala dialogue was fab
love uupdate soon
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