Fan Fictions


Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

TaaRey & Swaron : Make u feel tat u love me (uptd pg no 97) 26/8/1 (Page 5)

poorni_vishali IF-Dazzler

Joined: 10 June 2013
Posts: 2942

Posted: 06 January 2014 at 11:13am | IP Logged

Sorry if it was nt upto ur expectations nd one more thing tis  story is for my sweet akka  -Glitz-    

tis story is treat  for u akkaTongue

TaaRey & Swaron: Make u feel tat u love me


Chapter 1





Every1 r there (it means including kria)  nd they were discussing abt  annual day bt as usual mu between swaron nd rey avoiding every1 2day as he feels something strange nd sitting near swayam. Both reyam were  sitting quite nd they were thinking something bt  their chain of thoughts were broken by a voice


Voice: Bhai

All were shocked 2 hear tat voice except one tat is kria as she doesn't no tat voice.the first one 2 break the silence was


Sharon: TAANI

She was wearing tis wid her simplicity


Now kria was shocked as she was seeing taani for the first time.

Taani: bhabhi

Taani ran 2 sharon nd gave a tight hug 2 her nd Sharon also hugged her during tis there is  some1 smiling looking at tis scene nd another one was totally shocked. And tat tis... the smiling person was yes its Swayam nd the shocked one was Rey

All: Taani

Taani:hi guys

All: hi taani


She hugged every1  nd she went towards Swayam

Taani: bhai

Swayam: Taani


Both hugged each other as both didn't c each other  after taani's engagement

Taani: bhai how r u?

Swayam: taani I cnt believe tat u r here nd u r changed taani

Taani: I no bhai changes r needed in life

Taani saw kria how was standing alone

Taani:hi I m Taani  Shekawat

Kria:hi taani I m (before she could say anything taani cut her)

Taani: the awesome dancer Kria ghai right?

Kria: ya right

Kria nd Taani hugged each other nd smiled nd taani came 2 rey who was standing like a statue

Taani:hi rey

Rey: no response

Taani no tat rey is in shock on seeing her

Taani: rey

Rey:haa haa  hi


Swayam: taani wht r u doing here?


Before taani could answer she was cut by...

Sharon: taani is rejoining in college

All (including reyam) : wht???

Taani: ya guys I m rejoining in college

Simmi: super taani we missed u so much

All: ya

Swayam: wait wait how does Sharon no tat u r cuming here? Even I dnt no? y r u rejoining?

Sharon: wht do u think only u vil b in contact wid ur frnd widout knowing every1. Taani is my gud frnd so I talk 2 her daily

Taani: ya bhai  bhabhi talks 2 me daily and she says me everything 

Swayam was so surprised

Swayam: bt taani y r u rejoining  here?

Sharon: Taani's engagement  was broken

Rey: wht??

Every1 were shocked the most shocked persons were rey nd swayam

Swayam: wht r u saying Sharon

Taani: ya bhai its true wht bhabhi is saying

Rey: y?

Sharon:there was some problem between their family so it was broken

Swayam: wht taani r u k?

Taani:ya bhai I m perfectly fine nd happy

Swayam: r u sure? Bt u didn't  say me

Taani: ya bhai. I jst dnt want 2 distrub any1 bhai


All were talking wid taani nd rey was standing in a corner in RH nd he doesn't no wht 2 do. And he doesn't no whts gng on his life. Taani saw him nd went near him

Taani: rey

Rey: haa taani

Taani: how r u rey?

Rey: ya I m k

Taani no rey is still haven't moved on in his life so she was saying rey 2 move on in his life tis giving more irritation nd angry 2 rey  bt he controlled  himself on shouting frm his angel.

Taani: (in calm voice) rey pls move on in ur life wid kria rey

Rey: (in angry tone) enough taani u dnt decide for me I vil decide for me


Taani was totally feed up by tis

Taani: (in same angry tone nd wid an attitude) u no wht go to hell do wht u want I dnt care

Vicky: guys is tis our taani?

Simmi: ya man taani is changed


Saying tis taani went 2 the gang

Rey was so surprised 2 see Taani wid tis attitude he loved tis nd he no tat taani loves him.


Taani: bhabhi..(she was cut by swayam)

Swayam:taani dnt call her as bhabhi she is nt ur bhabhi k

Taani: bhai pls accept tat u love bhabhi she really loves u bhai

Swayam: taani pls I  dnt  want 2 talk abt tis so cum we shall leave 2 home

Taani: no bhai

Swayam: wht?

Taani: yes  she is my bhabhi I vil call her as bhabhi


Taani: yes nd u no wht bhai I m gng 2 stay in bhabhi's home do whtever u  can

Swayam: taani no

Taani: yes I m gng 2

Swayam: k so is tat final decision


Swayam: k now listen tis as my best frnd came here after so many days she vil stay in  my home

Taani: k fine  go ahead


Swayam thought taani will dnt allow kria bcoz of some kriyaansh past she dnt like kria bt tis was nt expected by swayam

Taani moves forward 2 kria

Taani: kria u stay wid bhai in our home bt pls there is a request

Every1 were confused   nd looked at them

Kria: ya taani

Kria was impressed by taani wid her simple looks nd sweet talks, nd caring nature so she  was so frndly towards her

Taani: u can stay in tat home bt pls except my room u shall take any other room

Rey looked at taani

Swayam: y?

Taani: its my room I have equal rights in tat home I vil cum there when ever I want (wid an fake angry glare 2 swayam). Pls kria  bcoz I love that room for some reasons


Rey smirked on taani's sentence bcoz he no tat taani cnt forget their memories in tat room


Kria: ya sure taani

Taani:thank u

Kria:its k

Taani: and one more thing bhai

Swayam: wht?

Taani: wen u accept tat u love bhabhi after tat only I vil cum 2 our home

Sharon: taani pls dnt want tis

Taani: no bhabhi pls be quite

Swayam: oh it vil never happen

Taani: lets c

Swayam:ya lets c


Nil:guys whts gng on between taani nd swayam I dnt understand

Rey: dude its gng 2 be more fun nd masti now (wid his killer smile)


Rey: (in mind) taani I no u still love me. Now u r trying 2 bring swayam Sharon together in tat time I vil make u feel tat u love me nd vil make u 2 accept tat u love. So get ready sweet heart




                             Taani in sharon's home nd kria in swayam's home. Taani kria convo nd taani's first step 2 bring swaron together

 Hit like nd comment nd if it is nt nice ur slippers r welcome

Guys one more thing if tis story is nice pls say some of ur swaron frnds also 2 read tis 

Edited by poorni_vishali - 06 January 2014 at 11:51am

The following 101 member(s) liked the above post:


sumana.shesha IF-Dazzler

Joined: 26 May 2013
Posts: 3895

Posted: 06 January 2014 at 11:25am | IP Logged
Awesome :)
Great beginning to an excellent story :)
Loved it :)
Update soon ...
PM me...

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:


Cupcake. IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 10 December 2013
Posts: 15381

Posted: 06 January 2014 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Awesome update poorni...taani back in her simplicity...taayum amd taarey convo was superb
taarey still love each other
update next part soon

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


BeingFoodie. IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 13 August 2012
Posts: 22686

Posted: 06 January 2014 at 11:29am | IP Logged
awesome update...loved it...taasha besties...lovely...

taani on mission swaron ...rey will bring her back in his life...yaayyy...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


akki_taarey Groupbie

Joined: 17 May 2013
Posts: 130

Posted: 06 January 2014 at 11:31am | IP Logged
its awesome.. but please update soon... 

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


..Deepkriti.. IF-Rockerz

Joined: 10 May 2013
Posts: 5845

Posted: 06 January 2014 at 11:32am | IP Logged
that's a very nice update!!! I loved itBig smile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


princess_tara IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 03 October 2013
Posts: 11171

Posted: 06 January 2014 at 11:32am | IP Logged
awesome update

luv taani's attitude
taani trying to bring swaron together interesting

update it soon Smile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


poorni_vishali IF-Dazzler

Joined: 10 June 2013
Posts: 2942

Posted: 06 January 2014 at 11:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sumana.shesha

Awesome :)
Great beginning to an excellent story :)
Loved it :)
Update soon ...
PM me...

Thank u so much 4 readingSmile

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
Taarey fanfiction index .## my taarey corner ##.

2 3 4

Author: taani.priya1997   Replies: 29   Views: 28220

taani.priya1997 29 28220 07 February 2015 at 3:50am by princess1926
taarey ss:- taarey made for each other

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 23 24

Author: sangee_manan   Replies: 186   Views: 101016

sangee_manan 186 101016 31 January 2015 at 7:43am by Jasmine_ash

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 12 13

Author: Taarey_Manan   Replies: 97   Views: 45867

Taarey_Manan 97 45867 30 July 2014 at 9:31am by nishi_taarey
taarey and haunted house-TAAREY OS

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 10 11

Author: --taareylove---   Replies: 83   Views: 26121

--taareylove--- 83 26121 20 May 2014 at 2:53am by -AnyDestiny-

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 48 49

Author: ...Jannat...   Replies: 391   Views: 90892

...Jannat... 391 90892 11 April 2014 at 10:07am by divzcool

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index